The Remake a Card Game

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Fri, 2009-06-05 20:03
mizzl_
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The Remake a Card Game

So, the idea is, you take a card that already exists, any card, for example Goblin Raider, and change it completely EXCEPT for it's name. Eg.


Goblin Raider Red mana symbolRed mana symbol
Creature - Goblin
1 mana symbolRed mana symbol, Tap symbol, Sacrifice ~: ~ deals 2 damage to target creature or player.
2/1

It's just an example, I didn't actually think about it.
Oh, and rate the previous card, and don't forget to choose the next card name.

Next: Glory of Warfare

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Sat, 2009-06-06 03:45
kamui_hiryoku
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Hmm...okay then. Glory of

Hmm...okay then.

Glory of Warfare
2 mana symbolRed mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Enchantment
Whenever a creature you control becomes blocked, you may pay Red mana symbol. If you do, it gains first strike until end of turn.
Whenever a creature you control blocks, you may pay White mana symbol. If you do, it gains lifelink until end of turn.

Next: Lifetap.


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Sat, 2009-06-06 09:50
copapoc
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okayyours is quite fun

okay
yours is quite fun ^_^

okay

lifetap 3B

enchantment

X mana symbolX mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol,Tap symbol: target player loses X life , if x is more than 5 you gain X life

next
Autochthon Wurm

alive and kicking relics of alara

Mon, 2009-06-08 04:35
kamui_hiryoku
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You forgot to rate my last

You forgot to rate my last one, copapoc.
Anyway, I give your Lifetap a 10/10. Fits the flavor and, if anything, is a better color for what you'd expect it to be. Anyway...

Autochthon Wurm
4 mana symbolBlack/green mana symbolBlack/green mana symbolBlack/green mana symbol
Creature - Wurm
Trample
Black/green mana symbol, Tap symbol, Sacrifice a creature: Put X +1/+1 counters on ~, where X is the toughness of the sacrificed creature.
4/4

Next one: Ribbons of Night


Check out my set: Aftermath.

Mon, 2009-06-08 16:24
copapoc
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10/10 couse this is could

10/10 couse this is could fit in the original set but in a totally different

ribbons of night 4 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol

sorcery

during your upkeep put a ribbon counter on target creature

2 mana symbolBlack mana symbol: all creatures lose -1/-0 for each ribbon couner on them until end of turn

"each one makes it thigther"

alive and kicking relics of alara

Mon, 2009-06-08 17:17
mizzl_
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Copapoc, for the nth time,

Copapoc, for the nth time, please, format your posts nicely.

Like so


Ribbons of Night 4 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Sorcery
During your upkeep, you may put a ribbon counter on target creature
2 mana symbolBlack mana symbol: Each creature gets -1/-0 until end of turn for each ribbon counter on it.
"Each one makes it tighter"

Even then, it's not balanced, it's waay overcosted, for 6 mana you can get alot better things then lowering creature's power slowly and expensively.
Also, putting just 1 counter per upkeep is extremely slow. And above all, since when does a Sorcery act exactly like an Enchantment?
How 'bout:


Ribbons of Night 1 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Enchantment
2 mana symbol: Put a ribbon counter on target creature.
Black mana symbol, Tap symbol: Target creature gets -1/-1 until end of turn for each ribbon counter on it.
"Each one makes it tighter"

So, what's the next card, Copapoc?

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Mon, 2009-06-08 19:18
copapoc
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oh no ! (should realy stop

oh no ! (should realy stop doing more than 1 thing at a time ...)
i apologize for this

next card is wrath of god

alive and kicking relics of alara

Mon, 2009-06-08 19:40
mizzl_
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Haha, nice choice. Okay

Haha, nice choice.

Okay


Wrath of God White mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Sorcery
Each player that controls three or less white permanents loses 4 life.

Next: Identity Crisis - Sorcery

EDIT: Yes I know it's not a very white kind of card..

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mizzl_

Mon, 2009-06-08 20:32
Vinyacoire
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Identity Crisis

Wrath of God - 8/10 - You're right, it doesn't feel white; either way, I like the card and it's a good idea.

Identity Crisis Blue mana symbol
Enchantment - Aura
Enchanted creature loses all abilities.

Next: Bad Moon

Mon, 2009-06-08 20:41
mizzl_
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Again, a very simple

Again, a very simple one.

Bad Moon Black mana symbol
Sorcery
Until end of turn, nonblack creatures get -2/-2 for each card named Bad Moon in your graveyard.
1 mana symbolBlack mana symbol: Return ~ from your graveyard to your hand.

Next: The so very famous Path to Exile

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Tue, 2009-06-09 04:39
kamui_hiryoku
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9/10 - I like it. It's very

9/10 - I like it. It's very simple, and very playable although, I guess you'd have to discard the first one somehow.

Path to Exile
1 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Instant
Put three time counters on target creature. If it doesn't have vanishing, it gains vanishing.

Next one: War Tax


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Tue, 2009-06-09 23:55
windandfire
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Path to Exile - 10/10 It

Path to Exile - 10/10 It reminds me of Reality Acid

War Tax - 2 mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Enchantment
Whenever a creature attacks you, you may pay 2 mana symbolBlue mana symbol. If you do, draw a card.

Next: Spellweaver Volute

"I will do science to it." - Kimiko “Thunderbolt” Ross
"I can wire anything directly into anything - I'm the professor!" - Professor Hubert J. Farnsworth
"Our tanks can't hold aggro of that magnitude!

Wed, 2009-06-10 00:21
innuendo
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How strange if you PtE (your

How strange if you PtE (your version) a creature with vanishing it would actually stay in play longer...hehe.

Current Projects: Siege TCG

Wed, 2009-06-10 02:45
Vinyacoire
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Spellweaver Volute

War Tax - 8/10 - A nice variation for blue to tax your attacks, but I don't see the correlation drawing...

Spellweaver Volute 4 mana symbolBlue/black mana symbol
Enchantment
Blue/black mana symbolTap symbol: Copy target spell. You lose life equal to that spells converted mana cost.

Next: Measure of Wickedness

Sat, 2009-06-13 23:32
kamui_hiryoku
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Pretty good. I like that

Pretty good. I like that one. It fits the name well enough and it definitely fits the colors. I give it a 9/10. Now...

Measure of Wickedness
3 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Enchantment
Sacrifice ~: Each opponent loses 1 life for each black permanent he or she controls.

Nextly: Eye of the Storm


Check out my set: Aftermath.

Sun, 2009-06-14 17:00
Bass

Next: Grave Servitude

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Next: Grave Servitude

Sun, 2009-06-14 17:49
Pichoro
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Bass, please comply with

Bass, please comply with forum rules. All renders featuring art MUST have artist credit. They should also be in spoiler tags. Because you didn't credit the artist, your render was removed. Feel free to repost as text or with artist credit; your choice.

If Bass doesn't, everyone should probably proceed with Eye of the Storm.

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Sun, 2009-06-14 18:29
Bass

Whoops. Sorry. Cool thing

Whoops. Sorry. Cool thing is, I got to redo the card.

Spoiler:

Sun, 2009-06-14 19:05
Pichoro
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Spoiler tags added; please

Spoiler tags added; please use them in the future.

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Sun, 2009-06-14 19:27
windandfire
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Eye of the Storm: 8/10 While

Eye of the Storm: 8/10 While I like how it works, it doesn't convey the idea of there being a storm "before" it. (Storm -> Calm in the eye of the storm -> Storm)

Grave Servitude - 1 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Enchantment - Aura
As you cast Grave Servitude, return a Creature card from a graveyard to the battlefield under your control and attach Grave Servitude to it.
At the beginning of your upkeep, you loose life equal to the enchanted creature's toughness.

Next: Tribal Forcemage

"I will do science to it." - Kimiko “Thunderbolt” Ross
"I can wire anything directly into anything - I'm the professor!" - Professor Hubert J. Farnsworth
"Our tanks can't hold aggro of that magnitude!

Sun, 2009-06-14 23:40
Bass

I'm sorry, Pichoro. I will

I'm sorry, Pichoro. I will use spoilers from now on. I haven't been here in ages. A sad 'frowny'

Windandfire - I tried to think of a way to represent the 'calm' aspect and the storm prior, but it just made the card clunky and ugly, so I left it with the key ability.

Also - Grave Servitude is awesome. I'd so have used it in my old Buried Alive decks.

Spoiler:

Next: Soldevi Digger.

Mon, 2009-06-15 06:40
Wavy
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hey that is really neat!

hey that is really neat, 10/10
Definitely not underpowered I think (I wonder if it's too good, but Clone costs 1 more) and it seems more open ended than the actual Tribal Forcemage. I suppose it could be blue or blue-green but I'm not complaining.

Soldevi Digger 3 mana symbol
Artifact
Tap symbol: Look at the top three cards of your library and put them back in any order.
5 mana symbol: Put the card second from the top of your library into your hand.
"This ceaseless device has helped uncover marvels unreachable by mere flesh." -Arcum Dagsson, Soldevi Machinist

wait, I got a good one. Can I do two?

Soldevi Digger 1 mana symbol
Artifact
1 mana symbol: Look at the bottom card of your library.
Tap symbol: Put the bottom card of your library into your hand, then put Soldevi Digger on the bottom of your library.
[flavor text would deal with how it keeps getting lost during expeditions]

next person has to do Cateran Kidnappers

Mon, 2009-06-15 08:14
Icarael the Wanderer
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Soldevi Digger 01- 8/10.

Soldevi Digger 01- 8/10. It's a creative solution, but I'm uncertain the cost needs to be that high for the second ability.

Soldevi Digger 02- 7/10. It's kind of like an inverse Sensei's Divining Top, but the problem is in getting the Digger out again so you can grab the stuff you need.

Cateran Kidnappers 2 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Creature- Human Mercenary
When Cateran Kidnappers comes into play, look at target opponent's hand. You may choose a creature card with converted mana cost 4 or less and put it into play under your control.
2/1

Next card: Court Hussar

"Take the bridge, men! Victory! Victory is ou - Retreat! RETREAT!"

Mon, 2009-06-15 22:26
Bass

Cateran Kidnappers -

Cateran Kidnappers - 9/10
Elegant, flavorful ability. The only thing I'd say is lose the CMC requirement. Just let them kidnap anything. For four mana you can kill any creature in the game (WoG), so I think four mana steals a creature from their hand is fine. I might even go one step further and make it a sorcery, not a creature. But terrific solution.

Spoiler:

Big smile

Next: Island Fish Jasconius

Tue, 2009-06-16 20:49
windandfire
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Court Hussar - 10/10 It

Court Hussar - 10/10 It keeps the ravnica themes going.

Island Fish Jasconius - 2 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Fish
Islandwalk
When you control no islands, sacrifice Island Fish Jasconius.
2 mana symbol, Sacrifice an island: Change the target of a spell that targets only Island Fish Jasconius.
5/5

Next: Storm World

"I will do science to it." - Kimiko “Thunderbolt” Ross
"I can wire anything directly into anything - I'm the professor!" - Professor Hubert J. Farnsworth
"Our tanks can't hold aggro of that magnitude!

Wed, 2009-06-17 04:13
Wavy
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^ 9/10 blue fat is nice to

^ 9/10
blue fat is nice to have. Very solid in power level.

now as for Storm World, well, you saw this coming:

Storm World 2 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Enchantment
All instants and sorceries have Storm. (When a player casts an instant or sorcery spell, copy it for each spell played before it that turn. That player may choose new targets for the copies.)

At first I imagined it at 6RR, 5RR, 4RR... got to 2RRR, but then thought of making it a 2 mana symbolBlue/red mana symbolBlue/red mana symbolBlue/red mana symbol but then my thought was "well that would just makes things a little too easy"

next person has to do Grip of Chaos

p.s: Bass I am amused by Court Hussar's flavor text. Learn it.

anyway, Grip of Chaos

Wed, 2009-06-17 23:06
Bass

Heh - thanks Wavy. I thought

Heh - thanks Wavy. I thought it was appropriate considering how rubbish I've been at keeping to the rules.

As for Storm World - 8/10; cool rare that cries out for a terrifyingly exponential abuse package.

Spoiler:

Next card: Darkness

Thu, 2009-06-18 07:23
windandfire
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Grip of Chaos - 9/10 I love

Grip of Chaos - 9/10 I love that this completely messes with decks that rely on consistency (such as combo decks), but I don't think the cards should be exiled as someone might think you put exiled cards into the pile (like from unmake).

Funny enough, I was going to suggest Darkness but picked Storm World instead.

Darkness - 3 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Enchantment
2 mana symbolBlack mana symbol: All spells, permanents, and cards in each player's hand gain shroud until end of turn.
"An uncertain path is best meditated on before taking action." - Samite Monk

Next card: Fishliver Oil

"I will do science to it." - Kimiko “Thunderbolt” Ross
"I can wire anything directly into anything - I'm the professor!" - Professor Hubert J. Farnsworth
"Our tanks can't hold aggro of that magnitude!

Wed, 2009-06-24 21:58
Bass

Darkness - While it's a cool

Darkness - While it's a cool effect that works with the card's flavour, the effect is blue, green, or white. Black doesn't give shroud.

Spoiler:

Next: Pearled Unicorn

Thu, 2009-06-25 07:10
lord_joakim
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Pearled Unicorn

Pearled Unicorn | 1 mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Creature - Unicorn 2/2
Vigilance
Tap symbol: Put target blocking creature on top of its owner's deck. It's controller gains life equal to its power.
"'Do you know, I always thought Unicorns were fabulous monsters, too? I never saw one alive before!' 'Well, now that we have seen each other,' said the Unicorn, 'if you'll believe in me, I'll believe in you."' -Lewis Carroll

Next card is Scattering Stroke. It's actually one of my favorite cards, make it even more dear to me please. A happy smile

(Yes, I have weird favorites)

Thu, 2009-06-25 19:09
Citizen Raven
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Pearled Unicorn - 9/10 -

Pearled Unicorn - 9/10 - Interesting effect, LOVE the flavor text. It's amazing how much more you get for 3 mana now than you did when that card was first printed.

Scattering Stroke - 4UU
Instant
Choose two: Counter target spell and remove it from the game; or each player draws a card; or return two target creatures to their owner's hand; or untap target permanent you control.
"Where exactly are you going with this?"

NEXT: Megrim, simply because I love all decks that impliment it and want to see it in a different light.

Take me anywhere but seriously.
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Thu, 2009-06-25 21:31
Aurora Illumina
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Scattering Stroke - 8/10 -

Scattering Stroke - 8/10 - Nice command. However, abilities 2 and 4 seem totally underwhelming compared to 1 and 3.

Megrim 3 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Enchantment
Whenever a creature deals damage to a player, that player discards a card.
Every blow to the head is a blow to the mind.

The next card to fracture is Cylian Sunsinger. Note - I am looking for something special with this!

Illusion, reality
Traveling through eternity!
—Aurora,
Travel Through Eternity

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Fri, 2009-06-26 01:00
Bass

Megrim - Love it. I'd so

Megrim - Love it. I'd so play it in my discard decks.

Spoiler:

Next: Eureka!

Fri, 2009-06-26 01:13
ALEX Ryugami
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8/10

Cylian Sunsinger 8/10 - Repeatable many tokens generator at uncommon? Cool but overpowered.

Eureka! 1 mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Instant (R)
Choose a nonland card type, then reveal the top card of your library. If it's the card of the chosen type, you may play it without paying its mana cost.

Next: Hellkite Overlord

Sets that I make:
Ilesh Mini-Plane (Still working on)
Ilesh, Expanded
Tales of Asdoria

Fri, 2009-06-26 01:21
Aurora Illumina
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What I was looking for was

What I was looking for was that the Cylian Sunsinger interacts in some way with the real version as well.

Eureka - 9/10. Nice effect for the name, but doesn't really seem green. Seems more red, maybe blue.

Hellkite Overlord 5 mana symbolBlack mana symbolRed mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Creature - Dragon
Flying
Devour 2
When Hellkite Overlord comes into play, return target creature card from your graveyard to play. That creature gains haste until end of turn.
6/6

(Hint: Get your Dragon's Herald back!) <- Yes, someone in my playgroup has used a Dragon's Herald deck.

Next: Choose one - Spirit of the Night; or The Unspeakable.

Illusion, reality
Traveling through eternity!
—Aurora,
Travel Through Eternity

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Fri, 2009-06-26 01:28
Bass

Eureka - Awesome! Very

Eureka - Awesome! Very cool.

Spoiler:

Next: Battle Squadron

edit - ARG! Ninja'd! (one sec and I'll update)

Fri, 2009-06-26 01:39
Bass

Hellkite Overlord - Can the

Hellkite Overlord - Can the Overlord devour the creature it resurrects? Because that's a really cool interaction. I like this card.

Spoiler:

Next: Battle Squadron

Fri, 2009-06-26 01:46
Aurora Illumina
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It can't devour the creature

It can't devour the creature it resurrects, but it can resurrect a creature it devours.

Illusion, reality
Traveling through eternity!
—Aurora,
Travel Through Eternity

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Fri, 2009-06-26 01:58
Pichoro
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Aurora's use of the word

Aurora's use of the word "fracture" made me feel temporarily inspired.

A special render of Bass's "The Unspeakable"...

Spoiler:

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Fri, 2009-06-26 01:59
Bass

That's a cool interaction

Aurora - That's a cool interaction too!

Pichoro - Sweet! That looks awesome!

Fri, 2009-06-26 05:36
Citizen Raven
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Battle Squadron

Battle Squadron - 2GG
Creature - Elf Legion (R)
As long as a creature you control has first strike, ~ has first strike. The same is true for deathtouch, haste, lifelink, trample and reach.
Thousands of hearts pulse as one.

Next card could be fun: Soulless One

EDIT: Forgot to rate. The Unspeakable - 9/10 - As you envision it, it seems like a solid card. Makes me want to pair him up with Szadek, Lord of Secrets, though that is hardly a bad thing.

Take me anywhere but seriously.
Current project - Verassa Block set 1, Verassa

Fri, 2009-06-26 11:50
Pichoro
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lol... Unspeakable was

lol... Unspeakable was already rated. I was just playing around and doing a custom render to see what people thought of it.

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Fri, 2009-06-26 19:29
Bass

Battle Squadron - Cool green

Battle Squadron - Cool green variant on an ability we see little of. You forgot to give it P/T however. And the flavour text is awesome.

Spoiler:

Next: Funeral March

Fri, 2009-06-26 23:17
kamui_hiryoku
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Soulless One - 9.5/10 I

Soulless One - 9.5/10 I love it! It gets the flavor down, though maybe it's mana cost could be upped a little.

Funeral March
1 mana symbolBlack mana symbolWhite/black mana symbol
Enchantment
Whenever a creature is put into a graveyard from the battlefield, its controller taps each creature that shares a color with it. If he or she doesn't, that player taps each creature that shares a creature type with it.

Next one: Keldon Marauders


Check out my set: Aftermath.

Sat, 2009-06-27 04:54
Bass

Funeral March - I'm a bit

Funeral March - I'm a bit confused on how it works: I assume that if they control no creatures with a shared colour, they tap creatures with a shared creature type. I'd make it simpler and say they just tap both. Also, I'd make it cost 1 mana symbolBlack mana symbolWhite mana symbol since the hybrid is unnecessary and the tapping effect is white. Cool idea though.

Spoiler:

I just like how they can turn into a ball lightning. The art makes sense that way.

Next: Heroes' Reunion

Sat, 2009-06-27 05:52
ALEX Ryugami
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8/10

Keldon Marauders 8/10 - Red mana symbol intensive, I would cost this 1 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol and a 3/1 (even the picture depicts three person.)

Heroes' Reunion White mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Sorcery (U)
Return target legendary creature from your graveyard to play if you control a legendary creature.

Next: Black Lotus

Sets that I make:
Ilesh Mini-Plane (Still working on)
Ilesh, Expanded
Tales of Asdoria

Sat, 2009-06-27 07:33
Citizen Raven
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Heroes Reunion - 6/10 -

Heroes Reunion - 6/10 - There are a lot of ways for this to be broken. Isamaru Hound of Konda is Legendary, after all. For three mana, you could return Akroma to play. The flavor is nice, but it needs some restrictions or a change of mana cost.

As for the Lotus, I tried to make it interesting and not overpowered. Let's see how it worked.

Spoiler:

Next: Undermine

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Sat, 2009-06-27 16:23
Bass

Black Lotus - On turn two,

Black Lotus - On turn two, you can have five mana. Turn 1 - Black Lotus, Land. Tap BL to put a charge counter on it. Turn 2 - Land, Tap BL to put a charge counter on it. Then untap it and remove the charge counters to get 3 mana. Plus your 2 lands' mana. Then, tap Black lotus again to put a charge counter on it. Turn 3 - BL can, again, produce 3 mana. From turn 2, this produces 3 mana every turn. It's overpowered. However, it's a nice idea; charging up the card to produce mana.

Spoiler:

Templating this was hard as I believe this is a new ability. It's also may be too effecitve. Dunno.

Next: Rebirth
(Is anyone else just hitting 'random card' on Gatherer to choose their next card?)

Sat, 2009-06-27 17:29
Citizen Raven
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*shrugs* I'm not. I'm going

*shrugs* I'm not. I'm going by the cards I have played and what I think is fun.

Undermine - 10/10 - Who says red and black can't do interesting things to respond to spells, huh? I love everything about this card. I want four of them immediately. ^.^

Spoiler:

Next: Glorious Anthem

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Sat, 2009-06-27 18:04
Aurora Illumina
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Rebirth - 9/10. Nice card,

Rebirth - 9/10. Nice card, though it may need to cost a bit more for instant resurrect.

Glorious Anthem 2 mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Instant
Choose any number of target players. Each creature controlled by the chosen players gains protection from the color of your choice until end of turn.

Next card to fracture: Choose one - Empyrial Archangel; or Sphinx Sovereign.

(Despite being the one with the "greatest card ever" link in my sig, I'm actually not using it here.)

Illusion, reality
Traveling through eternity!
—Aurora,
Travel Through Eternity

Click here to see the greatest card ever.

Sun, 2009-06-28 00:02
Bass

Glorious Anthem - I like it!

Glorious Anthem - I like it! It's a really cool multiplayer card!

Spoiler:
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Next: Seedtime