Matriarch's Tablet
Artifact , , Sacrifice ~: Target player sacrifices an artifact or creature. Memorial-- Whenever a creature dies, return ~ from the graveyard to it's owner's hand.
Can you keyword that?
Current Projects Secret Project Beta - Status Report: Blank slate! Still working on the base set. Veyril - an RTD RPG Adventure - Status Report: Prologue! Round 1 has begun!
Fri, 2011-07-01 23:00
Art_Freak
@Utheraptor: I normally don't comment on entries, but you're disqualifying yourself. Open the spoiler to see why.
Spoiler:
Do you see the problem? Keep in mind your entry has to fit on a card and be legible - and it's neither. The text overflows onto the frame, and it's too small to be comfortably read. I've only pointed out this fatal design error to you so that you might have the chance to correct your entry to one that is acceptable, and because according to contest rules other entrants may not comment on your design.
Sun, 2011-07-03 19:50
Cthulhupwn
Ancient Resonators
Artifact : Target creature deals damage equal to its power to target creature its owner controls.
Based on the hammer movie 5 Million Years to Earth.
Cthulhu eats YER MIND SOUL AND BRAIN.
He also makes for a kickbutt eldrazi deck.
Sun, 2011-07-03 22:33
kikushadowblades
Blade of the Brotherhood
Artifact - Equipment
Whenever a creature enters the battlefield under your control, put a charge counter on ~.
Equipped creature gets +1/+1 for each charge counter on ~.
Equip
Core of the Demon Heart
Artifact
When ~ enters the battlefield, target player loses 1 life.
Black spells cost less to cast.
Each cycle would cheapen costs and have a small effecttrip.
Thu, 2011-07-07 14:19
Anuttymous
Orb of Worlds
Artifact , , Sacrifice CARDNAME: Search your library for two land cards and put them onto the battlefield tapped. Then shuffle your library.
had an idea but was brownout of the water by the "no hybrid rule"......so that that was a waste of thought. so ill just deal with a revised version.
Oracle's Tower
Artifact Creature - Wall (rarity unsure)?
Affinity for Artifacts.
Defender, First Strike, Haste, Trample.
if was spent to play ~,~ loses Defender until end of turn.
If was spent to play ~, Flip a coin if heads all players draw a card, if tails all players put the top card of their library in to their grave yard.
8/8
hope ya like it!
EDIT: noticed an error in the mana cost but i fixed it
Spoiler:
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Thu, 2011-07-07 12:20
Picks-at-Flies
Memory Loop -
Artifact : Return a creature you control to its owner's hand. Put a charge counter on ~. , , Remove a charge counter from ~: draw a card.
Braid's Goggles
artifact
at the beginning of your upkeep you lose 3 life and each player sacrifices a permanent. , pay 2 life, sacrifice ~: target player sacrifices a permanent.
Thu, 2011-07-07 03:28
Darkerling
Based on the current entries (plus what's in the set) it looks like i'll be doing another red card.
what I made 1st, but decided not to do.
Spoiler:
((Red Mana Charging Orb))
Artifact :Put a charge counter on ~. :sacrifce ~. Memorial - When ~ is put into the graveyard from the battlefield, add to your mana pool for each charge counter on ~.
CARDNAME
Artifact
Sacrifce ~,: Add to your mana pool.
Simple, but red needs a few more early turn cards.
Thu, 2011-07-07 14:47
Art_Freak
This week's winners are: pitlady, Sewn-Eye, Disposable Hero, Utheraptor, Sohel, and kikushadowblades.
Images will go up soon, and the first post scoring will be updated at that time.
CURRENT CHALLENGE:
Quote:
[b]14th: planeswalker, 3 ability, monocolored, max CMC , & creature, companion to your planeswalker, same color as planeswalker, max CMC , (three planeswalkers and three companions, not necessarily the submitted pairings, will be selected (6 walkers would be too many for a single small set like this one))
This is the one I think a lot of people have been waiting for, but keep in mind it is not a one card challenge this week. Only complete entries will be considered. This means you must enter both a planeswalker and it's companion. The three walkers for the set are Kaylon (a knight motivated to the destruction of evil that leaders the Order), Braids (matriarch of the Cabal, formerly a minion as Braids, Cabal Minion, a master of dementia summoning), and Nicol Bolas (monocolored, and we all know who he is.) Pick one and submit your take on them and submit a companion for them. 3 walkers and 3 companions will be chosen as winners, although not in pairs (in other words, you still can only win once this week but you essentially have two chances to do so.)
Fourteenth deadline is July 13th, 11:59PM CST.
Mon, 2011-07-11 23:25
HerzinthTheDark
Kaylon the Savior Planeswalker - Kaylon {+1} Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature you control. That creature gains haste until end of turn. {-2} For each +1/+1 counter on target creature you control, put a 1/1 white Soldier creature token into play. {-8} You gain an emblem with: "Whenever a creature you control dies, put an amount of +1/+1 counters equal to that creatures toughness on all creatures you control" {4}
Kaylon's Chosen Creature - Human Knight
Vigilance Memorial - When ~ dies, if it had a +1/+1 counter on it, put a +1/+1 counter on all creatures you control. 3/5
Bolas, Master Manipulator
Planeswalker - Bolas
Starting Loyalty: 5
+1: Destroy target tapped creature.
-4: Target player discards his or her hand.
-8: Destroy all creatures. They can't be regenerated.
Bolas' Wretch
Creature - Gremlin
3/2 Memorial - When Bolas' Wretch dies, target player loses 2 life.
You can call me DH.
These are the rules. Read them.
Thu, 2011-07-07 20:31
Darkerling
Braids, Cabal Matriarch
Planeswalker - Braids
{+1}: Each player sacrifices a permanent.
{-1}: Target player sacrifices a permanent.
{-12}: All other players sacrifice all permanents.
{3}
Sort of redundant and simple, but it fits the flavor of the original card.
((Braids's Hand Servant))
Creature - Vampire
All creature you opponents control have "Memorial - when this creature dies, put a +1/+1 counter on ~."
2/2
Fri, 2011-07-08 08:34
Utheraptor
Bolas, Master Clockworker
Planeswalker - Bolas
{+2} Reveal the top ten cards of your library. An opponent divides them in two piles. Put one of them on the top of your library in any order and the second on the bottom of your library in any order.
{-1} Return two target creatures to their owner's hand.
{-10} Get an emblem with "At the end of each turn, if it is not your turn, take two etra turns after this one.
{4}
If you don't read Magic book "Test of Metal", Bolas' name can be a little confusing for you. I'll explain that.
A clockworker is powerful mage which can see the future, travel in time and manipulate with it. In "Test of Metal", Bolas is master of this magical method.
EDIT: Oh! I forgott to the companion! So...
(((Bolas' Mindbender)))
Creature - Human wizard
Whenever an opponent draws a card, you may look at the top card of your library. You may put that card on the bottom of your library. As your command Master! What? Crush that puny marionette? No problem, Master!
Bolas, Tormentor of Ages
Planeswalker - Bolas
<+3> Each player discards a card.
<-2> Target player discards two cards.
<-9> Target player discards his/her hand, then loses life equal to the total CMC of the cards discarded this way.
<5>
Servant of Bolas (Name pending)
Creature - Zombie Wizard
Whenever a player discards a card, you may have that player lose 1 life.
1/1
Cats are my life.
Proud member of the Boros Legion
Fri, 2011-07-08 03:08
jhincherick
everyone is doing bolas so I'm doing something different.
Kaylon, The War Haunted
Planeswalker - Kaylon
{+2}: Target creature gains vigilance until end of turn.
{-3}: Target creature gains first strike until end of turn.
{-14}: You gain an emblem with "All creatures you control have double strike, vigilance, and haste."
Loyalty:{4}
Kaylon's Steed
Creature - Horse
If you control a solder Kaylon's Steed gains +3/+3 and first Strike.
Memorial - When this creature is put into the graveyard from play, you gain 1 life, if a solder is in play gain 4 life instead.
Flavor: "Naaaaaaaayyyy"
P.S. you do not have to use my flavor text, but i thought it would be funny cuz its is a horse. hope you like um!
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Fri, 2011-07-08 07:56
Xera_the_Enigma
Braids, Cabal Matriarch
Planeswalker- Braids
+2: Target player discards a card then puts the top card of his or her library into his or her graveyard.
-2: each opponent sacrifices a permanent.
-8: You get an emblem with "At the beginning of your upkeep return an artifact, creature, or land card from a graveyard to the battelfield."
Loyalty: 3
left her casting cost the same as the original braids. her first ability is the dementia affecting your mind, the second is an upgrade to her original, and the ultimate is a reversal of her original ability and reflects the waste nothing aspect of the cabal as well.
Braids Retainer
Creature- Horror
Whenever a card is put into an opponents graveyard from anywhere, ~ gets +1/+1 until end of turn.
2/2
just something that synergizes well with her abilities (i also wanted something that represented the creatures she summoned in your first chapter hope it fits idk)
Fri, 2011-07-08 07:12
EyeofTruth
Kaylon, Vanquisher of Evil
Planeswalker - Kaylon
+2: Deal 3 damage to target nonwhite creature
-1: Put a +1/+1 counter on each white creature you control, they gain lifelink until end of turn
-8: Place X 1/1 white human soldier creature token onto the battlefield where X is equal to your life total
<5>
Spiritlinker of Kaylon
Creature - Human Knight
Protection from Black
When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, you may place two 1/1 white soldier creature tokens onto the battlefield.
Other white creatures you control gain Memorial - When this creature dies, you may gain 3 life
2/2
Reverred of Kaylon will also suffice as a companion since his ability and rarity both match up. If he's not supposed to be Kaylon's companion, i would suggest to tweak it's name to not cause confusion.
Fri, 2011-07-08 07:02
Sewn-Eye
Braids Depraved
Planeswalker - Braids
+1: Each player sacrifices a creature and discards a card.
-2: Look at target player's hand. Choose a nonland card. That player discards that card.
-7: Choose up to three nonland cards in an opponent's graveyard and cast them without paying their mana costs.
[4]
Delirium Feaster
Creature - Horror
Whenever a nonland card is put into an opponent's graveyard from anywhere, that player loses 1 life.
3/3 It sifts through the lifeless memories and shattered dreams of broken minds, picking the choicest bits.
EDIT - Used the wrong version (missing starting loyalty and needed to alter a cost). Fixed now.
"Too wary to charge, too prudent to serve. Not anymore."
—Sedris, the Traitor King
Fri, 2011-07-08 17:37
hooliganj
This challenge took quite a bit of research. I stopped playing magic well before Planeswalkers were made into cards. Luckily, the e-mail server is down at work, which cuts my workload in half. It looks like the key to a good Planeswalker is to have the card represent a winning strategy, rather than just 3 abilities that share a theme. Also, even though I see lots of these guys producing 'emblems' on the forums, only a handful of the actual cards have this effect.
So, here's my take on Braids as an evil manipulator of dimensional space, and also as an anti-Memorial machine. I've never played with one of these cards, so the cost numbers are guesstimates based on existing designs.
Braids, Dark Summoner Planeswalker - Braids
{+2} Exile target Creature you control and target Creature controlled by an opponent.
{-1} Target creature loses all abilities and is destroyed.
{-6} Return all Creatures exiled by CARDNAME to play under your control. Those creatures have haste until end of turn.
{3}
The rules for the week make it clear that you can't win with both cards, so there's no point in having mechanics that depend on the other card to work. Instead I opt for something with a similar theme, since the companion must match the 'walker.
Dementia Construct Creature - Avatar
Any Creature that blocks or is blocked by CARDNAME loses all abilities. "Pure madness given form, to act as an agent of her whims."
4/4
Kaylon, [[Destructive surname]]
Planeswalker - Kaylon
<+1> put a 2/2 white knight token onto the battlefield.
<-2> Creatures you control gain protection of the color of your choice until end of turn.
<-6> destroy all creatures you don't control.
Starting loyalty: 2
Kaylon's Flagbearer
Creature - Human Flagbearer
whenever a knight enters the battlefield creatures you control get +1/+1 until end of turn.
2/2
Sat, 2011-07-09 16:47
Anuttymous
I figure Bolas ought to be a different colour to Braids - two black planeswalkers is a bit silly. And seeing as he's a Dragon...
Bolas, Terror of Planes
Planeswalkers - Bolas
{+2} Destroy two target lands.
{-4} CARDNAME deals 5 damage to each creature.
{-10} LEGENDNAME deals 20 damage to target player.
[6]
Bolas' Whelp
Creature - Dragon
Flying
Whenever a land is put into a graveyard from the battlefield, CARDNAME deals 1 damage to that land's controller.
4/4
Goes well with the original Bolas' +3, as you can hit a land, and the -9 as they'd normally sacrifice a lot of lands.
Braids, Cabal Matriarch
Planeswalker - Braids
[+2] Each opponent sacrifices an artifact, creature or land.
[-3] Put a dementia counter on target creature. (At the beginning of each player's upkeep, that player loses 1 life and discards a card for each creature with a dementia counter he/she controls.)
[-12] Put a dementia counter on all creatures your opponent controls.
[5]
Braids' Apprentice
Creature - Human Minion
When Braids' Apprentice enters the battlefield, put a dementia counter on target creature. (At the beginning of each player's upkeep, that player loses 1 life and discards a card for each creature with a dementia counter he/she controls.)
2/2
Sat, 2011-07-09 20:24
elmdor
Braids, Cabal Matriarch
Planeswalker -- Braids
0: Each player sacrifices an artifact, creature or land. Put a loyalty counter on Braids, Cabal Matriarch for each permanent sacrificed this way.
-1: Tap target creature. It deals damage to itself equal to its power.
-7: Exile all cards from target player's graveyard. That player loses life equal to the number of cards exiled this way and you gain that much life.
2
Braids's Minion
Creature -- Horror Minion
When Braids's Minion enters the battlefield, you gain 2 life.
When Braids's Minion dies, each opponent loses 2 life.
2/2
"All science is either physics or stamp collecting." [Ernest Ruthenford]
"In man we all pray!" [Tony Hadley]
Kaylon, Leader of the Order
Planeswalker - Kaylon
+2: Put a 1/1 white Soldier creature token onto the battlefield.
-1: Put two +1/+1 counters on each creature you control that dealt damage to an opponent this turn.
-7: Put X +1/+1 counters on each creature you control, where X is the number of creatures you control.
[3]
Kaylon's Guardian
Creature - Human Knight
~ gets +1/+1 for each +1/+1 counter on it.
2/2
Melka, Jungle Savant
Planeswalker-- Melka
+2:Until end of turn, whenever a creature you control deals combat damage to a player, draw a card.
0: Target creature gets +3/+3 until end of turn.
-9: Draw cards equal to the amount of combat damage dealt to target player this turn.
Melka's Monkey
Creature-- Ape
you may have ~ deal its combat damage as if it weren't blocked. If you do, ~ deals 2 damage to all creatures blocking it.
2/2
Cthulhu eats YER MIND SOUL AND BRAIN.
He also makes for a kickbutt eldrazi deck.
Sun, 2011-07-10 16:46
Darkerling
Cthulhupwn, you did read the description of the challenge right?
Sun, 2011-07-10 22:58
Egadd
Braids, Cabal Matriarch
Planeswalker - Braids
+2 - Put a +1/+1 counter on a creature.
-3 - Destroy target creature. Gain 2 life.
-8 - Take 5 counters off of creatures you control. Destroy 2 targets nonland permanents.
[3]
Cabal Mutant Summon
Creature - Mutant Horror
Whenever Cabal Mutant Summon is dealt damage, put a -1/-1 counter on any creature.
2/4
Just as a warning Egadd, -1/-1 counters and +1/+1 counters are never in the same set together and we already have several cards that dish out +1/+1 counters to multiple creatures, figured you should know.
Like Anuttymous, I think Bolas should be in red. Design-wise, my reasons are the same. Flavour-wise, I'll go with the idea that Bolas is now so powerful he can split his being into multiple shards.
Fury-Shard of Bolas -
Planeswalker - Bolas
+2 : Creatures you control get +1/+0 until end of turn.
-2 : Reveal the top card of target library. If it is a creature card, put it onto the battlefield. That creature gains haste and, "Exile this creature at the beginning of the end step".
-6 : Fury Shard deals X damage to each creature and player where X is the number of creatures on the battlefield.
3
I went through a lot of variations of those abilities - hopefully this one sits right. The first ability could be many things, I only just dropped the haste as a nod to Anger; I just didn't think it was powerful enough.
Bolas's Rolling Fury -
Creature - Elemental
Haste
When ~ deals combat damage, sacrifice it. If you do, put two 2/1 red Elemental creature tokens onto the battlefield.
2/1
When I saw the challenge I thought that this was a perfect oppurtunity to make a clockworking Bolas. Utheraptor beat me to posting it though but I decided to still submit the one I came up with.
Bolas, Clockworker Adept
Planeswalker - Bolas
+3: Each player returns a permanent they control to their owner's hand.
-3: Put a token onto the battlefield as a copy of another target nonland permanent.
-12: Take two extra turns after this one. Draw an additional card during each of those turn's draw step.
4
Apprentice to Bolas
Creature - Human Wizard
Whenever a permanent is returned to a player's hand, you may draw a card.
2/4
I made each ability interact with a different facet of clockworking. The first goes to the past a resets time. The ultimate deals with the future. The second one about going sideways in time which is the confusing one. Basically, a clockworker can enter an alternate timeline and pull a person or object from that timeline into the one they currently reside. It is a complicated idea and is explained best in Test of Metal. I didn't want lands flavorwise and I put 'another' for power level reasons as well as the fact that no Bolas would listen to another Bolas telling him to exit his own timeline, lol.
EDIT: Minor changes to P/T, ability, and loyalty costs.
Braids, Cabal Matriarch Planeswalker - Braids
+1: Each player sacrifice a tapped creature.
-1: If target creature is tapped, destroy it. Otherwise tap it and put a -1/-1 counter on it.
-4: Proliferate twice.
4
tip: Braids's third ability may give her two loyalty counters when it resolves.
Braids's Mystic Creature - Gorgon Witch
T: Tap target creature. Memorial - When Braids's Mystic dies, put a -1/-1 counter on each tapped nonblack creature.
0/2
Flawless beauty of the Grand Cenobite made evilest ones knelt at her feet.
Mon, 2011-07-11 19:26
windandfire
Braids, Master of Nightmares -
Planeswalker -
+2: Each player discards a card at random.
-2: Target player sacrifices a creature
-8: Each player discards his or her hand. You draw cards equal to the number of cards your opponents discarded this way.
{4}
I don't know much about Braids, but she seems insane.
Cabal Ghoul -
Creature - Zombie
Intimidate
Whenever a card is put into a graveyard from anywhere, Cabal Ghoul gets +1/+0 until end of turn
1/2
"I will do science to it." - Kimiko “Thunderbolt” Ross
"I can wire anything directly into anything - I'm the professor!" - Professor Hubert J. Farnsworth
"Our tanks can't hold aggro of that magnitude!
Tue, 2011-07-12 20:35
Crissaegrim
Kaylon, Order Exemplar
Planeswalker - Kaylon
+1: Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature you control, until end of turn, each creature you control with a +1/+1 counter on it has first strike.
-1: Exile target creature. Its controller gains life equal to its power.
-6: Each creature you don’t control deals damage to itself equal to its power.
[4]
Kaylon's Abolisher
Creature - Human Knight
Whenever a permanent is exiled, put a +1/+1 counter on Kaylon's Abolisher.
2/2
Tue, 2011-07-12 16:01
hooliganj
Entries:
Kaylon: 6
Braids: 9
Bolas: 5 (-2 if Art_Freak doesn't want 2 black planeswalkers)
Other: 1
A hint to any last minute entrants: there are really only 3 entries for Bolas, and 6 for Kaylon. Figure your odds accordingly.
And that other tally won't even be considered. If you can't be bothered to read what I've written about the challenge, I can't be bothered to read your entry. Sounds pretty fair to me.
EDIT:
This week's winners for planeswalkers are: Xera_the_Enigma (Braids), copapoc (Kaylon), Guitarweeps (Bolas)
And for the companions: Darkerling (Braids), EyeofTruth (Kaylon), Utheraptor (Bolas)
CURRENT CHALLENGE:
Quote:
15th: artifact, max CMC , or
This week's challenge is slightly altered to remove the requirements of the entries being noncreature and colored. This challenge is extremely open ended, just keep in mind what won't be going in the set and what we already have and could use for the set. Get creative - practical and interesting entries are more likely to make it through. Also keep in mind that this is not Mirrodin, we don't need charge counters or anything like that.
Fifteenth deadline is July 20th, 11:59PM CST.
Sat, 2011-07-16 06:21
pitlady
Garbage Collector Artifact Creature - Golem , : destroy target token creature, then put a +1/+1 counter on ~.
1/1
Flawless beauty of the Grand Cenobite made evilest ones knelt at her feet.
Fri, 2011-07-15 09:49
Utheraptor
Kaylon's Gauntlets
Artifact - Equipment
Equip creature
Equipped creature gets +2/+2.
Whenever a Knight enters the battlefield under your control, put a +1/+1 counter on it and a +1/+1 counter on equipped creature.
Equip
Yeah... I think that it works well with Kaylon's first ability and also has at least a little flavor...
kaylon's banner
Legendary Artifact
creatures you control have "Memorial - when this is put into a graveyard, put a +1/+1 counter on each creature you control." Memorial - When ~ is put into your graveyard, you may pay . if you do, return it to the battlefield Kaylons banner represents the orders immortal zeal.
Fri, 2011-07-15 13:17
EyeofTruth
Stoic Tomblooter
Artifact Creature - Golem
When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, you may choose one: Each player may return a creature from their graveyard to their owners hand, or exile each players graveyard.
Entwine
2/2 Originally the matriarchs minions, they now offer their services to all
Sat, 2011-07-16 21:29
Nerameshu
EDIT: Dang, you're right Utherraptor. I'm just going to cut my entry this week until I can think of something else. BIG WOOPS.
Mind Mages
One set in design. One Fantasy From the Vaults in Design. Modding since 11-05-12
Sat, 2011-07-16 15:11
SarkhanVol
Braids' Goggles
Legendary Artifact
At the beginning of each player's upkeep, that player sacrifices an artifact, creature, or land.
It's Braids' original ability. This goggles are the ones that she uses in the picture.
Sat, 2011-07-16 20:34
Utheraptor
Copapoc, Nerameshu, SarkhanVol, in the challenge is that the artefact must be or . Your cards are . I'm just pointing to prevent you from being disqualified.
what ? i didn't see anything ? [/jk]
than uthe, fixed it
Sat, 2011-07-16 23:41
windandfire
Eternity Orb -
Artifact - , , Sacrifice Eternity Orb: Shuffle your graveyard into your library and draw two cards. "Memories never die. They're just forgotten until the time you need them." -Sachel, Mind Auger
Think this works nicely with memorial, giving your cards a second chance.
"I will do science to it." - Kimiko “Thunderbolt” Ross
"I can wire anything directly into anything - I'm the professor!" - Professor Hubert J. Farnsworth
"Our tanks can't hold aggro of that magnitude!
Sun, 2011-07-17 01:45
Darkerling
This entry is slightly created based off of windandfire's entry.
(("something" of forgetting/lost memories))
Artifact :Exile target card in a graveyard.
Sun, 2011-07-17 02:06
Anuttymous
Sword of Volleys
Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature gets +2/+1 Memorial - Whenever equipped creature dies, you may attach CARDNAME to target creature you control.
Equip
Volcanic Churner Artifact : ~ deals 1 damage to each creature and player. , , sacrifice ~: Destroy two target lands.
Because... destroying land is a red trademark, yet we have NO land destruction yet. Hopefully people won't take and improve this >.> I'm trusting you guys.
Matriarch's Tablet


,
, Sacrifice ~: Target player sacrifices an artifact or creature.
Artifact
Memorial-- Whenever a creature dies, return ~ from the graveyard to it's owner's hand.
Can you keyword that?
Current Projects
Secret Project Beta - Status Report: Blank slate! Still working on the base set.
Veyril - an RTD RPG Adventure - Status Report: Prologue! Round 1 has begun!
@Utheraptor: I normally don't comment on entries, but you're disqualifying yourself. Open the spoiler to see why.
Ancient Resonators


: Target creature deals damage equal to its power to target creature its owner controls.
Artifact
Based on the hammer movie 5 Million Years to Earth.
Cthulhu eats YER MIND SOUL AND BRAIN.
He also makes for a kickbutt eldrazi deck.
Blade of the Brotherhood



Artifact - Equipment
Whenever a creature enters the battlefield under your control, put a charge counter on ~.
Equipped creature gets +1/+1 for each charge counter on ~.
Equip
My 'Stuff hub'
Possibly a part of a cycle:
Core of the Demon Heart


less to cast.
Artifact
When ~ enters the battlefield, target player loses 1 life.
Black spells cost
Each cycle would cheapen costs and have a small effecttrip.
Orb of Worlds


,
, Sacrifice CARDNAME: Search your library for two land cards and put them onto the battlefield tapped. Then shuffle your library.
Artifact
Lacking land search, it appears...
[edit]Added "tapped".[/edit]
Anuttymous the Gathering
It's moderatin' time
Ask me anything you need
had an idea but was brownout of the water by the "no hybrid rule"......so that that was a waste of thought.
so ill just deal with a revised version.
Oracle's Tower
?
was spent to play ~,~ loses Defender until end of turn.
was spent to play ~, Flip a coin if heads all players draw a card, if tails all players put the top card of their library in to their grave yard.
Artifact Creature - Wall (rarity unsure)
Affinity for Artifacts.
Defender, First Strike, Haste, Trample.
if
If
8/8
hope ya like it!
EDIT: noticed an error in the mana cost but i fixed it
Memory Loop -


: Return a creature you control to its owner's hand. Put a charge counter on ~.


,
, Remove a charge counter from ~: draw a card.
Artifact
Picks-at-Flies
http://www.werepenguin.com/
http://picks-at-flies.livejournal.com/
Braid's Goggles




, pay 2 life, sacrifice ~: target player sacrifices a permanent.
artifact
at the beginning of your upkeep you lose 3 life and each player sacrifices a permanent.
Based on the current entries (plus what's in the set) it looks like i'll be doing another red card.
what I made 1st, but decided not to do.
CARDNAME


: Add 

to your mana pool.
Artifact
Sacrifce ~,
Simple, but red needs a few more early turn cards.
This week's winners are: pitlady, Sewn-Eye, Disposable Hero, Utheraptor, Sohel, and kikushadowblades.
Images will go up soon, and the first post scoring will be updated at that time.
CURRENT CHALLENGE:
This is the one I think a lot of people have been waiting for, but keep in mind it is not a one card challenge this week. Only complete entries will be considered. This means you must enter both a planeswalker and it's companion. The three walkers for the set are Kaylon (a knight motivated to the destruction of evil that leaders the Order), Braids (matriarch of the Cabal, formerly a minion as Braids, Cabal Minion, a master of dementia summoning), and Nicol Bolas (monocolored, and we all know who he is.) Pick one and submit your take on them and submit a companion for them. 3 walkers and 3 companions will be chosen as winners, although not in pairs (in other words, you still can only win once this week but you essentially have two chances to do so.)
Fourteenth deadline is July 13th, 11:59PM CST.
Kaylon the Savior




Planeswalker - Kaylon
{+1} Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature you control. That creature gains haste until end of turn.
{-2} For each +1/+1 counter on target creature you control, put a 1/1 white Soldier creature token into play.
{-8} You gain an emblem with: "Whenever a creature you control dies, put an amount of +1/+1 counters equal to that creatures toughness on all creatures you control"
{4}
Kaylon's Chosen


Creature - Human Knight
Vigilance
Memorial - When ~ dies, if it had a +1/+1 counter on it, put a +1/+1 counter on all creatures you control.
3/5
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Bolas, Master Manipulator



Planeswalker - Bolas
Starting Loyalty: 5
+1: Destroy target tapped creature.
-4: Target player discards his or her hand.
-8: Destroy all creatures. They can't be regenerated.
Bolas' Wretch


Creature - Gremlin
3/2
Memorial - When Bolas' Wretch dies, target player loses 2 life.
You can call me DH.
These are the rules. Read them.
Braids, Cabal Matriarch




Planeswalker - Braids
{+1}: Each player sacrifices a permanent.
{-1}: Target player sacrifices a permanent.
{-12}: All other players sacrifice all permanents.
{3}
Sort of redundant and simple, but it fits the flavor of the original card.
((Braids's Hand Servant))


Creature - Vampire
All creature you opponents control have "Memorial - when this creature dies, put a +1/+1 counter on ~."
2/2
Bolas, Master Clockworker




Planeswalker - Bolas
{+2} Reveal the top ten cards of your library. An opponent divides them in two piles. Put one of them on the top of your library in any order and the second on the bottom of your library in any order.
{-1} Return two target creatures to their owner's hand.
{-10} Get an emblem with "At the end of each turn, if it is not your turn, take two etra turns after this one.
{4}
If you don't read Magic book "Test of Metal", Bolas' name can be a little confusing for you. I'll explain that.
A clockworker is powerful mage which can see the future, travel in time and manipulate with it. In "Test of Metal", Bolas is master of this magical method.
EDIT: Oh! I forgott to the companion! So...
(((Bolas' Mindbender)))



Creature - Human wizard
Whenever an opponent draws a card, you may look at the top card of your library. You may put that card on the bottom of your library.
As your command Master! What? Crush that puny marionette? No problem, Master!
1/2
SECOND EDIT: Added flavor text...
Shoot for the Moon. Even if you miss, you will land among the stars.
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Bolas, Tormentor of Ages



Planeswalker - Bolas
<+3> Each player discards a card.
<-2> Target player discards two cards.
<-9> Target player discards his/her hand, then loses life equal to the total CMC of the cards discarded this way.
<5>
Servant of Bolas (Name pending)


Creature - Zombie Wizard
Whenever a player discards a card, you may have that player lose 1 life.
1/1
Cats are my life.
Boros Legion
Proud member of the
everyone is doing bolas so I'm doing something different.
Kaylon, The War Haunted



Planeswalker - Kaylon
{+2}: Target creature gains vigilance until end of turn.
{-3}: Target creature gains first strike until end of turn.
{-14}: You gain an emblem with "All creatures you control have double strike, vigilance, and haste."
Loyalty:{4}
Kaylon's Steed

Creature - Horse
If you control a solder Kaylon's Steed gains +3/+3 and first Strike.
Memorial - When this creature is put into the graveyard from play, you gain 1 life, if a solder is in play gain 4 life instead.
Flavor: "Naaaaaaaayyyy"
P.S. you do not have to use my flavor text, but i thought it would be funny cuz its is a horse. hope you like um!
Braids, Cabal Matriarch



Planeswalker- Braids
+2: Target player discards a card then puts the top card of his or her library into his or her graveyard.
-2: each opponent sacrifices a permanent.
-8: You get an emblem with "At the beginning of your upkeep return an artifact, creature, or land card from a graveyard to the battelfield."
Loyalty: 3
left her casting cost the same as the original braids. her first ability is the dementia affecting your mind, the second is an upgrade to her original, and the ultimate is a reversal of her original ability and reflects the waste nothing aspect of the cabal as well.
Braids Retainer



Creature- Horror
Whenever a card is put into an opponents graveyard from anywhere, ~ gets +1/+1 until end of turn.
2/2
just something that synergizes well with her abilities (i also wanted something that represented the creatures she summoned in your first chapter hope it fits idk)
Kaylon, Vanquisher of Evil




Planeswalker - Kaylon
+2: Deal 3 damage to target nonwhite creature
-1: Put a +1/+1 counter on each white creature you control, they gain lifelink until end of turn
-8: Place X 1/1 white human soldier creature token onto the battlefield where X is equal to your life total
<5>
Spiritlinker of Kaylon



Creature - Human Knight
Protection from Black
When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, you may place two 1/1 white soldier creature tokens onto the battlefield.
Other white creatures you control gain Memorial - When this creature dies, you may gain 3 life
2/2
Reverred of Kaylon will also suffice as a companion since his ability and rarity both match up. If he's not supposed to be Kaylon's companion, i would suggest to tweak it's name to not cause confusion.
Braids Depraved



Planeswalker - Braids
+1: Each player sacrifices a creature and discards a card.
-2: Look at target player's hand. Choose a nonland card. That player discards that card.
-7: Choose up to three nonland cards in an opponent's graveyard and cast them without paying their mana costs.
[4]
Delirium Feaster



Creature - Horror
Whenever a nonland card is put into an opponent's graveyard from anywhere, that player loses 1 life.
3/3
It sifts through the lifeless memories and shattered dreams of broken minds, picking the choicest bits.
EDIT - Used the wrong version (missing starting loyalty and needed to alter a cost). Fixed now.
"Too wary to charge, too prudent to serve. Not anymore."
—Sedris, the Traitor King
This challenge took quite a bit of research. I stopped playing magic well before Planeswalkers were made into cards. Luckily, the e-mail server is down at work, which cuts my workload in half.
It looks like the key to a good Planeswalker is to have the card represent a winning strategy, rather than just 3 abilities that share a theme. Also, even though I see lots of these guys producing 'emblems' on the forums, only a handful of the actual cards have this effect.
So, here's my take on Braids as an evil manipulator of dimensional space, and also as an anti-Memorial machine. I've never played with one of these cards, so the cost numbers are guesstimates based on existing designs.
Braids, Dark Summoner



Planeswalker - Braids
{+2} Exile target Creature you control and target Creature controlled by an opponent.
{-1} Target creature loses all abilities and is destroyed.
{-6} Return all Creatures exiled by CARDNAME to play under your control. Those creatures have haste until end of turn.
{3}
The rules for the week make it clear that you can't win with both cards, so there's no point in having mechanics that depend on the other card to work. Instead I opt for something with a similar theme, since the companion must match the 'walker.
Dementia Construct


Creature - Avatar
Any Creature that blocks or is blocked by CARDNAME loses all abilities.
"Pure madness given form, to act as an agent of her whims."
4/4
De Chelonian Mobile.
My Shadowfist sets.
The Usagi Yojimbo CCG.
Kaylon, [[Destructive surname]]


Planeswalker - Kaylon
<+1> put a 2/2 white knight token onto the battlefield.
<-2> Creatures you control gain protection of the color of your choice until end of turn.
<-6> destroy all creatures you don't control.
Starting loyalty: 2
Kaylon's Flagbearer



Creature - Human Flagbearer
whenever a knight enters the battlefield creatures you control get +1/+1 until end of turn.
2/2
I figure Bolas ought to be a different colour to Braids - two black planeswalkers is a bit silly. And seeing as he's a Dragon...
Bolas, Terror of Planes



Planeswalkers - Bolas
{+2} Destroy two target lands.
{-4} CARDNAME deals 5 damage to each creature.
{-10} LEGENDNAME deals 20 damage to target player.
[6]
Bolas' Whelp



Creature - Dragon
Flying
Whenever a land is put into a graveyard from the battlefield, CARDNAME deals 1 damage to that land's controller.
4/4
Goes well with the original Bolas' +3, as you can hit a land, and the -9 as they'd normally sacrifice a lot of lands.
Anuttymous the Gathering
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Braids, Cabal Matriarch




Planeswalker - Braids
[+2] Each opponent sacrifices an artifact, creature or land.
[-3] Put a dementia counter on target creature. (At the beginning of each player's upkeep, that player loses 1 life and discards a card for each creature with a dementia counter he/she controls.)
[-12] Put a dementia counter on all creatures your opponent controls.
[5]
Braids' Apprentice



Creature - Human Minion
When Braids' Apprentice enters the battlefield, put a dementia counter on target creature. (At the beginning of each player's upkeep, that player loses 1 life and discards a card for each creature with a dementia counter he/she controls.)
2/2
Braids, Cabal Matriarch



Planeswalker -- Braids
0: Each player sacrifices an artifact, creature or land. Put a loyalty counter on Braids, Cabal Matriarch for each permanent sacrificed this way.
-1: Tap target creature. It deals damage to itself equal to its power.
-7: Exile all cards from target player's graveyard. That player loses life equal to the number of cards exiled this way and you gain that much life.
2
Braids's Minion


Creature -- Horror Minion
When Braids's Minion enters the battlefield, you gain 2 life.
When Braids's Minion dies, each opponent loses 2 life.
2/2
"All science is either physics or stamp collecting." [Ernest Ruthenford]
"In man we all pray!" [Tony Hadley]
Like fire, hellfire, this fire in my skin, this burning desire...
Kaylon, Leader of the Order



Planeswalker - Kaylon
+2: Put a 1/1 white Soldier creature token onto the battlefield.
-1: Put two +1/+1 counters on each creature you control that dealt damage to an opponent this turn.
-7: Put X +1/+1 counters on each creature you control, where X is the number of creatures you control.
[3]
Kaylon's Guardian


Creature - Human Knight
~ gets +1/+1 for each +1/+1 counter on it.
2/2
My 'Stuff hub'
Melka, Jungle Savant


Planeswalker-- Melka
+2:Until end of turn, whenever a creature you control deals combat damage to a player, draw a card.
0: Target creature gets +3/+3 until end of turn.
-9: Draw cards equal to the amount of combat damage dealt to target player this turn.
Melka's Monkey


Creature-- Ape
you may have ~ deal its combat damage as if it weren't blocked. If you do, ~ deals 2 damage to all creatures blocking it.
2/2
Cthulhu eats YER MIND SOUL AND BRAIN.
He also makes for a kickbutt eldrazi deck.
Cthulhupwn, you did read the description of the challenge right?
Braids, Cabal Matriarch


Planeswalker - Braids
+2 - Put a +1/+1 counter on a creature.
-3 - Destroy target creature. Gain 2 life.
-8 - Take 5 counters off of creatures you control. Destroy 2 targets nonland permanents.
[3]
Cabal Mutant Summon


Creature - Mutant Horror
Whenever Cabal Mutant Summon is dealt damage, put a -1/-1 counter on any creature.
2/4
Just as a warning Egadd, -1/-1 counters and +1/+1 counters are never in the same set together and we already have several cards that dish out +1/+1 counters to multiple creatures, figured you should know.
Thx EyeofTruth, I just changed it.
Like Anuttymous, I think Bolas should be in red. Design-wise, my reasons are the same. Flavour-wise, I'll go with the idea that Bolas is now so powerful he can split his being into multiple shards.
Fury-Shard of Bolas -



Planeswalker - Bolas
+2 : Creatures you control get +1/+0 until end of turn.
-2 : Reveal the top card of target library. If it is a creature card, put it onto the battlefield. That creature gains haste and, "Exile this creature at the beginning of the end step".
-6 : Fury Shard deals X damage to each creature and player where X is the number of creatures on the battlefield.
3
I went through a lot of variations of those abilities - hopefully this one sits right. The first ability could be many things, I only just dropped the haste as a nod to Anger; I just didn't think it was powerful enough.
Bolas's Rolling Fury -


Creature - Elemental
Haste
When ~ deals combat damage, sacrifice it. If you do, put two 2/1 red Elemental creature tokens onto the battlefield.
2/1
Picks-at-Flies
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When I saw the challenge I thought that this was a perfect oppurtunity to make a clockworking Bolas. Utheraptor beat me to posting it though but I decided to still submit the one I came up with.
Bolas, Clockworker Adept




Planeswalker - Bolas
+3: Each player returns a permanent they control to their owner's hand.
-3: Put a token onto the battlefield as a copy of another target nonland permanent.
-12: Take two extra turns after this one. Draw an additional card during each of those turn's draw step.
4
Apprentice to Bolas



Creature - Human Wizard
Whenever a permanent is returned to a player's hand, you may draw a card.
2/4
I made each ability interact with a different facet of clockworking. The first goes to the past a resets time. The ultimate deals with the future. The second one about going sideways in time which is the confusing one. Basically, a clockworker can enter an alternate timeline and pull a person or object from that timeline into the one they currently reside. It is a complicated idea and is explained best in Test of Metal. I didn't want lands flavorwise and I put 'another' for power level reasons as well as the fact that no Bolas would listen to another Bolas telling him to exit his own timeline, lol.
EDIT: Minor changes to P/T, ability, and loyalty costs.
Check out my updated set hub.
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Braids, Cabal Matriarch




Planeswalker - Braids
+1: Each player sacrifice a tapped creature.
-1: If target creature is tapped, destroy it. Otherwise tap it and put a -1/-1 counter on it.
-4: Proliferate twice.
4
tip: Braids's third ability may give her two loyalty counters when it resolves.
Braids's Mystic


Creature - Gorgon Witch
T: Tap target creature.
Memorial - When Braids's Mystic dies, put a -1/-1 counter on each tapped nonblack creature.
0/2
Flawless beauty of the Grand Cenobite made evilest ones knelt at her feet.
Braids, Master of Nightmares -



Planeswalker -
+2: Each player discards a card at random.
-2: Target player sacrifices a creature
-8: Each player discards his or her hand. You draw cards equal to the number of cards your opponents discarded this way.
{4}
I don't know much about Braids, but she seems insane.
Cabal Ghoul -


Creature - Zombie
Intimidate
Whenever a card is put into a graveyard from anywhere, Cabal Ghoul gets +1/+0 until end of turn
1/2
"I will do science to it." - Kimiko “Thunderbolt” Ross
"I can wire anything directly into anything - I'm the professor!" - Professor Hubert J. Farnsworth
"Our tanks can't hold aggro of that magnitude!
Kaylon, Order Exemplar



Planeswalker - Kaylon
+1: Put a +1/+1 counter on target creature you control, until end of turn, each creature you control with a +1/+1 counter on it has first strike.
-1: Exile target creature. Its controller gains life equal to its power.
-6: Each creature you don’t control deals damage to itself equal to its power.
[4]
Kaylon's Abolisher


Creature - Human Knight
Whenever a permanent is exiled, put a +1/+1 counter on Kaylon's Abolisher.
2/2
Entries:
A hint to any last minute entrants: there are really only 3 entries for Bolas, and 6 for Kaylon. Figure your odds accordingly.
De Chelonian Mobile.
My Shadowfist sets.
The Usagi Yojimbo CCG.
And that other tally won't even be considered. If you can't be bothered to read what I've written about the challenge, I can't be bothered to read your entry. Sounds pretty fair to me.
EDIT:
This week's winners for planeswalkers are: Xera_the_Enigma (Braids), copapoc (Kaylon), Guitarweeps (Bolas)
And for the companions: Darkerling (Braids), EyeofTruth (Kaylon), Utheraptor (Bolas)
CURRENT CHALLENGE:
This week's challenge is slightly altered to remove the requirements of the entries being noncreature and colored. This challenge is extremely open ended, just keep in mind what won't be going in the set and what we already have and could use for the set. Get creative - practical and interesting entries are more likely to make it through. Also keep in mind that this is not Mirrodin, we don't need charge counters or anything like that.
Fifteenth deadline is July 20th, 11:59PM CST.
Garbage Collector

,
: destroy target token creature, then put a +1/+1 counter on ~.
Artifact Creature - Golem
1/1
Flawless beauty of the Grand Cenobite made evilest ones knelt at her feet.
Kaylon's Gauntlets


Artifact - Equipment
Equip creature
Equipped creature gets +2/+2.
Whenever a Knight enters the battlefield under your control, put a +1/+1 counter on it and a +1/+1 counter on equipped creature.
Equip
Yeah... I think that it works well with Kaylon's first ability and also has at least a little flavor...
Shoot for the Moon. Even if you miss, you will land among the stars.
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kaylon's banner




. if you do, return it to the battlefield
Legendary Artifact
creatures you control have "Memorial - when this is put into a graveyard, put a +1/+1 counter on each creature you control."
Memorial - When ~ is put into your graveyard, you may pay
Kaylons banner represents the orders immortal zeal.
Stoic Tomblooter


Artifact Creature - Golem
When CARDNAME enters the battlefield, you may choose one: Each player may return a creature from their graveyard to their owners hand, or exile each players graveyard.
Entwine
2/2
Originally the matriarchs minions, they now offer their services to all
EDIT: Dang, you're right Utherraptor. I'm just going to cut my entry this week until I can think of something else. BIG WOOPS.
Mind Mages
One set in design. One Fantasy From the Vaults in Design.
Modding since 11-05-12
Braids' Goggles


Legendary Artifact
At the beginning of each player's upkeep, that player sacrifices an artifact, creature, or land.
It's Braids' original ability. This goggles are the ones that she uses in the picture.
Copapoc, Nerameshu, SarkhanVol, in the challenge is that the artefact must be
or
. Your cards are
. I'm just pointing to prevent you from being disqualified.
Shoot for the Moon. Even if you miss, you will land among the stars.
Orbis Renaissance community set
what ? i didn't see anything ? [/jk]
than uthe, fixed it
Eternity Orb -

,
, Sacrifice Eternity Orb: Shuffle your graveyard into your library and draw two cards.
Artifact -
"Memories never die. They're just forgotten until the time you need them." -Sachel, Mind Auger
Think this works nicely with memorial, giving your cards a second chance.
"I will do science to it." - Kimiko “Thunderbolt” Ross
"I can wire anything directly into anything - I'm the professor!" - Professor Hubert J. Farnsworth
"Our tanks can't hold aggro of that magnitude!
This entry is slightly created based off of windandfire's entry.
(("something" of forgetting/lost memories))

:Exile target card in a graveyard.
Artifact
Sword of Volleys

Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature gets +2/+1
Memorial - Whenever equipped creature dies, you may attach CARDNAME to target creature you control.
Equip
Anuttymous the Gathering
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Volcanic Churner


: ~ deals 1 damage to each creature and player.


,
, sacrifice ~: Destroy two target lands.
Artifact
Because... destroying land is a red trademark, yet we have NO land destruction yet. Hopefully people won't take and improve this >.> I'm trusting you guys.
Fear the newbie
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