Hazezon Tamar, I'm not 100% about it, since it actually seems weaker than the original, or maybe it's me.

Kulrath Knight

Creature - Zombie Knight
Wither
Damage dealt by Kulrath Knight to creatures can't be prevented.
Creatures with counters on them can't block Kulrath Knight.
3/3

Next Fracture - Chaos Orb

Your remake of Kulrath Knight seems pretty solid, but I think it has also been weakened a little bit. Also, I've noticed that knights tend to have first strike - a first-striking knight with wither would be pretty damn good.

Chaos Orb
Artifact {M}
,: Target player shuffles all permanents he or she owns, his or her hand, and his or her graveyard into his or her library. You shuffle all permanents you control, your hand, and your graveyard into your library. Exchange libraries with target player. You and target player each draw 7 cards.

Next: Season of the Witch

Chaos Orb - I LOVE THIS CARD. That is such a terrific card. You make a lousy stalling deck, switch libraries, and trash your opponent with his aggro deck before he can switch back. I love it. And I love how it doesn't reset life totals. VERY cool card.

Next: Spined Wurm

7/10 that kind of cool

Spined wurm
Creature - Wurm
Trample
When enters the battlefeild put a +1/+1 counter onto ~
When ever ~ deals damage to a player put X +1/+1 counters onto ~ where X is the number of +1/+1 countes on it
3/3

Can you do witchengine

Spined Wurm - Overpowered much. Even with the restrictions, it can get out of hand in a very quick hurry. I'd drop the CIP clause, and challenge the player to give it a counter to make it absurd.

Witch Engine

Artifact Creature - Construct Horror
Swampwalk
Whenever Witch Engine deals combat damage to a player, add to your mana pool.
Mana empties from your mana pool only during the cleanup step of the turn.
3/3

Next fracture - Falling Star

Witch Engine - I really like how it's an engine of black mana. I also like how it's "mana doesn't empty" ability works whether or not it dealt damage during the turn. Sweet idea.

Next: Naked Singularity

8/10 i relly like it

Naked Singularity

Enchantment
Effects of creature can't target or effect other creatures

Can you remake Changeling Sentinel

Naked Singularity: 7/10. At and with templating and rarity in place, would have been 10/10. The concept is spot on.

Changeling Sentinel
Creature - Shapeshifter (C)
Changeling (This card is every creature type at all times.)
Flash, first strike
: Changeling Sentinel gets +0/+1 until end of turn.
2/4

Next: Sentinel

Changeling Sentinel - 9/10. It's simply better than the original version, and yet it's not too powerful for its mana cost.

Sentinel
Artifact Creature - Construct
Defender
~ can block any number of creatures.
~ is indestructible.
0/2

Next: False Prophet

Sentinel - That's pretty smart. It's actually quite removal to Disfigure and Unsummon, but it's great for what it is; a really hard to get past wall. Very cool. Part of me thinks it should be white, and part of me likes that it isn't. Also, it doesn't have reach, which is great as it means it doesn't completely lock down the board. Good design, I think.

Next: Dichotomancy

False Prophet: 8/10 Ouch, a twisted Dark Confident. I like it. I just think it's a bit unfair to have it unable to attack or block. I'd rather see it without that clause and just make a choice to attack when it's going to block or not.

Dichotomancy -
Sorcery {R}
Each player chooses any number of tapped nonland permanents their opponents control and puts a copy of each one into play.
Suspend 3-

Having fun with Glimmervoid Basin.

Next: Parallectric Feedback

Dichotomancy 9/10. Really good card.

Parallectric Feedback UU
Sorcery
Each player taps a target permanent permanent.

Next: Vengeful Rebirth

I don't like Parallectric Feedback it seems underpowered, i'm sure there are two mana tap spells with out such a mager draw back such as that

Vengeful Rebirth
Instant
Reaturn target creature to the battlefield that left it this turn
deal X damage to target creature where X is the power of the creature that returned the battlefield

next shall be Mayael the Anima

Vengeful Rebirth - Cool card, but a little too similar to the original. I don't blame you since the flavour of the card's title is pretty obvious (and awesome).

Next: Crazed Armodon

Mayael the Anima: 5/10 The creaturecycling is a bit much. You can have that, or the can't be countered clause but not both.

Crazed Armodon -
Creature - Elephant
Trample
: Flip a coin. If you win the flip, ~ gets +3/+0 and haste until end of turn.
3/3

Up next is Mind Over Matter
EDIT: Internet flipped out for a second.

Crazed Armodon - 5/10 The flavor is spot-on, however you missed the opportunity to make it R/G which would have been an improvement. 3/3 stats is a good thing on an armodon, the ability doesn't work at all because it lacks a punishment for losing the flip. You can flip all you want and stack the power up. Either restict its use to once each turn or carry on the flavor by implementing a drawback.

Mind over Matter -
Enchantment (R)
As long as you have more cards in hand than an opponent has artifacts, creatures and/or lands on the battlefield, artifacts, creatures, and lands that opponent controls enter the battlefield tapped.

Next

Mind Over Matter - I like it, but I think it may be a little too expensive, since Kismet is and better. I do like it, and it might be easier on the templating to just say, "Permanents". Granted this becomes weird with 'walkers and enchantments but I doubt it'd be a problem. Good idea though. Really nice take on the flavour.

Next: Stronghold Zeppelin

Trade Routes: 8/10 I really like cards like this, although it might be more fun as "target opponent" or up the cost to to avoid team dominance.

Stronghold Zeppelin -
Creature - Human //Funny Oracle update
Flying
~ can block any number of creatures.
, : Exile target attacking or blocking creature you control and return it to play.
2/5

Next: Ice Storm

Stronghold Zeppelin - The oracle update IS funny. It's not even a ship! I think it might too powerful with its "can block any number of creatures" ability. But I love the exiling ability. Creature can jump in and out of the Zeppelin. Very smart.

Next: Insidious Bookworms

Ice Storm - that's REALLY harsh. I'm calling "Totally undercosted" on that one.

Insidious Bookworms
Creature - Worm
Whenever an opponent discards a card, you may put a +1/+1 counter on Insidious Bookworms.
2/2

Next: Nissa's Chosen

(Remember that the cards I ask for fractures of are cards that interact with card names, or are things that are actually referred to by name by something else.)

Insidious Bookworms - Nice design, and much more clean than the original one.

Nissa's Chosen - :symg
Creature - Elf Warrior
Nissa's Chosen gets +2/+2 for each other creature named Nissa's Chosen.
1/1

Next fracture: Longbow Archer

Nissa's Chosen - Pretty cool card. I'm not a fan though of cards that specifically name other cards. I think it's too linear. :/

Next: Skull Catapult

But Nissa'a Chosen is already linear because of Nissa.

Longbow Archer - A nice idea but I don't really get what a longbow archer has to do with removing a creature from combat, especially an attacking one. Other than that it is kind of powerful as it acts as removal and nullifies a creature. 7/10

Skull Catapult
Artifact
, Exile X creature cards from your graveyard: ~ deals X damage to any target.
Sacrifice a creature: Untap ~.

Next card is Worldgorger Dragon

8/10 cool, works well as card. not sure what with, but i'm possitve some sort of deck can be based around it

Worldgorger Dragon

Creature - dragon
Flying, trample
Landwalk
When ever ~ deals damage to a player, name a land type, each player sacrifise all land of that type then put that many +1/+1 counters on to ~

6/6

remake Slithermuse

Worldgorger Dragon: 7/10. Landwalk and flying are redundant, and the (often) one-sided Armageddon is pretty absurd. That said, it is without a doubt a Dragon that gorges itself on worlds. Full points for theme, deductions for balance.

Slithermuse
Creature - Elelmental (R)
Flash
When Slithermuse enters the battlefield, counter target spell.
When Slithermuse leaves the battlefield, draw a card.
Evoke (You may cast this spell for its evoke cost. If you do, it's sacrificed when it enters the battlefield.)
2/2

Next: Dracoplasm

Monkey, you ninja!

9/10 I like your slithermuse, combining the elements of the elementals.

Dracoplasm -
Creature - Dragon Ooze
, , Sacrifice Dracoplasm: Search your library for a dragon card with converted mana cost X or less and put it onto the battlefield under your control.
0/1

Next Fracture: Let's go with a fun one. [cardTsabo Tavoc[/card]!

Dracoplasm - I think Dracoplasm should just cost . I love how its an ooze you sac to get a big fatty of a dragon.

Next: Hand of Death! Aiiiieee!

first of all @ windandfire Fusion Elemental is a terrable card, when will you ever play it over any of the over five colour cards, such as sliver overlord or Maelstrom Archangel, and unless your extreamly lucky i would like to see you constantly get a five coulour creature out at turn 5, the orginal may of costed 6 but you can cast it on turn 4

after my rant, Bass i like the way made Tsabo Tavoc search abilty. so 8/10

Hand of death

Enchanment
, sacrifise ~: destory target creature

Hand of Death is pretty cool. Like Executioner's Capsule.

Next card, please?

sorry it's Foxfire Oak next

ok, let me give this a try.
I really like Hand of Death, but couldn't you enchant a creature your opponent controls and get a 2 for 1?

Foxfire Oak RR2
Creature- Fox
R, T: Destroy target land. Foxfire oak doesn't untap during your next untap phase.
2/2

Next card, Akroma, Angel of Wrath

Back @Sliver Chocobo

Foxfire Oak: 7/10 I'm not sure how balanced every-other-turn land kill is, especially in a land destruction deck (imagine if you had two of them). But it's a nice concept. You do lose points because it's not a treefolk though (foxfire is more of a saying than a fox's ability, though not many people are familiar with that).

Akroma, Angel of Wrath -
Legendary Creature - Angel
Flying, lifelink, vigillance
When Akroma is put into a graveyard from play, destroy all creatures. They can't be regenerated.
: Sacrifice Akroma.
6/6

Next Fracture: Wrath of Marit Lage, which referances the creature trapped in the Dark Depths. Stupid Vampire Hexmage, releasing ancient horrors from their worldly prisons!

Foxfire Oak: 5/10. The card really needs to be respectful of the fact that and Oak is a tree, and that there's a difference between foxfire and firefox. The card itself, however, seems fairly balanced when I look at other land-destroying creatures. I'm still wary of it, and might suggest adding to the activation cost or restrict it to nonbasic lands.

Also, Sliver Chocobo's Hand of Death was not an Aura. The sacrifice ability was on the enchantment itself. This is odd, but not unheard of.

Precognitive Edit: I got so stumped by trying to figure out a decent fracture for Akroma that I managed to get ninja'd by windandfire. Oh well. I guess I can stop working on my Akroma now.

That's like a 2-hour time frame you could have refreshed the page in. Nice one there. I'm sure Wizards would enjoy it if they had someone with that type of dedication. (Not meant to be sarcastic, but a note to MonkeyChewToy's awesomeness).

Hey, I love the hexmage releasing ancient horrors! All hail Marit Lage and her easily bounceable self!

Akroma - This is a very cool card. At first, a tap ability on a big fatty is bad, but you create interesting tension in the card because her tap ability just kills herself. But she has Vigilance, which lets her attack. The fact that it's a tap ability means she can't use it the turn you play her, making her fairer. AND, you've got to exile or bounce her otherwise you get Wrathed. And, if you stick her with Indestructibility, you can Stifle or Voidslime the sacrifice ability as it's an effect not a cost to keep her around! I really, really, like this card. Great idea.

Next: Smoke

Smoke

Instant (U)
Creatures can't attack this turn. Each player discards a card.
Edit - forgot to add the naext fracture, which is [url=http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=25949]Necravolver[url].

-DH

@Smoke: Good concept, but red feels more like attacking and not blocking. I like the discard.
@Wrath of Marit Lage: Nice job! Maybe it's just a bit too expensive.

Necravolver -
Creature - Volver
Kicker and/or
Intimidate
If ~ was kicked with , ~ enters the battlefield with two +2/+2 counters, has trample, and is green.
If ~ was kicked with , ~ enters the battlefield with two +2/+2 counters, has lifelink, and is white.
2/2

Next Fracture: Archon of Justice

@Windandfire: Thanks for the praise. I was kind of thinking something like the vastly underrated Intimidation Bolt. Your Necravolver is a really awesome card.

Archon of Justice

Creature - Archon
3/3
Flying
White creatures are indestructible and have shroud.

Next card: Baneslayer Angel

Archon of Justice - I really like it. I think, for it's cost, it should probably have flash to make it a sweet control trick.

Next: Volcanic Eruption

Baneslayer Angel - I like this take on the angel. And I like the "she has" wording, even though it's incorrect. You missed the mythic rare status though.

Volcanic Eruption -
Sorcery
As an additional cost to cast Volcanic Eruption, sacrifice any number of mountains.
Volcanic Eruption deals X damage plus 1 for each mountain in your graveyard to each creature and player.

Next Fracture: Molten Influence

Volcanic Eruption 7/10 costly but i like it

Molten Influence

Enchantment
Whenever a moutain leaves play deal one damage to each creature and player
every one mouns the loss of a moutain

Shivan dragon is next

Shivan Dragon

6/6
Flying
Sacrifice a mountain: Destroy target creature with power 3 or less.
When ~ attacks, destroy all creatures with power 3 or less that defending player controls.

Next Up: Ghastlord of Fugue

sorry forgot to post the mana cost of the card
also the last three cards work verry well together

Ghastlord of Fugue

Creature - Spirit Avatar
Flying, shroud
Whenever Ghastlord of Fugue deals damage to a player, that player discards three cards, and you draw three cards.
5/5
Rare

Next fracture - City of Shadows

Ghastlord of Fugue: 10/10. AWESOME! A perfect combination of blue and black.

City of Shadows
Land
~ enters the battlefield tapped.
: Add to your mana pool.
Pay X life, : Add to your mana pool for each 1 life you paid. You can't activate this ability until your fifth turn.

Next fracture - Serra Avenger

i like it ! 9/10, i would have used "You can't activate unthil your Xth turn". but that will be my vision ^^

Serra avenger W
Creature - Angel (R/M) ?

flying, vanashing 1, kicker
use only white mana to pay X
if ~ was kicked put X time couneters on ~
6/6

next is : apocalypse hydra

Apocalypse Hydra - 5RG
Creature - Hydra (M)

When Apocalypse Hydra comes into play, destroy all nonland permanents.
1/1

"I think they should have called it the 'Whoops Apocalypse Hydra'" - Squee

Next: Dystopia

Apocalypse Hydra - I love the ability, but I find it weird/funny that this terrifying hydra is just a 1/1. It's quite funny though, to drop this, kill everything, and then slowly ping away your opponent.

Next: Chronomantic Escape