I really like this. Although I think there's an aspect of this card that's off (nothing says that the creatures have to attack, but that's a nitpick,) I really like the design overall.

Also, I believe Sensei's Divining Top would like to have a word with you.

Bloodletter Quill

Artifact
, Sacrifice an artifact creature: Draw two cards.
Its etherium can be salvaged. The knowledge gained from its sacrifice is priceless.
-Lodus of the Ethersworn

Next fracture - Apocalypse

I'm glad you like it. I don't think the card needs to force creatures to attack. It wants you to build an army, and wade in, forcing your opponent to sacrifice things he needs (bearing in mind, he can sacrifice his own free copy of Total War the first time round!)

But I don't get the Sensei's Diving Top thing.

Bloodletter Qull - I actually really like it. I'm unsure as to its power level, but I like how it's like a Phyrexian Vault variant.

Next: Lord Magnus

Apocalypse - 7/10. It's kind of similar to the original, and I don't really get the last ability flavorwise.

Lord Magnus -
Legendary Creature - Human Warrior
Whenever a green or white creature blocks, it gains +0/+5 and first strike until end of turn.
:Untap target green or white creature.
3/3

Next: Door of Destinies

Lord Magnus - 7/10 - nice card but it looks a little overpowered to me, 5 toughness might be a little to much.

Door to Destinies -
Instant
Choose a creature, that creature is exiled, gains suspend and has X +1/1 counters and time counters placed on it, you choose what X is.

next: Protean Hulk

HudsonWolf - Apocalypse means both "widespread cataclysm" AND "prophetic revelation". Hence why it creates "Future Sight" for everyone.

Door to Destinies - I think there's a good card here, but it's templated poorly. I assume, what you mean is that you suspend one of your OWN creatures. If you can suspend your opponent's creature, it just exiles them forever. You make X "one million billion"! (Also, there's the problem that exiled cards can't get +1/+1 counters...)

I THINK the templating then is this (not sure, it's quite difficult):
"Exile a creature you control. Put any number of time counters on it. If it doesn't have suspend, it gains suspend. When it enters the battlefield, put a +1/+1 counter on it for each time counter removed in this way."

If you want to exile your opponent's creatures, I suggest that the controller of the creature chooses how many time counters are placed on it.

I really like the idea of the card. It's a cool way of saving a creature, and it has some cool choices. The only thing I don't like is that it's colorless. I think it's a very White card. But great idea!

Next: Assassinate

Protean Hulk - 7/10 - Overpowered in the right hands; you can summon anything from your deck at instant speed, assuming you had lots of extra mana to pump into him from the first (not to mention how powerful Thrive and Incremental Growth becomes in a deck with him).

Next: Bringer of the White Dawn

Assassinate - 10/10. I quite like it. It fits the name perfectly, and is a cheap solution to annoying legendaries.

Bringer of the White Dawn -
Creature - Bringer
Flying, Vigilance
When Bringer of the White Dawn enters the battlefield, untap all white creatures.
When Bringer of the White Dawn leaves the battlefield, tap all black and green creatures.
, : You gain 4 life.
5/5

Next: Warp World

Bringer of the White Dawn - So, at first, I was going to say, "Bad HudsonWolf! You don't put tap abilities on fatties because people want to attack with them!" But, then I realised you gave the creature vigilance so, like Godsire, it can do both. Well done. I also like the way it hoses colors, but shouldn't it tap RED creatures, not GREEN? Since White's enemy is red, not green. Cool card.

Multiplayer mischief! Yay! (... actually just realised that in a duel, this does nothing since you end up with the same cards... Maybe remove the 'proceed clockwise' and just have everyone just exchange permanents with the player on their left. Argh, I dunno.)

Next: Hero's Demise because, y'know... if Vinyacoire's gonna transform Assassinate into Hero's Demise, what will Hero's Demise become? "Destroy target tapped creature?" (I actually like how the flavour for Assassinate works perfectly with Hero's Demise's game text.)

Warp World - 8/10, with the changed wording. I certainly agree that warping seems more blue than red, really... But this would be horridly overpowered in a deck running no permanents... (I burn you down to ten, and then steal your board! ) Though, of course, those aren't too common.

Hero's Demise -
Instant
Choose a legendary creature on the battlefield. Its controller sacrifices it. Creature spells with the same name as the sacrificed creature cannot be cast.

Next: Ooze Garden

RE: Warp World... I reckon if you can last five turns without any permanents, you deserve to steal their board!

Hero's Demise - Hero's Demise is very very very cool. In fact, you know what I'd love? If it was an enchantment with flash. Then, if you got rid of the enchantment, the hero could RETURN!!!! *dramatic music* I do love the flavour here.

Next: Magical Hack

Ooze Garden - With only the slight change of adding 'non-Ooze' into that second ability, I'd say 9/10. As is, 7/10, probably...

Magical Hack -
Sorcery
Target player reveals their hand. You may cast one instant or sorcery spell from their hand as if it was in your hand.

Next: Soul Bleed

Yay! New card!

I like your fix for Ooze Garden. Good catch.

Magical Hack - Word of Command! I like the idea but the card wouldn't ever work. I cast Magical Hack on you, and you have Cruel Ultimatum. I need to be playing BLACK and RED to cast it. You have Dramatic Entrance - I need GREEN. Basically, unless your opponent is playing blue, it's very hard to use this card because you have to pay 5 in ADDITION to the sorcery or instant's mana cost. I'd suggest making Hack cost 6 and it can cast the sorcery or instant without paying its mana cost OR you do this for : "Target player reveals his or her hand. You may cast one instant or sorcery card from their hand as if it was in your hand. Mana in your mana pool that you spend to cast that card can be spent as though it were mana of any color." (Or something, my templating may be off.)

Next: Psionic Blast

Overall, I give Soul Bleed a 9/10. Good flavor to it.

Psionic Blast

Sorcery
As an additional cost to cast ~, discard your hand.
~ deals 1 damage to each player for each card discarded this way.

Next one: Dakkon Blackblade

Psionic Blast - 8/10 - very nice.

Dakkon Blackblade -
Legendary Creature - Orc Warrior
If you control a plains Dakkon Blackblade has vigilance.
If you control an island Dakkon Blackblade has flying.
If you control a swamp Dakkon Blackblade has : Regenerate this creature.
If you control a mountain Dakkon Blackblade has double strike.
If you control a forest Dakkon Blackblade has trample.
Dakkon Blackblades power and toughness are each equal to the ammount of differant basic lands you control, if you control 5 differant types of basic lands his power and toughness are twice that amount.
X/X

Next: Saproling Symbiosis

Dakkon - I like that he is an Orc. I think though, the card suffers from too many abilities. For example, there is no point in saying "If you control a Swamp, Dakkon has : Regenerate Dakkon." because you need swamps to regenerate him. True, nonbasic lands would fulfill it, but considering how much space there is on cards, this is just too cumbersome to be worth it. If you pull up MSE, take a look at how this game text looks on a card. It's going to be nearly unreadable, unfortunately. Also, his mana cost is so bizarre, I just don't get what I can use to play him. And there's little point in saying "the more basic lands you have the better this guy is" when his mana cost is almost all five colors (and then there's the bizarre ). He's all over the place. I'd suggest making him and 5/5 with vigilance, flying, double strike, trample, and the regenerate (though that's probably too good). The reason I suggest this is everything on the card says, "If you have all 5 lands out he's great, otherwise, he's useless", so cut out the "if". Just make him WUBRG and make him what you want him to be. Saves time, is much more elegant, and is far less annoying. As he is, he's just too, too confusing and nitpicky for my tastes, I'm afraid. :\

I do like that he's an Orc though. That's super cool.

Next: Helm of Chatzuk

Ouhm, about Dakkon, http://wiki.mtgsalvation.com/article/Dakkon_Blackblade maybe a planeswalker is better than an orc? Or even if you go with the pre-spark version, he's still a human blacksmith.

*bumpity* I love this game. Someone try their hand! *puppy dog eyes*

Since no one is taking it up, maybe the Helm is problematic. So I did it.

Next: Machinate

Hmmmmm...

Machinate
XUU
Instant
Look at the top X cards of your library. Put one of those cards into your hand and the rest on the bottom of your library in any order.

(It might be bad, but I do not care.)

Next card...let's go old school with Skullcllamp

Skullclamp is old school? Jeez, I feel old as dirt now. Thanks.

Yay! New card!

Machinate - I like how the card works, but I think is a fair cost for it. It's a cool instant trick that let's you draw one card that you need without being a straight tutor. It's a cool, simple card.

Next: Scent of Ivy

Skullclamp - 9/10

Scent of Ivy -
Instant
Search your library for up to 3 forests and put them into play. Sacrifice them at end of turn unless you pay for each forest put into play this way.

Next: Beacon of Tomorrows

Scent of Ivy - 6/10. Mana acceleration is nice, but that card is practically unplayable without an infinite mana combo. Just to get one forest, you'd need seven mana, essentially... and for the full effect you'd need 13, 11 of it colored.

Beacon of Tomorrows -
Legendary Artifact
: Scry X, where X is the number of cards in your hand.
, : Draw a card, then discard a card. If the discarded card is blue, draw another card.
Those most ready for tomorrow are those who prepare for it today.

Next: Blood Cultist

Nono, Hudsonwolf; Ragnarokio's Scent of Ivy puts forests onto the battlefield untapped. You can either use the forest that turn OR tap it to keep it around. It's a really, really smart idea for a card. Think of it this way "Search your library for 3 Forest cards and choose one - Put those cards onto the battlefield tapped; or, Put those cards onto the battlefield and sacrifice them at the beginning of the end step." Maybe it should cost less, I dunno. But I love the idea of it.

EDIT - Reread it. I was wrong. It needs you to pay for each Forest which is waaaay too much. I loved what I thought it said. It was a really cool tension. Probably work well as a red/green hybrid card.

Beacon of Tomorrows - I love how you made it an artifact. That is so cool. I'm worried that it's broken, and I can't tell how powerful it is simply because I never play cards like this. I'm sure it's powerful. I like the idea for it, and the flavour text is very appropriate.

Next: Zhang Fei, Fierce Warrior

With the Ivy Scent i made the card wrong. The way i had intended it was you pay for each forest you want to keep. So if you brought 3 out you could pay to keep 1 and sacrifice the other two. After re-reading it i think it would be more balanced at and reducing the cost of the spell itself by

Blood Cultist - 9/10 - I don't think i'd play this in any of my decks but it looks really solidley built.

Zhang Fei, Fierce Warrior -
Legendary Creature - Human Samurai
Bushido 4, Double Strike, Vigilance
Whenever Zhang Fei blocks or becomes blocked and survives put a +1/1 counter on him.
3/3

Next: Garruk Wildspeaker

Zhang Fei - I think giving him Bushido and Double strike is unneccessary. He's essentially a 6/3 who, if blocked, becomes a 14/7, which is just bizarre. 7/7 is big enough considering how he keeps growing. In fact, a high Bushido betrays the +1/+1 counter. The counter doesn't matter much if he's a 7/7. It's suggest dropping the Bushido, and Double strike, and leaving the rest as it is, because I love the +1/+1 counter part of him, and the way it connects with vigilance. A 3/3 Vigilance creature that can get a +1/+1 counter each turn is pretty cool.

See, the game text of "At end of combat, if Zhang Fei blocked or was blocked this turn, put a +1/+1 counter on him" (that's how you'd template it btw, since there's no terminology of 'survive'), is really very cool. What's cool is that he has to survive combat to 'learn'. If you stick him with Bushido 4 and Double strike, it's almost impossible to kill him in combat, making that clause pointless and the entire ordeal of bulking him up pointless: he's already big enough to survive. Without those two elements, you are inspired to try to take advantage of the card. Perhaps I stick Alluring Siren in my deck to make sure I can capitalize on his ability, and I play something to give him first strike to protect him, or give him provoke so I can pick and choose who I fight. Your version, by putting all the answers on the card, makes him less interesting. But the idea is really sound. I love it.

Next: Conservator

Conservator

Artifact
If two or more mana would be added to a players mana pool from a single mana ability, add only one mana of a color that would have been produced in this way, and put a charge counter on Conservator for each other mana that would have been produced instead.
, Remove a charge counter from Conservator: Add one mana of any color to your mana pool.
"Taking what's excess now, to be used for later."
-Phraigsec, journal

Next fracture - Oubliette

*sniffle* I liked my Garruk 'walker. But, I did think, "maybe I should make a legendary creature version of him instead of another walker". I thought my walker looked cooler, but here's my creature version

Anyhoo - Conservator: I really like it. It's a cool answer to certain strategies and fits the name really well. Good job.

Next: Urza's Miter

Oubliette - 10/10 - I like what you did with it, and it went against my expectations (I was expecting a land,) I would love to expand on the imprison mechanic, if that's OK with you.

Urza's Miter

Artifact - Equipment
Equipped creature is an artifact in addition to all other types.
As long as equipped creature is an artifact, it is indestructible.
Equip

Next fracture - Tablet of Epityr

Urza's Miter: 10/10. Very cool.

Tablet of Epityr
Artifact
Whenever an artifact you control is put into a graveyard from the battlefield, you may pay . If you do, look at the top four cards of your library, then put them back in any order.
The sages of Epityr are able to divine secrets by scrying the shattered gears of Urza's fallen masterpieces.

Next: Bribery

Tablet of Epityr - That's a really cool design, with a great resonant flavour. I like it.

Jrzman - Glad you liked the dungeon as much as I did. If you want to play with it, please do.

Next: Demoralize

Bribery - Nice mixing of Gwafa Hazid's ability, but as a whole I don't quite get it.

Demoralize

Choose one - Untap all attacking creatures you don't control, and remove them from combat; or remove all blocking creatures you don't control from combat. (Creatures blocked by those creatures are still blocked.)

Next fracture - Acolyte of Xathrid

My idea behind Bribery was that you use Black to appeal to their greed in order to bribe them. Then, once bribed, you can stop them attacking you (white), or stop them from using their abilities (blue).

Demoralize - I love the idea, but I think it should be white/red (since the first ability is very white), and it should cost more. For your opponent can't block, which seems a little too powerful to me, especially since the card doubles as a time walk by preventing your opponent from attacking. Power level aside, this is a terrific card.

Next: Wonder

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Wonder UU

Creature - Incarnation
U1 Exlie ~: counter target spell, play only if ~ in your gravyard
2/2

next one is Serra Avenger

Edit sorry couldn't get the link to work

Wonder 8/10, cool double-sided card!

Serra Avenger
Creature - Zombie
Whenever ~ attacks a white creature, ~ deals 1 additional damage to that creature.
"That darned Serra took away what life I had left. I will destroy her no matter what it takes"
3/2

Don't you mean blocks or is blocked rather than attacks a white creature and what is the next card
Other than that it's a cool card 7/10

Is blocked by I mean. Sorry haven't done magic in months

Next card: Ancient Ziggurat

Hmmm
Ancient Ziggurat
Tribal Land - Mountain dragon
add to your mana pool
sacrifice a creature add mana equil to it's mana cost to your mana pool use this mana only to play dragon spells

Toughtweft Trio is up next

Ancient Ziggurat - I really like it. However I think it needs to enter the battlefield tapped and it needs to tap to sac creatures. Other than that, I think it works wonderfully.

Next: Ribbon Snake

Thoughtweft Trio - Like all the uses of 3s, but a bit overcosted here. Could maybe cost .

Ribbon Snake
Creature - Snake
Ribbon Snake enters the battlefield with two +1/+1 counters on it.
Remove a +1/+1 counter from Ribbon Snake: Ribbon Snake gains flying until end of turn. Draw a card.
2/2

PS. You don't have to copy the URL when you link to a card - there are [card] tags available to use (though they don't work when your card name has punctuation in it).

Next fracture: Choose one - Eight-and-a-Half-Tails; or Viashivan Dragon.

Ribbon Snake - Great flavor. I like that it almost "cracks" the counters off it when it flies up.

Viashivan Dragon -
Creature - Dragon
Flying
When ~ attacks, if an opponent controls an untapped creature, you may have target creature block Viashivan Dragon this turn if able.
: Viashivan Dragon gets +1/+1 until end of turn. Activate this ability only if Viashivan Dragon is blocked or blocking.
The Viashivan understand that cruelty arises from opportunity.
4/4

Next: Sonic Seizure

cool 8/10

Eght and half tails
Legendary creature - fox cleric
Defender, proctiton from non-white
~ can block any number of creature
~ gets +1/+1
2/2

Sonic Seizure
Instant
deal three damage to target creature or player and one to you

next is Oona's blackguard

Eight and a Half Tails - I'm not sure how much fun this would be to play with or against.

Sonic Seizure - I like that it's a weaker version of Char, and it's wonderfully costed, but shouldn't it be Red? Make it Red and I think you've got a great card here.

Next: Keeper of the Nine Gales

it a smaller version of the blue card psionic blast, char is a red version of it

Keeper of the Nine Gales
creature - Dragon Lord
Flying, trample
Other creatures with flying get +1/+1
5/5

next shale be Sliver Queen

Keeper of the Nine Gales - 78% You lose points for the possibility of a mono-blue dragon and mono-blue trample.

Sliver Queen -
Legendary Creature - Sliver
All Slivers have "whenever this creature deals combat damage to a player, put a 1/1 colorless sliver creature token into play.
7/7

Next: Peer Pressure

Sliver Queen - 90% I like it better than the original; the original didn't give any benefits to all slivers, which seems odd for the sliver archetype.

Peer Pressure
Instant
Kicker
Gain control of target creature if it was blocked by two or more creatures this turn. Untap it and remove it from combat. (This effect doesn't end at end of turn)
If ~ was kicked, gain control of all creatures that were blocked by two or more creatures this turn. Untap them and remove them from combat. (This effect doesn't end at end of turn)

Next: Collapsing Borders

Peer presure 7/10

Collapsing Borders
Echantment
All planes have add to your mana pool
All islands have add to your mana pool
All swamps have add to your mana pool
All mountains have add to your mana pool
All forests have add to your mana pool

next is Shard Pheonix

Collapsing Borders - That's a pretty cool card. I had a similar one in one of my many random idea files. Simple and fun card.

(btw, I'm aware Char is a redo of Psionic Blast, but Blue shouldn't get direct damage.)

Next: Ensnare

Shard Phoenix - 8/10. Pretty cool, and I really like the art, but that second ability can stack as much as you can afford... was that intended?

Ensnare -
Instant
Tap target attacking creature and remove it from combat. It doesn't untap during its controller's next untap step.

Next: Carnage Altar

RE: Shard Phoenix - the second ability is meant to stack. Is that a problem? I see it that for you get 4 pings, which isn't that superpowerful. Am I missing something?
Also, the art is the art for Shard Phoenix.

Ensnare - That's absolutely perfect. A terrific blue combat trick. Great little common. Simple and elegant.

Next: Hazezon Tamar

right then

the Alter is sounds cool, but can't see it being used
Hazezon Tamar
Creature - Elf Lord
At the begining of your upkeap put 1/1 green beast token onto the batlefeid
2/1

can you remake Kulrath Knight