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Sat, 2013-10-19 05:48
Inanimate
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Pacattack: Well obviously you'd shift it to produce and keep red mana. The ability works best with mana rituals, which is red's territory. And green doesn't get dragons nor flying, so...

Inscriminate =/= random

Sulfur Fire Elf: I like the ideas behind this, but it feels a bit scatter-brained at the moment. Some refinement would do wonders for the design.

Blistering Flamekin Red mana symbolRed mana symbol
Creature - Elemental Warrior Uncommon
Whenever Blistering Elemental attacks, it deals 1 damage to defending player.
When Blistering Flamekin blocks or becomes blocked by a creature, it deals 1 damage to that creature.
2/1
The heat of a flamekin's body can radiate for meters around it, and can reach temperatures capable of melting solid metal into slag.

Returning: At least two triggered abilities
New: From the stars, it fell...

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Sun, 2013-10-20 12:04
Pacattack25

Ok admittedly there are exactly 6 exceptions to the rule green dragon with flying isn't also red... but sometimes it's the exception that proves the rule-also green mana doesn't empty except during end phase is more or less taken from omnath lord of all things green...

Blistering Flamekin Challenge was edited noted: 10/10

The Master Sword 5 mana symbol
Legendary Artifact - Equipment M Mana for MTG Extra
Equipped creature has doublestrike. Double the damage dealt by equipped creature.
Edit: due to controversy about this not having an equip cost even though that was one of the balancing things... Equip 7 mana symbol
From the stars, it fell The sword with the power to hold back evil from the land.

Returning: From the stars it fell...
New: Pick one-Legend of Zelda themed / Is from Kamigawa set of if is at least rare it is legendary...

Sat, 2013-10-19 19:39
Inanimate
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Pacattack: Omnath and Upwelling don't let mana empty at all, letting you build up mana over turns. But letting mana linger until your end-phase is pretty much only useful with rituals, which are entirely a red thing. And, again, the original challenge said "indiscriminate damage", not "damage at random" - I was following the original challenge, not the edited version by master creator.

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Sun, 2013-10-20 03:13
master creator
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The Master Sword: that is insane then I realized it doesn't do anything as it can't be equipped without external help 0/10 until fixed Edit: if it is part of te design then it is quite strange and hard to use and as far as I know not being able to equip on its own locks it into white only which is annoying enough without Quadra-Damage 7/10

Mikio, Kami of Falling Stars 3 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Legendary Creature-Spirit Red mana symbol
Tap symbol: ~ deals 3 damage to three target creatures chosen at random
2/2
when the war began he fell first then the stars followed after

Returning:Pick one-Legend of Zelda themed / Is from Kamigawa set of if is at least rare it is legendary...
New: mythic rare

Also sorry shouldn't have put at there I was just using a simpler term

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Sun, 2013-10-20 03:03
Inanimate
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MC: The fact it can't be equipped without outside help is the point. I personally found it very clever. (:

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Sun, 2013-10-20 03:14
master creator
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Yes but mechanical it doesn't seem to fit as an equipment without equip feels wrong

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Sun, 2013-10-20 09:04
Neottolemo
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I don't understand the alternate challange. Is "of" supposed to be "or" or what?

Sun, 2013-10-20 10:05
Inanimate
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I'm thinking it's a second, typo'd "if".

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Sun, 2013-10-20 10:31
Neottolemo
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Mikio: That's a weird card, its power level seems variable but not too high. It has good flavor and it's kind of simple, so I'd give it 9/10

Torei, Kami of the Scarred Plains White mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Spirit Mythic Rare
Flash
Sweep - When Torei, Kami of the Scarred Plains enters the battlefield, return any number of Plains you control to their owner's hand. For each Plains returned this way, the next 1 damage that a source of your choice would deal to you and/or creatures you control this turn is dealt to target creature or player instead.
One of the few who dared to oppose the Spirit Wars, that would have brought great suffering to the plains and the plains-dwellers of Utsushiyo, was killed for his foolishness and emotivity by the rest of the Kami.
2/2

Returning: mythic rare
New: instant that costs 1 mana symbolBlue mana symbol

Sun, 2013-10-20 22:53
CyrusLevy
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Up: We-heh-heh-ell. I...I don't know if I can honestly rate this but it seems legit. 9/10

Abandon Mind 1 mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Instant M Mana for MTG Extra
Exile all cards from target player's hand. At the beginning of that player's next end step, they may return the exiled cards to their hand.
"No, no, my thoughts, my ideas, my children, where are you going?"

Old: Instant that costs 1 mana symbolBlue mana symbol
New: Your card cares whether or not it is at the bottom of your library. Alternatively, it can be in your opponent's hand. Not literally, more in the Nightveil Specter fashion.

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

Spoiler:

Sun, 2013-10-20 23:33
Andronean I
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I assume you mean in official MTG.

Angel of Kleos 5 mana symbolWhite mana symbolRed mana symbol

Creature-Angel Warrior Red mana symbol
Flying, trample, lifelink
Heroic--Whenever you cast a spell that targets Angel of Kleos, put four +1/+1 counters on Angel of Kleos, then Angel of Kleos deals three damage to up to three target creatures and/or player.
Kleos, the Therian concept of Battle-glory, is one of the fundamental parts of Akroan magic.

Does it bug you that there aren't angels or goblins in Theros? Me too.

Returning: Uses a new ability-word or keyword-action.
New: Is a colorless, nonartifact creature.

Edit: Sorry, I was looking at an earlier page. oh well.

White mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbolRed mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Beneath the Tangle, the wurm tunnels stretch . . . wide as a stone's throw, long as forever, deep as you dare.
White mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbolRed mana symbolGreen mana symbol

Mon, 2013-10-21 00:18
CyrusLevy
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Well, edit it to be in response to the right challenge.

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

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Mon, 2013-10-21 00:25
Pacattack25

Abandon Mind-Should be during their next upkeep, you can make them skip those... 9/10
Angel of Kleos- I would rate this... but I don't know what page you got those off of.

Your card doesn't care if it is at bottom of library? TIME TO GO TO UN!

The Chicken yet to come 1 mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Creature - chicken Red mana symbol
0 mana symbol: Put this creature from the field at the bottom of your library.
1 mana symbolBlue mana symbol, Reveal ~ from the bottom of your library: return target permanent to it's owner's hand. Then shuffle your library.
(1/2)/(1/2)

Returning: Does not care whether or not it is at the bottom of your library. (AKA: Un)
New: isn't a creature.

Mon, 2013-10-21 02:12
AngelofDawn
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The Chicken Yet To Come: This card makes sense! Well, sort of. I like the idea. Also I like chickens, but that may or may not be irrelevant.

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To Peek, Or Not To Peek 2 mana symbolBlue mana symbol

Enchantment Rare

At the beginning of your upkeep, if this card is in your library (You don't have to prove this) you may look at a random card in your library. If you do, shuffle your library and put that card on top of it. Lose 2 life.
Pay 6 and 1/2 life: Look at target player's library. Any player may activate this ability.

"Pah! Who looks at a player's hands these days?"

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Returning: Not a Creature
New: Involves the exile zone. JUST EXILING SOMETHING DOESN'T COUNT!


I have a big blade and I cannot lie.

Mon, 2013-10-21 03:05
CyrusLevy
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Up: I am unable to rate that.

From Beyond 1 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Enchantment Red mana symbol
You may spend mana as though it were mana of any color to cast spells from exile.

Old: Involves the exile zone, just exiling doesn't count.
New: Bill Nye the Science Guy

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

Spoiler:

Tue, 2013-10-22 00:37
Pacattack25

So good commander card... except it can only be used with blue commanders if they would make this they would at least make it colorless (and cost about 4 more) so that blue doesn't become the commander color due to this card... 3/10

Biiiiiiiillllll Niiiiiiieeee the Science Guy 3 mana symbolWhite mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Human Scientist M Mana for MTG Extra
While ~ is on the field you may cast spells from your exile as if though they were in your hand. Spells cast this way cost 1 mana symbol less to cast and are exiled at the end of the turn.
Whenever you cast a spell from exile any player may chose to discard a card if no player does they must listen to a speech on how you were scientifically able to cast that spell (which should last at least 5 minutes but no more than 10.)
2/2
Black holes are when large masses come into a tiny little spot, like... (60 minutes latter) and that's how plants evolved

Returning: BILL BILL BILL BILL!
New: Is blue.

Tue, 2013-10-22 16:19
Heads vs Tails
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The first ability should be worded better: "You may cast spells from exile". Then the next ability makes those spells cheaper and exiles them again, which makes him completely broken. It's not until the last ability does someone understand that it is an un-card, which doesn't seem as fun to me 2.5/10

Long Winded Explanation 1 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Sorcery Red mana symbol
Name a card. Exile cards from the top of your library until the named card is exiled. If at least ten cards are exiled this way take an extra turn after this one.

Returning: Blue mana symbol
New: Multicolored basilisk creature.

Current Set:
Dabriohm: an equipment & threshold set. http://magicseteditor.sourceforge.net/node/8723

Tue, 2013-10-22 22:52
Pacattack25

That was kinda THE POINT... he never shuts up

Thu, 2013-10-24 02:00
Bobthe6th

Huh... that is interesting. This plus labratory maniac plus a way to put a creature on the bottom of your deck plus a deck full of single copy creatures... Game. At the same time, its a really fragile combo. Outside of that, I don't see the point. Exile a chunk of your deck to gamble on an extra turn. Either way you lose a lot.

Modified Basilisk Blue mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Creature-Mutant Basilisk Uncommon
Evolve, Deathtouch.
0/2

Returning: Multicolored Basilisk creature.
New: Specter tribal.

Thu, 2013-10-24 20:24
Neottolemo
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Modified Basilisk: Eh. I guess it works, but it's not that synergic with itself. 6.5/10

Horrid Gaze 2 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Tribal Sorcery - Basilisk Specter Uncommon
Kicker 2 mana symbolRed mana symbol
Target player discards a card at random. If you paid the kicker cost, creatures that player controls can't block this turn.

Returning: Specter tribal.
New: Legendary

Fri, 2013-10-25 00:17
Lordpat
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It is not really multicolored, but it is pretty ok. The second ability is pretty underwhelming and not that synergistic, something that kicker is pretty often used for. It is a nice filler card, though I think it could have been through as a common. 8/10

Gallery of Risoku Blue mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Legendary Enchantment - Specter Tribal M Mana for MTG Extra
When ~ enters the battlefield, put a 1/1 unblockable blue and black Specter token onto the battlefield under your control.
Whenever a Specter deals combat damage to an opponent, put a spy counter on ~.
Remove seven spy counters from ~: transform ~.

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Risoku, the Mastermind
(Blue/black mana symbol) Legendary Creature - Specter M Mana for MTG Extra
Flying.
Opponents play with their hands and the top cards of their libraries revealed.
Whenever ~ deals combat damage to an opponent, you may have that player discard a card and/or put the top card of his or her library into his or her graveyard.
Whenever ~ would die, instead put three spy counters on it, then transform it.
6/6

Returning: Legendary
New: A dragon!

"[Kids] don't remember what you try to teach them. They remember what you are."
~Jim Henson

Fri, 2013-10-25 00:21
CoreyImperia
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Gallery of Risoku/Risoku, the Mastermind: Hm. This one confuses me a bit. I like, and it's very good, but it does take 13 turns to transform it without proliferate. The first side feels blue, but the second feels mostly black. Also, I don't really see Spectres as sentient, which makes me wonder why he'd have a gallery and be a mastermind.

All in all, it's a nice card and I do quite like it, but it feels very complex, and there are some wording errors ("can't be blocked" not "unblockable" in modern wording for example). 7/10.


Azrathu, Valkas Overlord 4 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Dragon Mythic Rare
Flying, haste
Mountains you control are 4/4 red Dragon creatures with flying and haste. They're still lands.
Whenever Azrathu, Valkas Overlord attacks, it deals damage to target creature equal to the number of Dragons you control. Then, put a 4/4 red Dragon creature token with flying and haste onto the battlefield.
5/5


Returning Challenge: Your card is a Dragon.
New Challange: Your card is Common or Uncommon.

Fri, 2013-10-25 00:50
Bobthe6th

Gah.... Just... Gah... That thing will murder people. Yes, you arn't doing it as it hits the field... but that will just crush people without a field sweeper. If you cheat it into play... suddenly you can kill people with a surprise dragon.

Supprise Dragon 2 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Creature-Dragon Uncommon
Flash, Flying
Red mana symbol:~ gets +1/+0 until end of turn.
3/3

Returning: Common or Uncommon
Returning: Sunburst.

Fri, 2013-10-25 01:52
Pacattack25

OP for 4 mana- also red typically doesn't get flash... 5/10

Color Coded rock of creation 5 mana symbol
Artifact Blue mana symbol
Sunburst- When this enters the battle field it gets a code counter for each different color mana spent to cast it. Counters can not be put on this permanent except by it's own effect.
When you cast ~ during your next upkeep choose colors equal to the number of code counters on this, this becomes those colors (this effect lasts indefinitely)
Tap symbol Add 2 mana of any of this permanent's colors to your mana pool.

Returning: Sunburst
New: You get 5 bonus points for sunburst planswalker... planswalker/sorcery.

Fri, 2013-10-25 03:22
master creator
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Color coded rock of creation: first of all needs a shorter name second too complex for uncommon third memory issues, it should probably say, "at the beginning of your upkeep chose X colors, where X is the number of code counters on ~. ~ becomes those colors unto the beginning of you next upkeep"

Zifr of the Suns 5 mana symbol
Planeswalker-Zifr M Mana for MTG Extra
Sunburst-~ enters the battlefield with a loyalty counter on it for each color of mana used to cast it
-2 Loyalty draw two cards
-3 Loyalty exile target non-land, non-creature permanent
-5 Loyaltyexile each colorless permanent, then return ~ from exile to your hand
0 mana symbol

Returning: planeswalker or sorcery
Next: Phobophobic! Your card fears fear! (Interpret as you wil)

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Fri, 2013-10-25 11:45
Neottolemo
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Zifr: Doesn't seem too impressive, but maybe it's just me. I think it should probably cost 4 mana symbol and have its last ability at -4 Loyalty.

Chain Panic Red mana symbol
Sorcery Common
If at least another creature can't block this turn, creatures can't block.
Forecast - Red mana symbolRed mana symbol, Reveal Chain Panic from your hand: Target creature can't block this turn. (Activate this ability only during your upkeep and only once each turn.)

Returning: Phobophobic! Your card fears fear!
Next: Creature or land.

Fri, 2013-10-25 14:00
Pacattack25

Chain Panic-no buyback cost A sad 'frowny' also the original cost should be upped by 1-2 as things with forecast are overcosted to make people want to pay forecast... 8/10

Winston Churchill 3 mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Human Red mana symbol
Creatures you control have this creature can block creatures with intimate or fear as if though it was an artifact.
Creatures you control have "Tap symbol: this creature deals damage equal to it's power to target attacking creature, that creature deals damage equal to it's power to this creature, the targeted creature is then removed from combat"
3/3
The only thing we have to fear...

Take that your creatures can't block properly decks... (ie: unblockable, your creatures can't block, odin etc...)

Returning: Creature or land
New: Is/becomes a 3/3.

Fri, 2013-10-25 17:31
CyrusLevy
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Up: The first ability should read "as though they didn't have those abilities" and the second should be "This creature fights target attacking creature, then remove the targeted creature from combat." Also, I don't think he's so good. 6/10

Shambler Hulk Green mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Creature - Beast Blue mana symbol
Shambler Hulk enters the battlefield tapped.
3/3

Old: Is/becomes a 3/3
New: Innovation! Your card is one of these people.
Archimdedes
Thomas Edison
Nikola Tesla
Robert Goddard

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

Spoiler:

Fri, 2013-10-25 17:45
grishnax
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This is basically a worse version of Kalonian Tusker. You could possibly put it at Common level, although it would be a decently powerful common.

Tesla, the Inventor 3 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Legendary Creature — Human Spellshaper Rare
Tap symbol, Discard a card: Put an artifact token named Tesla Coil with “Tap symbol: Tesla Coil deals 1 damage to target creature.” onto the battlefield.
When Tesla, the Inventor leaves the battlefield, sacrifice all artifacts named Tesla Coil.
3/3

OLD: Innovation! Your card is one of these people.
Archimdedes
Thomas Edison
Nikola Tesla
Robert Goddard
NEW: Your card isn't Blue mana symbol.

Sat, 2013-10-26 16:13
Neottolemo
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I like The Inventor, a really cool and fitting ability. Maybe it could cost 1 mana symbol less though.

Archimedes 2 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Human Spellshaper Rare
2 mana symbolWhite mana symbol, Discard two cards: Put an artifact token named Colossal Magnifying Glass with "Sacrifice this: Destroy target attacking creature" onto the battlefield.
1 mana symbolBlue mana symbol: Put an artifact token named Lever with "Sacrifice this: Return target artifact, enchantment, or land to its owner's hand" onto the battlefield.
3/3

Returning: Non-Blue mana symbol
Next: Hybrid and legendary

Sat, 2013-10-26 17:18
CyrusLevy
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Up: My two favorite Archimedes quotes. Nicely done.

The Sacred Law 1 mana symbolWhite/blue mana symbolWhite/blue mana symbol
Legendary Enchantment Blue mana symbol
White/blue mana symbol: Tap target creature. It doesn't untap during its controller's next untap step.

Returning: Hybrid and legendary
New: Philosophy! Must be one of these people

Socrates
Aristotle
Descartes
Nietzche

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

Spoiler:

Sat, 2013-10-26 20:42
grishnax
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Just to let you know, your card is Blue mana symbol, which means that you didn't follow the challenge. Even being part-Blue mana symbol is still being Blue mana symbol. Also, as a personal note, I feel like doing historic figures is pretty limiting and, in most cases, will make people have to research the people that they are making cards of.

Sat, 2013-10-26 20:50
CyrusLevy
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Right, right. New thingy.

The Savagery Boon of Ages Gone 1 mana symbolRed/green mana symbolRed/green mana symbol
Legendary Enchantment Red mana symbol
Red/green mana symbol: Target creature gets +2/+1 and gains haste until end of turn.

Returning: Hybrid and legendary
New: HAL 9000 or alternatively a card with the subtype "Fruit"

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

Spoiler:

Tue, 2013-10-29 18:45
Pacattack25

Dat name... makes no sense, good effect though 9/10
HAL 9000 3 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlue/black mana symbol
Legendary artifact-creature M Mana for MTG Extra
Whenever ~ becomes the target of a spell or an ability for the first time during a turn, the spell or ability becomes "This card's controller puts the top 4 cards of their library into their graveyard, then sacrifice a creature."
4/4
I can't let you do that Dave

Returning: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HAL_9000 or subtype fruit
New: UN-SET!

Tue, 2013-10-29 17:44
CyrusLevy
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Up: Out of color. The ability is blue and black, but since the cost has hybrid mana the card needs to be able to be either blue or black.

The Hungriest Apple 3 mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Creature - Fruit Red mana symbol
The Hungriest Apple is indestructible.
Whenever a creature blocks or is blocked by The Hungriest Apple, you may put a piece of food on it.
Eat all the food on The Hungriest Apple: You gain X life, where X is the number of pieces of food on The Hungriest Apple.
0/1

Old: Un-set
New: Ten keywords, you are allowed to make up two.

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

Spoiler:

Tue, 2013-10-29 18:45
Pacattack25

Oh... I see... ok fixed.

Wed, 2013-10-30 13:40
Neottolemo
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Yeah, but, you can cast it in mono blue and in mono black. Blue doesn't edict, etc.
The Hungriest Apple: I've got to say I never liked piece-of-food cards...

Straightforward* Counterspell 2 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Instant Rare
Kicker 2 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Counter target spell unless its controller sacrifices a creature with super haste or exiles a card with Gotcha from his or her graveyard. If Straightforward* Counterspell was kicked, exile that spell instead, then all cards in all libraries in each game you can see from your seat lose transfigure and forecast until end of turn, then end the turn.
Creatures lose art rampage until end of turn. Phase out all tokens with banding.
Cycling 1 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol, flashback 4 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol, madness Blue mana symbolBlue mana symbol

Returning: References ten or more keywords
New: Creature

Wed, 2013-10-30 14:42
BolasDragon
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Straightforward* Counterspell: Personally I wouldn't play it, even in an un- set, but you did follow the challenge. 8/10, 9/10 if you can get a good piece of FT to explain the *.

Abbadon, Bane of Angels 6 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Legendary Creature-Demon M Mana for MTG Extra
Reach, deathtouch, indestructible, intimidate.
Creatures lose flying, vigilance, trample, first strike, haste, and protection.
7/7

Old: Creature
New:Halloween themed.

"Think of how stupid the average person is, and realize half of them are stupider than that." George Carlin
"The more I learn about people, the more I like my dog." Mark Twain

Wed, 2013-10-30 14:54
Neottolemo
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The flavor text was *Not granted to fit your personal idea of straightforward. I cut it off to make space for rules text...

Wed, 2013-10-30 15:05
BolasDragon
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It's unhinged, you don't need to make room for rules text, it'll find a way to fit.

"Think of how stupid the average person is, and realize half of them are stupider than that." George Carlin
"The more I learn about people, the more I like my dog." Mark Twain

Wed, 2013-10-30 16:48
CyrusLevy
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Up: Ehm.........OP?

Trick Blue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Instant Blue mana symbol
Counter target spell if a spell was cast this turn that shares a color with it.
"You've fallen into my trap!"

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Treat 1 mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Sorcery Blue mana symbol
Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature you control. You gain life equal to its toughness.
"Who's a good hound? You are!"

Old: Halloween themed
New: Scratch your eyes out. IN A CARD!!!!

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

Spoiler:

Wed, 2013-10-30 18:22
master creator
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@Cyrus: your card isn't a creature...

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Thu, 2013-10-31 18:11
Pacattack25

Trick/Treat - not a creature... also counter target spell if something cast earlier is same color is bad 3/10

Not sure what Scratch your eyes out in a card means, but I need to move this game forward so I'm making this make the card do as many things wrong as possible without becoming un.
Jack-O-Lantern 2 mana symbolRed mana symbolBlack mana symbol (running sin counter 2... even Halloween themed 2 you'll see why later)
Artifact - Creature Pumpkin Colorless mana symbol (running sin counter 5)
When ~ is flipped face-up untap target attacking creature, it does no combat damage this turn. (sin counter 7, wording issues)
Morph 0 mana symbol (sin counter 8.)
You can flip this card face-down whenever an opponent's creature attacks (sin counter finish: sideways 8.)
2/2

Old: Scratch your eyes out.
New: Is green.

Thu, 2013-10-31 18:12
Neottolemo
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Jack-O-Lantern: Uh, uhm, so this is a white card that is templated weirdly and casts for red and black mana? I guess this might fit the challange...

Bloodeye Anurid Green mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Creature - Frog Beast Common
1 mana symbolBlue mana symbol: Target creature gets -3/-0 and loses flying until end of turn. Bloodeye Anurid deals 1 damage to itself.
This curious Anurid subspecies spits blood from its eyes to blind the prey.
2/3

I believe there are some toads that can do that or something similar.

Returning: is green
New: Mythic Rare with cmc 2

Thu, 2013-10-31 19:39
Pacattack25

note fact I added 2 to sin counter for being rb... yah I was trying to make your eyes burn by even looking at the thing...

Thu, 2013-10-31 20:20
williamgp99
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Above: Spits blood from its eyes? Nice! The only issue I have is with the Blue mana symbol in the ability. It seems kind of odd, even considering Simic. Green mana symbol or 2 mana symbol might be better.

Wildshape Druid Green mana symbol Green mana symbol
Creature- Human Druid Mythic Rare
Whenever another green creature enters the battlefield, put a +1/+1 counter on ~.
When ~ has three or more +1/+1 counter on it, it becomes a 4/4 Beast with trample and hexproof and loses all other abilities. (It keeps the +1/+1 counters)
1/1

Old: Is green.
New: Has deathtouch in a flavorful way.

Hey.

Thu, 2013-10-31 22:23
Pacattack25

Old actually is cmc 2... also this needs to cost more than GG 7/7 for 2 in turn 4... no, also legendary... 2/10

Pointy Finger of Death... wait sorry Death 1 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Legendary Creature- Elemental Incarnation Red mana symbol
First Strike, Deathtouch.
1/1
It only needs to touch you to kill you

Old: Has deathtouch flavorfully
New: Subtype djinn. (Genie for those who don't know what a djinn is)

Fri, 2013-11-01 09:28
Neottolemo
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PFoDwsD: Doesn't fit the challange because it isn't green. Also, overpowered.

Bloodbrewer Efreet 3 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Creature - Djinn Uncommon
Deathtouch, defender
3 mana symbolBlack mana symbol, Sacrifice another creature: CARDNAME deals 1 damage to target creature.
"The ingredients you need to give me are... pricy, but it will be surely worth it."
1/4

Returning: Djinn
New: Group-hug effect

Fri, 2013-11-01 14:37
Pacattack25

The old challenge should have been cmc 2... he put in the wrong old challenge

Fri, 2013-11-01 14:41
CyrusLevy
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Up: Hello and welcome to monoblack sac deck town!

Generous Knower 2 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Creature - Djinn Blue mana symbol
Flying
Blue mana symbol, Tap symbol: Each player draws a card.
2/3

Old: Group-hug effect
New: Bear-hug effect

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

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