Card of the Week Contest #193: The weather sure is nice today..

Mon, 2017-11-06 17:26
Daij_Djan
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Welcome to the Card of the Week Contest! To participate in this Contest you'll have to design a card along the contest guidelines and throw it into the arena with other competitors' entries! At the end of each week, a winner will be determined by forum poll. The winner's card will be rendered and featured on the Welcome page, and the winner decides the challenge for the next week's Contest!

Here we go, competitors: our hundred and ninety-third challenge!


The winner of the "Greatness Beyond Words" poll was ColinBeck with...

As sadly neither our winner nor our runner-up responded in time, I'm using a backup challenge for this week:

I wrote:
Today, the world's biggest UNO world climate conference starts here in Germany. Sadly my home country recently lost quite a bit of its momentum, the US isn't on board anymore anyway, and now China tries to speed up things (if only to sell their e-cars Winking smiley ).

Still, I didn't intend to get too political here. Your challenge for this week is: Design a card inspired by the climate or the weather! It can be about climate protection, change or manipulation, specific weather phenomenons, or whatever you can think of. Be creative and have fun!

To increase your chances of winning and to also make creating the poll easier on whomever is doing so, please try to use a render.
Additionally, please try to keep your entry edits all in one post - if you need to change it you can put your old entry in a spoiler marked "Old entry" and leave the newest rendition to be seen. Just use the edit button in the bottom/right of your original post.

And now, time to begin the challenge!

Best of luck, competitors!

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Tue, 2017-11-07 21:44
Asthanius
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Diamond Dust 2 mana symbolWhite mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Sorcery Rare
You gain X life and draw X cards, where X is the number of snow creatures you control.
Forecast — White mana symbolBlue mana symbol, Reveal Diamond Dust from your hand: Put an ice counter on target creature. It becomes snow. (Activate this ability only during your upkeep and only once each turn.)

The Empress’s Gift is a sure sign of her love.

"Diamond dust is a ground-level cloud composed of tiny ice crystals."

EDIT: Was uncommon, now rare.

Mon, 2017-11-06 19:11
Malsey
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Oh look at that a pollution flavored card but with magic. c:

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Mon, 2017-11-06 19:48
BurningCreator
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Mon, 2017-11-06 23:57
Aarhg
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Thunderplume X mana symbolX mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Creature - Elemental Bird Mythic Rare
Flying, lifelink
When Thunderplume enters the battlefield, it deals X damage to each creature without flying.
With a distant rumble and an echoing screech, blue skies turn black, and long talons of lightning tear into the earth.
4/4

Tue, 2017-11-07 00:05
Gateways7

inspired by ixalan, i bring to you: a card about storms! and sun! (fortunately, it doesn't have storm.)

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Stormy Seas 3 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Enchantment
Flash
When ~ enters the battlefield, exile all attacking and blocking creatures.
1 mana symbolBlue/black mana symbol: Exile target creature you control and target creature you don't control. If you've activated this ability three times this turn, transform ~.
//
Sun-Dappled Banks
Land
Tap symbol: Add Green mana symbol or Blue mana symbol to your mana pool.
1 mana symbolGreen mana symbolBlue mana symbol, Tap symbol: You may cast a creature spell exiled by Stormy Seas without paying its mana cost.

RENDER:

Spoiler:
*Snip*
(sorry that this isn't normal double-face frame, but my dtf isn't working right on my computer so i just decided to put the two halves next to each other.)

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Tue, 2017-11-07 00:22
kinotherapy
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One for my fellow Britfriends who were extremely confused three weeks ago today, to wake up one Monday morning to see a yellow sky with a red sun. (We don't get many exciting natural disasters or bizarre phenomena, so this was a big deal!)

Crimson Eclipse 2 mana symbolRed mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Instant Rare
If a creature would deal damage to another permanent or player this turn, it deals that damage to itself instead.
The Akroans choose the dates of their battles with care, watching the sky for omens from the gods. Some of those omens are more conspicuous than others.

Tied with some flavour about something I read in like Year 10 about Spartans refusing to fight one day because of the moon or something.

Tue, 2017-11-07 01:51
Quazer Flame

Cookie for whoever comes up with the kind of preconstructed Archenemy deck this would come with if it were real!

Fri, 2017-11-10 21:16
spazlaz

old

Tue, 2017-11-07 14:58
TheBrokenUrn
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Stormbolt 1 mana symbolRed mana symbol
Instant Common
~ deals 3 damage to target creature or player.
EDITLOG
EDIT #1: Changed the name of the card.

Will think of something later.

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Tue, 2017-11-07 03:10
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Tue, 2017-11-07 03:31
ColinBeck
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Harrow is already good. Don't make an objectively better Harrow. It would probably be pushed if it obit searched for basics, but as it is, stirred/action is buuuuuuuuusted. Nontyped land tutor should be rare, never put into the battlefield and certainly not untapped. I'm sorry I'm being strong opinioned I'm just imagining modern Tron with this card and shuddering.

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Tue, 2017-11-07 03:37
WindyDelcarlo
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@theBrokenUrn: Lightning Storm. Also Lightning Strike.

Tue, 2017-11-07 03:58
Yoshi
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@Colin: To be fair, objectively better isn't accurate (Harrow has a color density of one, whereas this has a color density of two, which might be relevant when trying to mana fix). Still a bit pushed (especially for an Aftermath card) and I'd cost that at 2 mana symbolGreen mana symbolGreen mana symbol, probably.

Hail to the King 1 mana symbolWhite mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Instant Uncommon
Tap up to three target creatures.
Then, if you're already the monarch, those creatures don't untap during their controller's next untap steps. Otherwise, you become the monarch.

Hail refers to the weather phenomenon.

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Tue, 2017-11-07 10:43
thehuw
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Quick feedback wall for everyone thus far.

Asthanius: I don't much care for snow as a mechanic, but this seems like a pretty strong execution of it nonetheless. I don't know if it lives at uncommon, though. The second ability looks rare to me due to memory considerations and self-fueling (akin to Pride of the Clouds).

Malsey: This is probably too powerful. If storm can resolve one of these on turn three, it doesn't need its rituals and can rely solely on card draw and finishers - which could include just drawing and cantripping through your entire deck and winning off Helix Pinnacle or something. Yes, it's technically symmetrical, but there's no guarantee that your opponent will be playing enough instants and sorceries to make it worth their while, or able to spend the extra mana before it dissipates between phases.

BurningCreator: Hey, another instant and sorcery based catastrophe! This effect is a lot like Wastes of Muetar's irradiate, a fairly potent mechanic that was absolute hell to play against if your opponent could do it to you. With that in mind, this just stops way too many decks from actually playing Magic for my taste, a little bit like a Blood Moon. Sure, it can be removed, but only two out of five colors can deal with enchantments.

Aarhg: Clever. The double-X probably keeps this reasonable, but, awkwardly, makes it more compelling to cast as just a 4/4 lifelinking flyer for four, which is a damn good deal.

Gateways7: The colors are a bit all over the place. Stormy Seas' ETB ability is a white effect (it's the "attacking and blocking" that makes it that instead of black), and the activated ability is probably roughly White/black mana symbol (and a touch powerful). I also don't see a legitimate reason for the land to make different colors? It's flavorful, but mechanically it makes the card feel rather messy.

kinotherapy: I almost feel contractually obliged to give this my vote because of the goddamn red sun. A friend of mine apparently woke up really late that day, once the sky had gotten very, very dark, and thought the apocalypse had started without him. The card itself is a really interesting take on a combat-based wrath, and seems appropriately costed compared to something like Wave of Reckoning. (Also, I'm currently studying ancient warfare and I can confirm that the Spartans did this kind of thing all the time, even during the Persian invasion of Greece - much to the irritation of their allies.)

Quazer Flame: Judging scheme cards is very, very difficult, but this one looks a tad strong, being a mass Sudden Disappearance that'll sometimes let you steal some of the heroes' stuff. Awesome villainous quote, but I wonder if the Disappearance effect or the randomize-control effect might be strong enough on its own.

spazlaz: Somehow this is even more oops-I-win than most miracle cards. It's more or less the infamous Upheaval/Psychatog combo without having to reach nine mana, or even necessarily use a Psychatog. I could see this working if it were nonland permanents. As-is, if you can resolve something biggish and miracle this, you're more or less guaranteed to beat your opponent down before they can rebuild their board state.

TheBrokenUrn: This is Lightning Strike. Lightning Strike is a fine card, but I think you would fare better in a custom card competition by designing a card that is not Lightning Strike.

Viriss: Choking back my instinctive hatred of the aftermath frame, this is a cute, clean design which, though it's lighter on synergy between its halves than some aftermath cards, still feels coherent enough. I agree with the commentary that it probably wants a cost increase on the front half, or maybe a reduction to sorcery speed, to stop it from outclassing the very potent Harrow so easily.

Yoshi: I don't think this needs the word "already". Otherwise... well, the pun made me groan, but it wasn't necessarily a bad groan.

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Tue, 2017-11-07 17:32
Angelus_Reprobi
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Ramunap Sandstorm [2 mana symbolRed mana symbolGreen mana symbol]
Sorcery Rare
Destroy target land.
~ deals 3 damage to each creature.

Tue, 2017-11-07 19:16
sdfkjgh
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Here's one that I actually got some feedback on from Tom LaPille:

Acidic Fog Black mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Instant
Choose one—
• Destroy target nonartifact creature.
• Prevent all combat damage that would be dealt this turn.
Entwine 3 mana symbol (Choose both if you pay the entwine cost.)

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Tue, 2017-11-07 21:14
Inverness
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Render to come.

Mirran Alarmist Black/green mana symbol
Creature - Human Advisor Uncommon
At the beginning of each player’s upkeep, that player loses life equal to the number of artifacts he or she controls. You gain that much life.
“In order to save our atmosphere, all Mirrans will have to buy darksteel equity credits!”
1/2

Tue, 2017-11-07 21:46
Asthanius
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@thehuw: Yeah, I wasn't entirely certain because the counters, in my view, negated a lot of the memory issues, and I also saw it as a guiding uncommon for draft (i.e. the White/Blue archetype is snow creatures), but I agree that it also works at rare, especially if other things take advantage of ice counters.

Tue, 2017-11-07 23:47
Aarhg
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@thehuw's comment on my card: It is a good deal to simply cast it for Red mana symbolRed mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbol, but if you can effectively wipe all of your opponents' creatures out and gain a bunch of life, paying a bit extra can definitely be worth it, but it also comes down to which format it's played in.
I will say though, a 4/4 flyer with upside for four mana is not unreasonably good. In white there's Indomitable Archangel and in red there's Bloodsworn Steward to mention a couple, but both of these are easier to cast than Thunderplume. I think the restrictive mana cost on the card keeps a decent balance on that part. Thanks for the feedback! A happy smile

@All: Now...

I have learned that my card apparently does not work Stick out your tongue. When the X is a part of the card's casting cost, it can't connect to an ETB ability. I have therefore made two possible fixed versions - one that uses kicker and one that uses multikicker. They're pretty much identical in function, but I'd like to know which version you guys prefer. Maybe I should stick with the original, which would mean the game rules would need a slight change in some way. Or if you have an idea for another way to make it work, I'd love to hear it.

Kicker version

Multikicker version

Wed, 2017-11-08 00:53
Gateways7

wait, quick question. am i allowed to change my card based on other people's advice?

Wed, 2017-11-08 00:57
Aarhg
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Oh yea, absolutely. A happy smile

Wed, 2017-11-08 01:25
kinotherapy
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@thehuw: Thanks! It's lovely to receive warm feedback like that, even if it's mostly about the flavour (looks like my plan to secure to UK vote worked >:])

I looked up what I was talking about and sure it enough it was the Battle of Marathon I was thinking of; we only covered Sparta in class and not the rest of Greece, so all I really know about that battle is Persian invaders and irritated Athenians lol. (Also I'm not sure how well the flavour actually translates to Theros lore, but it was the most straightforward fit)

@Aarhg: I like the multikicker personally, though the costs look a little odd. Now that it's not an XX cost spell, perhaps you could change the casting cost 2 mana symbolRed mana symbolWhite mana symbol and the kicker into Red mana symbolWhite mana symbol? I feel like that would make it look cleaner, though it would also leave the body a little strong..

Also if you're looking for alternatives, you could consider putting the mana payment into the etb itself, as in Rise of the Hobgoblins. Not that different to kicker but I just thought I'd make the suggestion

Wed, 2017-11-08 01:46
thehuw
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I mean, Journey into Nyx has a pretty clear Thermopylae homage in Desperate Stand, so I think a Marathon reference fits right in. Certainly better than a few things that were in the actual set. (coughkrakenscough)

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Wed, 2017-11-08 03:11
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@Aarhg: You can also make it a cast trigger.

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Fri, 2017-11-10 01:34
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Terraform 2 mana symbolGreen mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Sorcery Mythic Rare
Exile all lands. Each player may search their library for up to X basic lands, where X is the number of lands they controlled that were exiled this way, and puts them onto the battlefield. Each player that searched their library this way shuffles their library. Exile ~.

The intention is that it gets lands out of your deck and gets the mana back and in some situations at a profit, however it does slowly deplete your land reserves, and it can also get rid of annoying special lands though if they have basics in their deck it should destroy them. I don't know about the cost and the phrasing seems dubious.

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Wed, 2017-11-08 07:29
Flo00
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Grywin, Storm Spirit 6 mana symbolGreen mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Spirit Rare
Flying
1 mana symbolGreen mana symbol: Grywin, Storm Spirit loses flying until end of turn.
Green mana symbol: Grywin deals 1 damage to each creature with flying.
7/2

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Wed, 2017-11-08 08:01
Flo00
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@Malsey: This looks like it can go out of hand faster than Mizzix.

@Gateways7: This is way too cheap for all the exiling it does. Maybe make it exile until ~ leaves the battlefield? I still think that would make the second ability way too cheap.
How about the following: The second ability cost 4 or 5 mana and checks how many cards are exiled with ~. And transforms at a certain value.
The different colored backside is a little confusing but very flavourful.
If you tell me where you got the pictures, I could make you a transform render.

@Inverness: How about each other player's upkeep? I know it's a difference in THG, I still think it weird to lose life then get it back the same moment.

@bazzboda: This is a green From the Ashes.

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Wed, 2017-11-08 13:44
Inverness
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Flo00:
I appreciate the comment, and I thought about it as I was designing the card. The reason I kept it, ultimately, is that I wanted a card that was inherently hypocritical. The trigger will drain each player equally, but since you gain the life, your trigger doesn't actually hurt you. The idea being that the alarmist can use artifacts, but no one else.

That said, I won't rule out what you suggested. It is a bit awkward for an ability. :/

Wed, 2017-11-08 16:23
Wapulatus
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Rain of Frogs 1 mana symbolBlack mana symbol

Sorcery Uncommon

Put a -1/-1 counter on each creature you don't control, then each opponent creates a 1/1 green Frog creature token with deathtouch.

"It's amazing what the winds can pick up, but it's even more amazing seeing them explode on people's heads."
- Hapatra, Vizier of Poisons

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Sun, 2017-11-12 17:13
Heads vs Tails
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Renna, Selhoff Alchemist 2 mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Human Wizard Mythic Rare
Prowess
When ~ enters the battlefield, instant and sorcery spells you cast this turn have storm.
3/3
"Prepare the voltaic amplifiers, tonight Nephalia will be struck by a storm the likes it has never seen!"

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Sun, 2017-11-12 17:58
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i think this works.

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Sat, 2017-11-11 00:57
bazzboda

@Touhoufanatic, this would likely read as "At the beginning of each players upkeep, put a -1/-1 counter on each creature, and each player gets a poison counter."

@Heads vs Tails, it would be cool if this had haste so it could benefit from its own storm.

@Aarhg, could you keep the X in the mana cost, and give it an "as enters the battlefield" effect like Altered Ego has?

@Flo00, regarding your comment on my card, it is different in that it will hit all lands almost guaranteeing the mana spent to cast it back, plus sometimes more, as well as getting that many lands out of your deck. So lets say you have 5 lands, you cast a one drop and then this, then you get 5 mana back and cast Changeling Titan or one of the 5 mana exort creatures turning the one drop that your opponent might otherwise be able to remove into something more useful. It may not be that useful or different but it is at least a bit more.
I had wanted it to be for three mana, but I am unsure if that is too much.

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Fri, 2017-11-10 20:40
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Torrential Storm 1 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Instant Uncommon
Creatures target player controls get -2/-0 until end of turn.
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Fri, 2017-11-10 21:15
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Sat, 2017-11-11 20:29
sdfkjgh
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@spazlaz: Mass evoke, anyone? Very nice card!

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Sat, 2017-11-11 20:56
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Quote:
@spazlaz: Mass evoke, anyone? Very nice card!

Funny. I immediately thought about using it to bring Indestructible creatures on the field. But sure, that works too.

My colors: Freedom (Red mana symbol) through Knowledge (Blue mana symbol) and Organization (White mana symbol).

Sat, 2017-11-11 22:57
Daij_Djan
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Trying to do something a bit weird (so feedback is appreciated):

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Sun, 2017-11-12 03:18
Mahx Michael
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Here is my entry: Is it undercosted?

How does Seasonal Turmoil work
Seasonal Turmoil is a psaudo ability that can only appear on legendary permanent cards. It has a triggered ability that trigger whenever the card itself or another permanent with Seasonal Turmoil enters the battlefield under your control.

Sun, 2017-11-12 06:15
Sade612
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Hello everybody! Long time lurker first time poster.

It's a little faster than blood moon for game 2 against storm. I would probably cost it at 3R or 4R without upkeep, but I find cumulative upkeep spiraling out of control thematically appropriate.

Sun, 2017-11-12 08:12
Gorgonzola
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@Sade612: I like this card very much! Could be really useful in burn and RDW me thinks.

I just dont understand why people pay thousands for a piece of cardboard.
Why just don't play some casual? Gee, it isn't even fun to play with, and especially against.

Sun, 2017-11-12 08:51
Daij_Djan
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@Mahx: Pseudo abilities are like flavour text - they have no mechanical meaning and cannot be referred to..

Cost is most likely fine

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Sun, 2017-11-12 11:48
Pixi-Rex
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Entry

Sun, 2017-11-12 22:34
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@Daij: Not bad. It's not something that can be abused (unless you have Propheteffects), and even then, it's still relatively fair.

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Sun, 2017-11-12 22:47
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It's Raining Men 4 mana symbolWhite mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Sorcery Rare
Return all creatures to their owners' hands. For each creature returned to your hand this way, create a 1/1 white Human creature token.
Hallelujah.

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Mon, 2017-11-13 02:06
Tarvoc
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@jacqui-pup: If you can find a fitting piece of artwork for that, it has my vote.

My colors: Freedom (Red mana symbol) through Knowledge (Blue mana symbol) and Organization (White mana symbol).

Mon, 2017-11-13 02:12
thehuw
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Ominous Fog 2 mana symbolGreen mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Instant Rare
Prevent all combat damage that would be dealt to you this turn. At the beginning of the next end step, you may put a green creature card from your hand with power X or less onto the battlefield, where X is the amount of damage prevented this way.
Some mists are best left unexplored.

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Mon, 2017-11-13 02:20
Asthanius
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@thehuw: Small nitpick- the wording should be "you may put a green creature card with power X or less from your hand onto the battlefield"

Mon, 2017-11-13 09:56
Daij_Djan
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This thread is now closed, the poll can be found here.

And here's the next challenge!

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