Challenge Game

continued...
Fri, 2012-03-23 06:40
Utheraptor
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Woodheart Goblin - This can be useful, but not so much. I may see play in standart/modern, which is both fulfilled with nonbasics. Also, I really like the flavor. 7/10

Gilt-Leaf Wood
Plane - Lorwyn Snow mana symbol

Elf creatures you control get +2/+2 and have vigilance.
Whenever you roll Chaos Symbol, transform Gilt-Leaf Wood.

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Wilt-Leaf Wood
Plane - Shadowmoor Snow mana symbol

Nonelf creatures you don't control get -2/-2 and and has "Whenever a crerature would deal damage to this creature, that creature gains wither until end of turn.".
Whenever you roll Chaos Symbol, transform Wilt-Leaf Wood.

And next: I want to see some MASSIVE archenemy scheme.

Shoot for the Moon. Even if you miss, you will land among the stars.
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Fri, 2012-03-23 09:26
pang4
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Da plane: Gilt-leaf fits, but Wilt-leaf is more G/B than pro-red. I don't get the backside, but then again, it was a hard challenge. 6/10

My Hordes Reign Supreme
Ongoing Scheme
Whenever a creature you control dies, return it to the battlefield.
Abandon this scheme if six or more creatures you control have died this turn.
"Go ahead. Kill them. I dare you."

I know this card would be very easy to combo off with, but as Archenemy is a casual format, I don't expect that to happen.

Next challenge: Archenemy is often played with EDH decks. So, design a legendary creature that would work well as the Archenemy's General.

Furthermore, I believe Carthage should be destroyed.

Fri, 2012-03-23 16:20
Zuty
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My Hordes Reign Supreme - I think this should be changed to 'dies due to an effect an opponent controls' or something. Otherwise you will be getting 24 Black mana symbol mana from sacing Priest of Gix to a Phyrexian Altar. I'd also drop it from six to four, just seems to high. It's just a bit too much. I like the idea and where you were headed though 6/10

Yanul, Knowledge Seeker 2 mana symbolGreen mana symbolBlue mana symbol
M Mana for MTG Extra
Legendary Creature - Vedalken Wizard
Whenever a player draws a card, put a +1/+1 counter on ~.
Whenever an ongoing scheme is abandoned, draw two cards.
2/2

Next : Let's stick to casual play styles and go with poor man's EDH (7 uncommons, 92 commons, and any uncommon creature as the general). Design an uncommon creature that is good, but better when used as a general in poor man's EDH.

~Zuty

Fri, 2012-03-23 17:25
Styrofoamking
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Love the evilness of it all. However, I think it might have been stronger if it dealt with the ratio of players, or felt like a scheme himself (ex. each player loses 3 life for every player he's allied to.) That way, his rules would still apply outside of Archenemey games. 7/10

Tymor of Muraganda- 2 mana symbol:Green mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Cat Warrior Blue mana symbol
Creatures you control without abilities gain +1/+1.
Whenever a Beast enters the battlefield under your control, you may pay 1 mana symbolGreen mana symbol - if you do, draw a card.
3/3

Next challenge - Casual it is. Design a card for Two-Headed Giant!

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Fri, 2012-03-23 22:15
pang4
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Tymor: Me Gusta. The dude is sweet, encourages theme building and is a fun commander. 10/10

Unbreakable Covenant 2 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Sorcery Rare
As an additional cost to cast ~, sacrifice a teammate.
You get an emblem with "At the beginning of your upkeep, draw 2 cards and lose 2 life.".
"What has a man earned if he gains the world but loses his soul?"

Next: Make a card that works best in FFA-magic.

Furthermore, I believe Carthage should be destroyed.

Fri, 2012-03-23 22:44
Styrofoamking
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Unbreakable - HA!! Reminds me of an Un-Card I wrote.

Spoiler:

Fallen Angelo - 4 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Creature - Angel Rogue Red mana symbol
Flyin'
Sacrifice a creatuh: Fallen Angelo gets +2/+1 'til end of toin.
Sacrifice a playa allied to youse: Fallen Angelo gains +10/+5 'til end of toin. (A sacrificed player is removed from de game.)
"Eh, he waz prob'ly gonna rat youse out anyway."
4/4

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Sat, 2012-03-24 01:30
Sewn-Eye
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We're going to need another challenge.

EDIT - Nevermind.

"Too wary to charge, too prudent to serve. Not anymore."
—Sedris, the Traitor King

Sat, 2012-03-24 02:25
Styrofoamking
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I don't see why not. I had to look up FFA to realize it meant "Free for all", but even without knowing the name, that's what I've played for years. I'd do it myself if I hadn't written the one before.

EDIT:
These aren't the droids you're looking for. Move along.

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Sat, 2012-03-24 01:29
Sewn-Eye
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Sorry, thought your card was actually a submission. That would explain why it didn't fulfill the challenge and why the "rating" was rather lacking.

"Too wary to charge, too prudent to serve. Not anymore."
—Sedris, the Traitor King

Tue, 2012-03-27 18:09
Sensei Le Roof
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Three days, eh. New challenge time.

Give me a monocolored card that works best when splashed into an enemy-color deck.

Online dictionaries abound. It's time to start using them.

Thu, 2012-03-29 11:39
K1L1
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Unbreakable Convenant - I've seen the "sacrifice a teammate" cost on these forums before, so I can't really say that struck an originality string in me, but it is a fun cost. The draw and lose life is also a little underwhelming for the cost of losing your buddy. 7/10

Tehren Watchman White mana symbol
Creature - Human Soldier Blue mana symbol
Defender
Black/red mana symbol: Put a rage counter on ~ and it loses defender until end of turn.
~ gets +1/-1 for each rage counter on it.
Years of degrading guard duty and endless toil have sowed mutinous ideas in his head.
0/6

I really like the flavor of this guy. He's mad, but its up to you if he really starts rebelling. Also, one thing to take note of is that after 6 rage counters, he's dead. That's, at most, 5 attacks. You have to find the right balance between letting his rage build and holding it back.

Next: Make a red/green Elf Barbarian.

[b]New Challenge[b]! Make a non permanent, non red card that adds mana to your mana pool.

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Thu, 2012-03-29 12:42
Zuty
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Tehren Watchman - Very flavorful and I love flavor! 10/10

I'm not sure which of your challenges to go with since you listed two, so I'll just do both.

Elven Ransacker Red/green mana symbol
Blue mana symbol
Creature - Elf Barbarian
Haste
When ~ enters the battlefield, sacrifice it unless you sacrifice a land.
3/2

Ocean's Bounty Blue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Colorless mana symbol
Instant
Draw a card.
Add 2 mana symbol to your mana pool.

Next: Make Apprentice Wizard into a master!

~Zuty

Thu, 2012-03-29 15:59
Balaam
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Elven Ransacker - Since this card is so minimal I can really only compare it to Scythe Tiger. I'd say it's a 10/10.

Ocean's Bounty - It's okay. Drawing at instant speed is usually costed at 1 mana symbolBlue mana symbol with an additional effect, but the Blue mana symbolBlue mana symbol works well considering your getting back 2 mana symbol to use. It seems like a must have in any affinity deck running blue. 8/10\

Master Wizard 2 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
creature - Human Wizard Rare
Tap symbol: Add Blue mana symbolBlue mana symbol to your mana pool. Spend this mana only to cast instant spells.
Whenever you cast an instant spell, you may pay Blue mana symbol. If you do, put a +1/+1 counter onto ~.
1/1

Next - Make a creature with a cannon on it's back.

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Thu, 2012-03-29 16:14
Zuty
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Master Wizard - Well played. Shows how much spells really do play a part in a wizards hands and makes casting them a cinch. 10/10

Portable Charbelcher Red mana symbolRed mana symbol
Blue mana symbol
Creature - Goblin Artificer
2 mana symbol: ~ deals 1 damage to target creature or player. Sacrifice ~.
1/1
The Phyrexians aren't the only ones sacrificing their troops for the greater good.

Next: Make me a creature who is an outcast from his species and because of that hates them. (IE. Deranged Outcast) Be inventive and creative with it!

~Zuty

Thu, 2012-03-29 20:56
Styrofoamking
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Charbelcher - It's fun, but for a 2 CC uncommon, it's pretty weak (compare to Mogg Fanatic. Maybe if it cost 1 mana symbol and dealt 2 damage (making it a one-card Skull Catapult), or made you sack it at the end of turn (making it walking, one-use pyrokinetic), it might have worked better. 6/10

Jedit's Vanguard - 4 mana symbolWhite/blue mana symbol
Creature - Cat Warrior Red mana symbol
If Jedit's Vanguard is blocks or is blocked by a green creature, switch it's power and toughness until end of turn.
Whenever a green Cat becomes tapped, it does not untap during it's controller's next untap phase.
"Do I miss the jungle? Answer me this... have you ever used a rock as a pillow?"
3/6

Next card - Make an Orc!

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Thu, 2012-03-29 23:26
Zuty
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@Styrofoamking - You know you can keep activating the ability over and over again since the sac isn't part of the cost, right? It's like Goblin Cannon, except with a body.

Jedit's Vanguard - Nicely done! You avoided the easy route of giving it pro-TYPE or having you sac TYPE to do something. It also fairs well versus a color which it's type is found in, so it isn't as one sided as just hating TYPE, but also has a way of dealing with an entire color and having the added bonus of bashing a type in that color. 10/10

Orcish Miner Green mana symbol
Colorless mana symbol
Creature - Orc
Tap symbol, Sacrifice a mountain: Add three mana in any combination of Red mana symbol and/or Green mana symbol to your mana pool.
1/1
Mining is like a search-and-destroy mission. The orcs focus more on the 'destroy' part.

Next: Make me a Rhino lord!

~Zuty

Thu, 2012-03-29 23:07
Styrofoamking
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Goblin Cannon: I did NOT know that. 9/10 then.

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Fri, 2012-03-30 08:19
pang4
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Orcish Miner: So colorshifted Lumberjack? It's fin and all, but a bit unintuitive... 7/10

Vagrant Horncaller 1 mana symbolGreen mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Creature - Human Shaman Rare
Rhino creatures you control get +1/+1 and have trample.
2 mana symbolGreen mana symbol, Tap symbol: Put a 3/3 green Rhino creature token onto the battlefield.
"Nothing encomposes the great wilds more than three thousand pounds of raw power crashing onto it's foes."

Next: Continuing the lord theme, I want to see a Minotaur lord.

Furthermore, I believe Carthage should be destroyed.

Sat, 2012-03-31 03:35
Zuty
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Vagrant Horncaller - Wasn't expecting this, but I like it. No P/T, but I'd say anything over 1/1 is pushing it. 10/10

Labyrinth Warden 3 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Blue mana symbol
Creature - Minotaur Warrior
Other Minotaur creatures get +1/+1.
Whenever another Minotaur creature enters the battlefield, that creature deals damage equal to its power to target creature or player.
3/4

Next: The Kaldra and Empires are both sets of artifacts that work together when all the pieces are on the board. Create a card that is okay at it's cost, but REALLY shines when other pieces are in play.

~Zuty

Sat, 2012-03-31 18:12
wonderboy_7_7_7
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Labyrinth Warden - It's fun, but you might consider making it rare. In the right deck, it can be a Glorious Anthem + a Warstorm Surge for 5 mana on a 3/4 creature. 8/10

Graveyard Necromancer 1 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Creature - Human Wizard Red mana symbol
Deathtouch
Black mana symbolBlack mana symbol, Tap symbol: Put a 2/2 black Zombie token onto the battlefield. Activate this ability only if you control a land card named Graveyard.
1/2

Graveyard
Land Blue mana symbol
Tap symbol: Add 1 mana symbolBlack mana symbol to your mana pool.
When ~ enters the battlefield, sacrifice it unless a creature card is in your graveyard.

Next: Create a card that showcases intimidating your opponent for knowledge or power. Make it a nonblack card.

So long, so long, so long, and thanks for all the fish.
My favorite timmy punchline:
"I just assumed blue was the worst color."

Sat, 2012-03-31 18:27
Zuty
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Graveyard Necromancer - Very well done. A 1/2 deathtoucher for 2 in a relevant type ain't half bad, but it's token generation is where it really shines. 10/10

Knowledge Thief Blue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Red mana symbol
Creature - Human Rogue Wizard
Intimidate
Whenever ~ deals combat damage to an opponent, exile the top card of his or her library. As long as it remains exiled, you may play that card.
2/2

Next: Torment had a cycle of enchantments that allowed you to discard a card and pay a cost to do an effect or pay the same cost and just sacrifice the enchantment to do the same thing. What if the guilds in Ravnica had such a thing? Make the card uncommon and fit snuggle into a guild of your choice. It should really feel like the line of spells continued.

~Zuty

Sat, 2012-03-31 22:57
K1L1
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Knowledge Thief: A few problems with your card. For starters, blue doesn't get Bears at 2CMC, especially with another ability. Also, Intimidate is not a blue ability (I don't think the challenge meant to actually use intimidate on the card.) Finally, your wording is a bit off. It should be: "Whenever ~ deals combat damage to a player, exile the top card of his or her library. You may look at and play that card for as long as it remains exiled."

Avariciousness 1 mana symbolWhite/black mana symbol
Enchantment Blue mana symbol
White/black mana symbol, Discard a card: Target opponent loses 2 life and you gain 2 life.
White/black mana symbol, Sacrifice ~: Target opponent loses 2 life and you gain 2 life.

Next: Make a card that could be in a cycle with Goblin Guide.

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Sat, 2012-03-31 23:02
Sewn-Eye
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@k1l1 - I'm assuming Knowledge Thief was based off of Grimoire Thief. You'd have to exile the cards face down in order to be able to "look at them at any time" (technically speaking).

"Too wary to charge, too prudent to serve. Not anymore."
—Sedris, the Traitor King

Sat, 2012-03-31 23:15
K1L1
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@Sewn-Eye: I actually just stole the text off of Praetor's Grasp's ability. Probably should've made sure about the text before I tried to correct someone.

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Secret Project 2 - Skeleton complete!

Sat, 2012-03-31 23:32
Kagerowrs

Avariciousness - Reminds me Sorin heavily, very well done, but I don't think white should have repeatable life drain ability. Thinking the power, you might have able to use 1 mana symbolWhite mana symbolBlack mana symbol cost.

Devilish Guide Black mana symbol
Creature - Devil Scout Rare
Deathtouch, lifelink
Whenever Vampiric Guide attacks, defending player reveals the top card of his or her library and put it into his or her hand.
2/2
“I’ve seen everything of the world, I can show you some of them at cost as well.”

Next: Make a Force of Will Styled card, but with the ability of more powerful card. Such as Damnation (However, deduct point if you do use Damnation / Wrath of God.)

Sat, 2012-03-31 23:46
Inanimate
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(Especially since Sunscour already exists.)

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Sun, 2012-04-01 00:04
Sewn-Eye
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Devilish Guide - Well... I actually quite like this guy. It definitely seems like it'll do its job well, and it fits the order. So... 8.5/10

Force of Will-styled cards are called "pitch cards". Pyrokinesis is an old favorite of mine.

Mists of Lethe 3 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Sorcery Red mana symbol
You may exile two black cards from your hand rather than pay Mists of Lethe's mana cost.
Target opponent discards seven cards.

Next up! Design a Treefolk creature card. The word "Forest" must appear in its rules text.

"Too wary to charge, too prudent to serve. Not anymore."
—Sedris, the Traitor King

Sun, 2012-04-01 04:23
Inanimate
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Good use of the mythological River Lethe. I'd love to see this in a Greek mythology set. For some reason, the "old-school" mechanic of pitch-cards feels very connected to an old-school style set. I like it.

Ksylos Guardian 1 mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Creature - Treefolk Warrior Common
Forestsoul (As an additional cost to cast this spell, exile a Forest you control. When this creature leaves the battlefield, return the exiled card to the battlefield under its owner's control.)
Reach
2/3

Inspired by Genius loci.

Next: Make another card with a land-based keyword.

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Sun, 2012-04-01 00:34
Kagerowrs

Just asking Sewn-Eye, what happens if I use that in turn 1?

Sun, 2012-04-01 01:02
Bane of Leviathan
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ninja'd

Ksylos Guardian fits its challenge fairly exactly and look like a fun card to use 10/10

Geomancer's Staff 3 mana symbol
Artifact- Equipment

equiped creature has geomancy (equipped creature gets +1/+1 for each untapped land you control that could produce mana of a color of equipped creature)
equip 4 mana symbol

make a creature that hates itas controller but works out to their advantage

Sun, 2012-04-01 00:44
Sewn-Eye
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You would, uh, make them discard their entire hand. I can't believe I didn't think of that. I think "Target opponent discards a card for each Swamp you control" would work a bit better.

"Too wary to charge, too prudent to serve. Not anymore."
—Sedris, the Traitor King

Sun, 2012-04-01 00:50
Inanimate
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Bane, you forgot to give a new challenge, and your entry doesn't fit the challenge at all; you were suppowed to make a new keyword based on lands.

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Sun, 2012-04-01 01:04
Bane of Leviathan
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yeah i meant to click preview not save and like it now says i got ninja'd

Sun, 2012-04-01 15:29
eomund
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Geomancer's Staff - neat concept, although in terms of power level, I think you could drop the "untapped".

Hunger 2 mana symbolBlack mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Creature - Incarnation Mythic Rare
At the beginning of your upkeep, Hunger deals damage to you equal to its power.
Whenever Hunger deals damage, put that many +1/+1 counters on Hunger.
2/2

Make a card with a new keyword that allows you to cast spells from your graveyard (either directly from your graveyard like flashback, or by returning them to your hand like dredge).

Sun, 2012-04-01 15:50
K1L1
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Hunger - It eats you! Awesome! The flavor is right on. The only thing that I fault that I can point out is how fast it eats you. Assuming it attacks every turn it can, here's how fast you will be consumed. EOT status in is parenthesis.

  • Turn 1 -- 2 damage to you (18 life, 4/4)
  • Turn 2 -- Attack, 4 +1/+1 counters, 8 damage to you (10 life, 16/16)
  • Turn 3 -- Attack, 16 +1/+1 counters, 32 damage to you (-22 life, 64/64)

You get 1 swing with a 32/32 which is pretty anti-climactic for dieing that same turn. I would recommend giving it trample.

Tortured Ghoul 2 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Creature - Spirit Blue mana symbol
Flying
Possess Black mana symbol (You may cast this card from your graveyard for its possess cost. If you do, put it onto the battlefield attached to target permanent. That permanent is a copy of this card.)
2/2

Next: Make a blue land destruction spell.

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Sun, 2012-04-01 15:53
pang4
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Hunger: Beautiful card, and a hard chalenge to boot. I would live to see a dual-color incarnation cycle, and this card would be the top of the bunch. I only miss trample on him, but that's trivial. 9/10

Empowered Bolt 1 mana symbolRed mana symbol
Instant Uncommon
~ deals 3 damage to target creature or player.
Reflow (Whenever you cast a spell with the same name as ~, you may cast ~ from your graveyard.)

Next challenge: Make a creature that despises magic (and no "protection from wizards" or "protection from sorceries" - be original on this one.)

Furthermore, I believe Carthage should be destroyed.

Sun, 2012-04-01 17:05
Sensei Le Roof
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Strange sample turns you have where combat comes before upkeep. Also, "dieing" is not a word and I'm sick of seeing it.
The way Hunger would really work:

Turn X: Cast Hunger, life goes on
Turn X+1: (Upkeep) It hits you for 2, becoming a 4/4 and leaving you with 18
(Combat) It hits whatever for 4, becoming an 8/8
Turn X+2: (U) It smacks you for 8, becoming a 16/16 and leaving you with a sad, sad 10
(C) It deals 16 to something that isn't the defender if he has a brain in his head, becoming a 32/32
Turn X+3: (U) It beats you upside the head for 32 and you die right then. No combat this turn so being a 64/64 means nothing.

Tortured Ghoul: Would be a decent card (if undercosted) without possess, which doesn't actually work. The Comp Rules have a list of what can be attached to stuff, and "creature" is not among them. 4/10

Calamitous Flood
3 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Sorcery
Destroy target land.
Legends tell of a great storm, so massive that it was called the Final Cleansing.

Challenge: Give me a card that can help to win if used right in a normal game, but would paint a huge bull's eye on you in multiplayer.

Online dictionaries abound. It's time to start using them.

Sun, 2012-04-01 17:40
Styrofoamking
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Flood - very balanced. Personally, I'd have liked to see some blue flavor in there (terraforms / polymorphs it into a different land card, targets mountains, etc), but the cost makes it fair. 9/10

Mana Keg 4 mana symbol
Artifact - Red mana symbol
During your upkeep, you may pay X mana symbol. If you do, add X fuse counters to Mana Keg.
4 mana symbol, Sacrifice Mana Keg: Mana Keg deals X damage to each other player, where X is equal to the number of fuse counters on Mana Keg. Use this ability only if the number of fuse counters on Mana Keg are equal or greater than the life total of target opponent.

Next: There's so much ninja-ing going on, I think that makes a good theme. Make a ninja themed card!

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Sun, 2012-04-01 18:33
Carn13
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Keg: Interesting. I guess the challenge said only to make it usable in a duel, not necessarily good, so it works there. In a multiplayer game, however, it's ridiculous. Naturalized as soon as its cast, in most groups. 8/10.

Takeshi, Invisible Hailstorm 2 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Legendary Creature-Human Ninja Red mana symbol
Ninjutsu 2 mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Hexproof
~ is unblockable.
Whenever ~ deals combat damage, exile the top card of defending player's library. Until end of turn, you may cast it.
2/2

Next: Phyrexianize a Mirran card from either Mirrodin or Scars block that hasn't already been Phyrexianized.

Sun, 2012-04-01 20:14
Kagerowrs

Takeshi, Invisible Hailstorm - Astounding. Probably isn't good to cast it without Ninjutsu. But it fits flavor of Ninja really really well. Can't fit it better. 9/10

April Fool maybe?

타락한자 벤서 3 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbol
플레인스워커 - 벤서 Mythic Rare
+2: 목표 지속물로부터 아무런 수의 아무런 카운터를 골라 다른 지속물에 이동시킨다.
-2: 목표 플레이어의 생물 에게 각각 -1/-1 카운터를 놓는다.
-7: 목표 적 플레이어는 필드에 있는 지속물들이 가지고있는 카운터의 수만큼 독 카운터를 얻는다.
<3>

Wow... Google translation was more dissapointing then I thought.
If it is really impossible to tranlsate, I will post up the english version.

Next: Make a Special Occasion Silver-bordered card Representing 2012 April Fools! (Sample for Special Occasion would be Gifts Given, Fruitcake Elemental, ect.)

Sun, 2012-04-01 20:59
Utheraptor
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타락한자 벤서 - Nice. The [-1] could probably be too powerful, but I like it. 8/10

Very Long and Tasty Dinner White mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbolRed mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Enchantment Snow mana symbol

Whenever a creature attacks,return it to the battlefield tapped and attacking, then it loses all abilities, then turn it face up, then flip it, then transform it.
"No, Norrin, you'll get the presents after dinner!"

Get it?

NEXT:
Give a brand new version of one of the five Kamigawa Dragons!

Shoot for the Moon. Even if you miss, you will land among the stars.
Orbis Renaissance community set

Sun, 2012-04-01 21:13
Kagerowrs

@Utheraptor - Its -2. Since he translated, I will post english version.

Venser, Corrupted 3 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Planeswalker - Venser Mythic Rare
+2: Move any amount of any counter from target permanent to another target permanent.
-2: Put a -1/-1 counter on each creature target player controls.
-7: Target opponent gets a poison counter for each counter on permanent on the battlefield.
<3>

- Based on Alternate universe that Venser traded his heart with Karn's heart (to restore him) which slowly turned him onto Phyrexian (after his death), and from spark obtained from former heart of Xantcha - He returned to life. As most dangerous Phyrexian next to Yawgmoth. With his ability to teleport... Even the corruption it self.

Sun, 2012-04-01 22:35
Zuty
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Very Long and Tasty Dinner - I don't get it actually :/ ... So the creature attacks, you return it to the BF (where was it returned from?) tapped and attacking (so it's attacking again?) It loses all it's abilities, then turn it face up (it wasn't already?), then flip it (so it's upside down now?), and finally transform it. ... Sorry, I just don't get the joke or how it relates to April Fools day. I could be missing something, so I'll give you a 10/10 anyway.

Kokusho, the Cursed Whelp Black mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Blue mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Dragon Spirit
Flying
When ~ dies, each opponent loses 1 life. You gain life equal to the life lost this way.
2/2

Next : I like baby dragons! Take a legendary dragon and make a "baby" card for it. Must be uncommon and embody it's future self in some way.

~Zuty

Sun, 2012-04-01 22:54
Kagerowrs

@Zuty - its a joke about opening gift I think, well. I gave Holiday Promo as example, so I am the one to blame.

Mon, 2012-04-02 15:23
Utheraptor
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@Kagerowrs - Oh, my fault. If it is [-2], then I guess that it is fine.
@Zuty, kagerowrs - It is multiple jokes combined in one. First, even the greatest coward named Norrin of the Warry should have holiday sometime. Just imagine him as a little child! It also shows up several mechanics which includes physical manipulation with the card (morph, Kamigawa's flippers, Innistrad's transformers). Also it covers opening of the present, just as kagerowrs said.
Also, I am glad that I get 10/10, but if you didn't get it, do not give me that much points, because I am obviously doing something wrong.

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Mon, 2012-04-02 18:26
Balaam
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Kokusho - I was thinking he intended for a new dragon for the cycle. But, I guess this works. However, it has no reason for being legendary. It's ability is far from powerful enough to warrant being limited to a only having one out at a time. 7/10.

Devastator Whelp 3 mana symbolRed mana symbol
Creature - Dragon Uncommon
Flying
Sacrifice ~: Destroy target basic land.
3/2

Next - Make a card that gives the player a sense of a hive mind. Do not make a sliver.

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Mon, 2012-04-02 21:52
Styrofoamking
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Devatator Whelp - Ah, a flying Barbarian Riftcutter. I really like, and fits the dragon theme beautifully.

Eumidian Egg Tender Red/green mana symbolRed/green mana symbolRed/green mana symbol
Creature - Insect
Hive Mind - Insect (Whenever a source deals damage to another Insect you control, it deals that much damage to Eumidian Egg Tender.)
Whenever Eumidian Egg Tender is dealt damage, you may put that many 1/1 green Insect creature tokens onto the battlefield.
1/3

Next: There are tons of cards with "Urza's ____". http://magiccards.info/query?q=Urza%27s&v=card&s=cname
Create one more! Most be colorless, and bonus points if it interacts with existing ones.

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Tue, 2012-04-03 02:56
Zuty
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Eumidian Egg Tender - I LOVE THESE CARDS! Saber Ants is one of my favorite cards because of it's interaction with cards like Fatal Attraction or board wide damage. The hive-mind ability fits perfect. 10/10

Urza's Power Generator 2 mana symbol
Blue mana symbol
Artifact
Whenever you tap a land for colorless mana, add 1 mana symbol to your mana pool.

I don't really think I need to add more here ... I bopped the cost from 6 to 4 ... I wanted an interaction with the Urza Land cycle ... This will work with it without specifically calling it out.

Next: Make a land that has one of the land types and can normally be tapped for it, but can also be tapped for at the most two other colors (IE. Murmuring Bosk)

~Zuty

Tue, 2012-04-03 04:54
eomund
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Urza's Power Generator - I think you did an excellent job of your goal ... this interacts nicely the Urza's land cycle without calling out by name. The cost and rarity also seem good; my only complaint would be that the name feels too close to Urza's Power Plant. 9.5/10

Wet Season Marsh
Land - Swamp Rare
Whenever you tap CARDNAME for mana, transform CARDNAME.
//////
Dry Season Field
Land - Plains Rare
Whenever you tap CARDNAME for mana, transform CARDNAME.

Next, make a card using abilities from the past that have never been paired together, but synergize well (like Marshaling Cry).

Tue, 2012-04-03 05:07
Inanimate
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eomund: Interesting card, I've seen a few variations of it. It seems to be safe, and is pretty clever. 8/10!

Taunting Champion 1 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Creature - Human Warrior Uncommon
Battle cry, provoke
2/2
His sharp tongue is backed by a sharp blade.

Next: That was a fun challenge! How about you do it again? Make a card with two abilities that have never been paired together, but work well when combined!

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