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Thu, 2013-08-15 21:03
marioware2
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For the record, "rm *" is a command-line prompt; "rm" removes the file specified, and * is a catch-all that specifies every file in the directory.

Fri, 2013-08-16 13:26
Lordpat
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I loled. Hilarious card, and pretty interesting as well. Flavourful, funny and completely Un set, what more can you expect?

HEIL HYDRA! 3 mana symbolRed mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Sorcery M Mana for MTG Extra
Target player flips a coin. He or she says "Hail" or "Hydra" and then flips a coin. If it heads and he did not say Hydra or if it Tails and he did not say "Hail", that player loses 8 life, can't cast spells or activate abilities from Soup permanents until the beginning of your next upkeep. Otherwise, that player puts three 1/1 Nazi soldiers with haste and deathtouch under his or her control and a 5/5 red and black Nazi soldier token called "Fourth Reich" with haste and deathtouch.
Overload Red mana symbolBlack mana symbol.
Politics are fun!

Ret: Heil Hydra!
New: Has flying.

EDIT: Fixed it so it makes sense... I guess

"[Kids] don't remember what you try to teach them. They remember what you are."
~Jim Henson

Fri, 2013-08-16 02:35
AngelofDawn
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Ummm... what?


I have a big blade and I cannot lie.

Fri, 2013-08-16 03:38
Bobthe6th

Hmm... that... is very ill defined. Also a bit of a direct reference. Prison needs to be described, or just "no spell casting until end of turn." Also firststrike+deathtouch is obscenely nasty. Heck the last part seems just moving past reference.
Hydra, the enemy of captain america, under Redskull.

Sat, 2013-10-05 01:20
Inanimate
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Reviving this.

Rating: Way too many references and card text crammed into one design. Simply put - this is trying too hard to be funny, and too hard to be a card.

Gemcore Hydra X mana symbolBlue mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Creature - Hydra Mutant Rare
Gemcore Hydra enters the battlefield with X +1/+1 counters on it.
Creatures you control with +1/+1 counters on them have flying and trample.
0/0
"The pinnacle of natural crystallogenetics, it is the epitome of evolution." - Rarsk, Simic scientist

Returning: Has flying
New: Is a colorless artifact.

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Sat, 2013-10-05 01:30
Bobthe6th

That is a very nice hydra. I fear the flying might be a bit much... as this seems redy made for a hydra tribal deck, or any flying based deck. Then again it is 2 p/t behind the curve.

Wind-up Dragon 3 mana symbol
Artifact
X mana symbol:Until end of turn, Wind-Up Dragon is a X/X Construct creature with "2 mana symbol:Wind-up dragon gains flying until end of turn."

Returning: Is a colorless artifact.
New: Is related to the Eldrazi.

Sat, 2013-10-05 02:17
Pacattack25

Should make it a creature for longer and get weaker over time you wind it up and then it goes for a while not wind up for it to go for 5 seconds... but nice card 8/10

Eldrazi Sword 10 mana symbol
Legendary Artifact - Equipment M Mana for MTG Extra
When you cast ~ from your hand you may search your library for a card with converted mana cost 5 or less and put it into play.
Equipped creature has Annihilator 4.
Equip 5 mana symbol

Returning: Is related to the Eldrazi
New: References a video game/movie/tv show of your choice.

Sat, 2013-10-05 04:03
Inanimate
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I like the flavor of Wind-Up Dragon. Winding it up = X, and it winds down at end of turn. You don't need to capture all the details of a concept to get the flavor across, and I think Bob did a good job at getting the basics of a wind-up flavor. It needs a rarity, though, and it seems really good compared to Chimeric Staff.

Eldrazi Sword has a generic title, but is legendary - this needs a name associated with it. Also, why would the Eldrazi - incomprehensible inhuman monstrosities from the Blind Eternities - use a simple sword? Seems odd. Lastly, the correct term is "onto the battlefield" now, and it needs to specify "permanent" card. You can't put instants or sorceries onto the battlefield.

Referencing something, and involving the Eldrazi, is a bit difficult... but I'll try.

Squamous Drone 3 mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Creature - Eldrazi Drone Common
When Squamous Drone enters the battlefield, put two 0/1 colorless Eldrazi Spawn creature tokens onto the battlefield. They have "Sacrifice this creature: Add 1 mana symbol to your mana pool."
1/4
From beneath the depths arise the Eldrazi.

Referencing HP Lovecraft's penchant of using the word "squamous".

Returning: Reference
New: Has 0 power

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Sat, 2013-10-05 05:12
Bobthe6th

Cool, a drone in blue. No real issues... not a ton of tokens but blue isn't one of the colors that had them so I can see it not having as many.

Overly Affectionate Octopus 2 mana symbolBlue mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Creature-Octopus Uncommon
Tap symbol:Tap target creature. It doesn't untap during its controllers next untap step.
0/3
The hugs started out nice enough...

Returning: Has 0 Power.
New: Octopus.

Sat, 2013-10-05 05:23
WindyDelcarlo
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Seems like a hands of binding. Although, it does cost twice as much, so I don't think it's too powerful, as well as a majority of burn spells kill it.

Tentacles of the Skies 4 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Octopus Red mana symbol
Whenever an Octopus you control is dealt combat damage, return all creatures that dealt damage to that creature to their owner's hand.
0/6

I think it's weirdly worded...

Returning: Octopus
New: CMC 7

Sat, 2013-10-05 23:23
CyrusLevy
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Up: I don't really get this card, but I think it is balanced. 8/10

Stranglecup Octopus 4 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Creature - Octopus Red mana symbol
Whenever a creature deals damage to or is dealt damage by Stranglecup Octopus, tap that creature. It doesn't untap during it's controller's next untap step.
Blue mana symbol: Stranglecup Octopus gets -1/+1 until end of turn.
5/6

Returning: CMC 7
New: There is an online game called Hidden Dimensions and its similar to Magic. Make a card from that game in Magic.

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

Spoiler:

Sun, 2013-10-06 00:55
WindyDelcarlo
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I'm going to make duel decks based on this game now
I like that octopus. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing it on my side of the field Stick out your tongue

Thunder Mage 3 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Creature - Elemental M Mana for MTG Extra
Tap symbol: Deal 2 damage to each creature you don't control.
12/7

EDIT: Wait a moment, forgot some stuff

Returning: Make a card based on Hidden Dimensions
New: All 5 colors

Sun, 2013-10-06 02:43
CoreyImperia
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There are so many things that bug me about this card. It's really off color as blue doesn't really deal damage, I feel like 7 mana symbol for a 12/7 that can deal 2 damage via tapping is a little undercosted, even for a Mythic Rare.

Prismatic Generator 1 mana symbol
(Colorless mana symbol) Legendary Artifact Mythic Rare
Prismatic Generator enters the battlefield tapped.
Tap symbol: Add one mana of any color to your mana pool.
The most ancient of relics will hold the most valuable of secrets.

Note: I didn't know what color-identifier to use for this, so I assumed that Colorless mana symbol looked close enough. It's the color-identity equivalent to "This is all colors".

Returning Challenge: Your card is all five colors.
New Challenge: You card is not a creature.

Sun, 2013-10-06 02:52
Inanimate
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I think this needs a more epic sounding name, given that it is legendary - and that'd also handily justify why it's mythic. Lastly, as a Birds of Paradise available to every color... I think it's kinda good.

Transmogrify White mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbolRed mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Sorcery Rare
Exile target permanent. You may put a permanent card from your hand onto the battlefield.

Returning challenge: Not a creature
New challenge: Has a subtype

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Sun, 2013-10-06 02:59
CyrusLevy
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He can't make a more epic name, that's what the card is called in Hidden Dimensions.

Up: Well. This.....I....um. Wow. I guess for the mana... 9/10

Skullpile Trap 4 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Instant - Trap Blue mana symbol
If two or more creatures died this turn, you may pay Black mana symbolBlack mana symbol instead of Skullpile Trap's mana cost.
Target creature gets -13/-13 until end of turn.

Returning: Has a subtype.
New: Make an Orc or alternatively another Hidden Dimensions card.

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

Spoiler:

Sun, 2013-10-06 04:51
Bobthe6th

Hmm... see that is pretty harsh. Definitely a trap, but tragic slip seems a better model. Possibly 2 and two black...

Spark White/black mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Artifact Creature- Crystal
Flash.
Whenever a creature deals combat damage to this creature, destroy that creature and exile Spark.
1/1

Returning: Make an Orc or alternatively another Hidden Dimensions card.
New: White/black mana symbolBlue mana symbol

Sun, 2013-10-06 07:58
Neottolemo
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Spark: That looks kind of mono-Black mana symbol. Isn't that just a deathtouch card with flash?

Orcdrix 4 mana symbolWhite/black mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Creature - Rabbit Orc Rare
Sacrifice Orcdrix: Exile target creature. Draw cards equal to that creature's power.
"You do not want to mix a rabbit with a piranha. But above all, you do not want to mix a rabbit with an orc."
-Polymorpher Pledian

7/7

Returning: White/black mana symbolBlue mana symbol
New: Deals damage to more than one target at the same time.

Sun, 2013-10-06 12:27
Pacattack25

Orcdris: this seems pretty good, so I'm giving it a 9/10

White/black mana symbolBlue mana symbol damage spell??? which one of those 3 colors can do deal damage? which one of those 3 colors can damage MULTIPLE TARGETS??? This is not a good challenge... Now on the other hand loss of life I can do...

Blood Draining 3 mana symbolWhite/black mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Sorcery Red mana symbol
Up to 2 target players lose 3 life, you gain life equal to the life lost this way.
Draw a card.

Yah... I didn't know what to do with that...

Returning: Deals damage to more than one target at the same time.
New:Is red (your welcome...)

Sun, 2013-10-06 20:01
CoreyImperia
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Blood Draining: If we had a cleaner name, this would be a bit better. Then again, drawing is latently in black too. 7/10.

Coiling Inferno 3 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Instant Rare
Coiling Inferno deals 5 damage divided as you choose among any number of target creatures or players.
"I sure do love a good show." -- Chandra Nalaar

Edit: Made it Rare, because Flames of the Firebrand is Uncommon.

Returning Challenge: Your card is red.
New Challenge: Your card is a permanent.

Sun, 2013-10-06 20:16
CyrusLevy
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Up: Well that seems like good spell to me. 9/10

Magma Blob Red mana symbolRed mana symbol
Creature - Elemental Blue mana symbol
Red mana symbol, An untap symbol.: Magna Blob deals 1dmage to target creature or player.
2/1

Returning: Is a permanent.
New: Either a Curse or another Hidden Dinensions card.

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

Spoiler:

Sun, 2013-10-06 21:16
isaac the awesome
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It is interesting but only works well in a scenario lacking blockers. 8/10

Sun's Curse 2 mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Enchantment--Aura Curse Rare
Enchant player
Whenever enchanted player is dealt damage by a creature, you gain life equal to the amount of damage that creature dealt to enchanted player.

Notes: try this card with the Firedrinker Satyr or a Jackal Pup

Returning: Either a curse or another hidden dimension card.
New: uses hybrid mana. Get creative with this. It doesn't have to cost hybrid mana. You could have an ability.

Sun, 2013-10-06 21:22
Bobthe6th

Add power of fire... (2xrmana damage)+1 every turn. This could get very mean with a number of untap abuse tricks.

Negato 4 mana symbol
Artifact Creature- Human Thopter
Flying, Haste, Absorb 1.
2/2

Returning: Either a Curse or another Hidden Dinensions card.
New: Instant.

Sun, 2013-10-06 22:04
CoreyImperia
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Sun's Curse: Huh. This could do some nice combos. Counteracts the two examples you've given too. 9/10.

Negato: I believe you were ninja'd. Aside from this, it is a perfect representation of the card from the game. Though, it'd probably be Uncommon and needs to cost a little more considering its available to all colors (see Millennial Gargoyle). 6.5/10.


So, an Instant that uses hybrid mana from Hidden Dimesions? Sounds plausible.

Crystal Battery Black/red mana symbol
Instant Rare
Add five mana in any combination of Black mana symbol and/or Red mana symbol to your mana pool. Crystal Battery deals 3 damage to you.

Returning Challenge: Your card is an instant that uses hybrid mana.
New Challenge: Your card is Uncommon or Common.

Sun, 2013-10-06 22:16
Pacattack25

Crystal battery... OP! Ok-there's dark rit for 3, and The red one for 3 but one cmc does not add 5 to your mana pool can you say turn 1 Anowon, the Ruin Sage, Anthem of Rakdos, Target red/black or both liege, Battle Squadron and 688 other 5 cmc red black or colorless cards... ON TURN ONE 1/10.

Land Shield 4 mana symbolGreen/wite mana symbolGreen/wite mana symbol
Instant Blue mana symbol
Search your library for a basic land card and put it into play tapped.
Prevent the next 2 damage dealt to target creature or player.

Returning is Blue mana symbol or Colorless mana symbol
New: uses tri-colored mana in it (ie you may pay white black or blue for a single mana symbol).

Sun, 2013-10-06 22:37
CoreyImperia
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Eh, I guess it is. Should've been Mythic Rare, and five damage minimum, even before bumping the cost by Black/red mana symbol/1 mana symbol.

As for Land Shield, the name is a bit odd and it seems really over costed, Even 2 mana symbolGreen/wite mana symbolGreen/wite mana symbol would've been okay. That aside it should read "Search your library for a basic land card and put it onto the battlefield tapped. Then shuffle your library" in terms of modern wording. 8/10. I'd respond, but I believe we aren't allowed to respond to challenges immediately after our own.

Sun, 2013-10-06 23:38
isaac the awesome
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Seems overcosted. Otherwise it's good 7/10

Rogue Battlemage 1 mana symbol:wubmana:
Creature--Wizard Uncommon
When ~ enters the battlefield, if White mana symbol was spent to cast it, you gain 2 life.
When ~ enters the battlefield, if Blue mana symbol was spent to cast it, draw a card.
When ~ enters the battlefield, if Black mana symbol was spent to cast it, target player discards a card and loses 1 life. 2/1

Returning: uses tricolored mana.
New: flickers stuff.

Mon, 2013-10-07 04:02
CyrusLevy
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Up: It would have been better for the black part if it was just discard but the rest is good. 7/10

Ephemeral Mage :wubmana:
Creature - Human Wizard Red mana symbol
When Ephemeral Mage enters the battlefield, you may exile target creature you control and then return it to the battlefield under your control. If you do, exile Ephemeral Mage.
1/1

Returning: Flickers stuff.
New: Amnesia. Interpret that as you will.

Rakdos Shred-Freak plays Minecraft!

Spoiler:

Mon, 2013-10-07 04:13
Bobthe6th

Hmm... Seems workable. Though it is sorcery speed cloud shift in two new colors. This would work better as White/blue mana symbol or White mana symbol.

Amnesia 2 mana symbolWhite mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Sorcery Mythic Rare
Exile target creature, then return it to the battle field under your control.

Returning: Amnesia.
New: Fate Seal.

Mon, 2013-10-07 05:02
Inanimate
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Amnesia: Interesting. The flavor is a bit obfuscated, but I like it - they forget everything, so you convince them to work for you? Something along those lines. Nice job.

Consign to Oblivion 2 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Sorcery Common
Target player puts a card from their hand on top of their library. Then fateseal 2.
"If you have no concept of victory, then your only destiny can be defeat." - Ashiok

Returning: Fateseal
New: Sacrifices a creature

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Mon, 2013-10-07 05:38
master creator
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Consign to Oblivion: I quite like it makes me think of Perish the Thought a card I quite enjoy making it the opponents choice it is hard to decide as for power level with fateseal since it will either make them redraw a card the didn't want or get rid of a really good card I think its balanced well but not sure

Shared Fate 2 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
As an additional cost to cast ~ sacrifice a creature
Target opponent sacrifices a creature
Fateseal 2
"Just because my pawn shared your fate doesn't mean it was not directed by me"
-Hazid,Master of Fates

Returning sacrifices a creature
New: White mana symbolGreen mana symbolBlue mana symbol card

hey everone im back Big smile

Mon, 2013-10-07 05:48
ThisisSakon
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Holy glob Consign to Oblivion is a good card. I want one. No, two. No, all of them.

Well, ok, but that's a good card. I love it.

Palm Reader Blue mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Creature - Human Shaman Blue mana symbol
1 mana symbol, Sacrifice a creature: Fateseal 1. (Look at the top card of an opponent's library, then you may put that card on the bottom of that library.)
1/2

Returning: Sac a dude!
New: It sure is Left 4 Dead up in here. Show me a zombie card!

Ultra Ninja'd. Probably because I'm distracted playing L4D

Mon, 2013-10-07 13:40
isaac the awesome
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Looks like a ninja good card though. 10/10

Graven Predator 1 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Creature--Zombie Beast Uncommon
Sacrifice a creature: Return ~ from your graveyard to the battlefield. It gains haste until end of turn. 2/1

Returning: do a zombie
New: let's see some devotion

Mon, 2013-10-07 14:18
Pacattack25

Pretty bad-2/2 zombies aren't going to be saced for a 2/1 creature... this needs to be at least 3/2 to be playable.

And keep in mind-you did not specify devotion as in do something with mana symbols on your side of the field...
Devoted Death 2 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Creature - Zombie Cleric Blue mana symbol
1 mana symbolBlack mana symbolTap symbol: Put a devotion counter on ~ then target creature gets -X/-X until eot, where X is the number of devotion counters on ~.
2/2
I want your brains and your brains I shall get!

uhh... I had a massive edit due to fact I forgot zombie the first time u_u
Returning: Devotion
New: is an enchantment.

Mon, 2013-10-07 16:02
grishnax
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I think you went for the wrong kind of Devotion, since Devotion is now a keyword. Anyways, as for the card itself, it seems reasonable, but pretty powerful if you get it going. Pretty nice job overall, although it could be Rare.

Joined Healing White mana symbol
Enchantment Common
When Joined Healing enters or leaves the battlefield, gain life equal to your devotion to white.
Evoke 2 mana symbolWhite mana symbol (You may cast this spell for its evoke cost. If you do, it’s sacrificed when it enters the battlefield.)

Returning: Enchantment
New: Is legendary

Mon, 2013-10-07 16:10
Pacattack25

@grishnax you'll note that above my card I specifically stated "you did not specify devotion as in do something with mana symbols on your side of the field..." I knew what he wanted- I did that on purpose.

Mon, 2013-10-07 16:25
isaac the awesome
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Very nice use of evoke on an enchantment 10/10 maybe Uncommon

@ Pacattack: I wanted a card with the mechanic. That is ok though. You really could have used any type of counters.

Pharika, God of Balance 3 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Legendary Enchantment Creature--God Mythic Rare
Lifelink
As long as your devotion to black is less than 4 ~ isn't a creature.
Whenever you gain life, each opponent loss that much life. 6/3

Returning: is legendary
New: can become another permanent type. See Mutavault

Mon, 2013-10-07 16:15
Bobthe6th

That could get interesting. I like how the evoke cost being higher then the casting cost is entirely reasonable. Healing is weird and hard to cost. So this might be to much, but I don't think so.

The Great Seal White mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Legendary Enchantment Rare
Spirit, Devil, and Demon creatures can not attack.
If the total power of all Spirits, Devils, and Demons is ever greater then 10, destroy this enchantment.

Returning: Is Legendary.
New: Devil.

Mon, 2013-10-07 16:20
Lordpat
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Probably should be Blue mana symbol, since it can lead to pretty big lifegain. I really like the concept, and I think it is cleverly put together.

Safal, Toxic Tree 2 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbolGreen mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Legendary Enchantment Creature - Zombie Treefolk Red mana symbol
~ is indestructible.
Bestow 5 mana symbolGreen mana symbolBlack mana symbol.
As long as your devotion to green and black are both four or greater, ~ and the enchanted creature gain +3/-3 and trample.
4/4

Previous: Legendary
New: It is from Selesnya or Dimir.

EDIT: Ninja'd. Ignore this post please.

"[Kids] don't remember what you try to teach them. They remember what you are."
~Jim Henson

Mon, 2013-10-07 16:25
isaac the awesome
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What happend?

Mon, 2013-10-07 16:59
master creator
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Pharika: interesting this biggest problem I see with this is sanguine bond=insta win with 1 damage also every other God can't be a creature if you have four o then and mirror gallery so a little to strong at 4 mana but a cool card none the less great idea but you should try to take existing cards into consideration when balancing 8/10
The Great Seal: cool idea wording of the second ability needs a rework and should have a set time either upkeep or end step would be my sugestion but it is a cool idea 9/10
Safall: yet another cool idea and I like bestow but I don't like that it requires a devotion to two colors to both be 4 or greater to do anything as an enchantment it needs to do something before the devotion 5/10

I will follow all 4 challanges

Darik, Gargoyle Devil of Thought 4 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Legendary Creature-Gargoyle Devil Wizard M Mana for MTG Extra
Flying, Steal(whenever ~ deals combat damage to a player you may draw a card)
2 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbol ~ becomes an artifact and gains indestructible until end of turn
As long as ~ is an artifact it has Tap symbol Draw a card
3/3

Returning: a Selesnaya or Dimir Devil that can change super types
New: has extra value if playing commander/EDH

hey everone im back Big smile

Mon, 2013-10-07 17:09
Neottolemo
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Darik: Err... I guess this is fine? I think it could cost 1 mana symbol less though.

Richard Devilboon the XVI Blue mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Human Shaman Rogue Rare
3 mana symbol: Richard Devilboon the XVI becomes an artifact with "Tap symbol: Put a 1/1 red Devil creature token onto the battlefield" until end of turn. This ability can be activated from the command zone.
Devils you control have Steal.
1/1

Returning: has extra value if playing commander/EDH
New: Is red and costs 2 mana symbol or less.

Tue, 2013-10-08 01:06
Pacattack25

Richard Devilboon- so he has 3 mana symbolTap symbol put a 1/1 token into play from the command zone? Seems ok-But why does he have to be an artifact to do this from in play? It kinda doesn't make since... Also: what is Steal? For the moment: 8/10

Banisher's Fire Red mana symbolRed mana symbol
Instant Red mana symbol
Deal 4 damage to target creature. If that creature would go to exile this turn put it into the graveyard instead.
You know your hero that keeps on coming back? Gone.

Returning: Is red and costs 2 or less
New: Does not cost colored mana but states specifically in the card that it is a certain color(s)

Mon, 2013-10-07 23:51
Kyoril
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Heart of Fire 1 mana symbol
(Red mana symbol) Artifact Blue mana symbol
Tap symbol Add Red mana symbol to your mana pool. Heart of Fire deals 2 damage to target creature you control.

Tue, 2013-10-08 00:05
CoreyImperia
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Challenges, Kyoril? The returning and new? You also need to rate the card above you.

@Pacattack25: Steal (Whenever this creature deals combat damage to a player you may draw a card.) From master creator's Krieg set.

Tue, 2013-10-08 00:13
isaac the awesome
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Second ability doesn't work. Slightly underpowered. 7/10

Pact of Fire 1 mana symbol
Instant Rare
~ is red
~ deals 3 damage to target creature or player.
At the beginning of your next upkeep pay Red mana symbol. If you can't, you lose the game.

Returning: Does not cost colored mana but states specifically in the card that it is a certain color(s)
New: has a miracle cost.

Tue, 2013-10-08 01:16
Pacattack25

The idea was that when a general dies the owner has the choice of moving it to the commander zone-which technically is exile, so I'm pretty sure it does.
Pact of Fire-Pacts cost 0 then make you pay for it next turn, not 1 then hit you again for one... But other than that nice 9/10

Recurring Revelation
Instant Red mana symbol
(Cards without a mana cost can't be cast. ~ is Blue.)
Miracle Blue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Draw 5 cards.
Cycling 3 mana symbolBlue mana symbol: If you cycle this card you may reveal ~ then shuffle it into your library instead of discarding it.

Returning: Miracle
New: Suspend (I want to see what comes out of this)

Tue, 2013-10-08 01:31
CoreyImperia
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Recurring Revelation: This seems really complicated. In terms of modern wording, you can have the color indicator ((Blue mana symbol) in this case) beside the card type instead of "this is blue". It's interesting as you can only cast it for it's miracle cost or only cycle it, and I feel like the miracle cost is far too cheap considering it is an instant-speed draw, regardless of the fact it is a miracle cost, perhaps 1 mana symbol or 2 mana symbol more. It's innovative, but needs more work done to it. 5/10.

Reborn Anew 7 mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Sorcery Rare
You gain 20 life.
Miracle 3 mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Suspend 10--White mana symbol
If you cast Reborn Anew for its miracle cost or from exile with suspend, exile it as it resolves.

...I don't know how well I did that challenge...

Returning Challenge: You card uses suspend.
New Challenge: Your card is an uncommon creature.

Tue, 2013-10-08 01:42
isaac the awesome
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Woah! So you have 11 or 10 turns to deal 20 damage cool. There is an oddness with the varying costs. Overall a cool card 9/10

Eye opener 3 mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Creature--Wizard Uncommon
Suspend 4-- 1 mana symbolBlue mana symbol
When ~ enters the battlefield, if it entered the battlefield from exile! discard your hand then draw cards equal to the number of cards discarded this way.
~ can't be blocked 2/2

Returning: uncommon creature
New: has evoke

Tue, 2013-10-08 18:10
Neottolemo
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Eye Opener: Maybe it should be an Homunculus. Other than that, cool.

Bloodcall Warmonger 3 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Creature - Human Shaman Berserker Uncommon
When Bloodcall Warmonger enters the battlefield, creatures you control gain intimidate and haste until end of turn.
Evoke 1 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
4/3

Returning: has evoke
New: it can't attack

Tue, 2013-10-08 18:49
CoreyImperia
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Bloodcall Warmonger: Huh, that's really quite something. In the right hands, it'd finish a game. 8.5/10.

Stalemate Barricade 2 mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Creature - Wall Rare
Defender
When Stalemate Barricade enters the battlefield, tap all other creatures.
Evoke White mana symbolWhite mana symbol (You may cast this spell for its evoke cost. If you do, it's sacrificed when it enters the battlefield.)
0/10
"I don't think anything is going to get done at this rate." - Thune Loyalist

Returning Challenge: You card can't attack.
New Challenge: You card is black.