Card of the Week Contest #175: Be Slightly Evil

Mon, 2017-07-03 09:22
Daij_Djan
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Welcome to the Card of the Week Contest! To participate in this Contest you'll have to design a card along the contest guidelines and throw it into the arena with other competitors' entries! At the end of each week, a winner will be determined by forum poll. The winner's card will be rendered and featured on the Welcome page, and the winner decides the challenge for the next week's Contest!

Here we go, competitors: our hundred and seventy-fifth challenge!


The winner of the "Conspiracy Theory" poll was marioware2 with...

And the challenge issued by our winner was...

marioware2 wrote:
Across Magic's history, there have been plenty of great villains, including but not limited to the Eldrazi, the Phyrexians, and most recently Nicol Bolas. In their honor, design a card that is either a villain or based on a villain. This could be an individual who is a villain, a member of a group of villains, a henchman of a villain - anything you want, as long as it's at least slightly evil!

To increase your chances of winning and to also make creating the poll easier on whomever is doing so, please try to use a render.
Additionally, please try to keep your entry edits all in one post - if you need to change it you can put your old entry in a spoiler marked "Old entry" and leave the newest rendition to be seen. Just use the edit button in the bottom/right of your original post.

And now, time to begin the challenge!

Best of luck, competitors!

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Mon, 2017-07-03 14:58
fluffyDeathbringer
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Sower of Sin 1 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Creature - Human Rare
At the beginning of each player's upkeep, that player draws a card and loses 1 life.
"The only good you should think of is how good you can feel."
2/1

Phyrexian Arena and Dark Confidant, now in one group-huggy package.

Remind yourself that overconfidence is a slow and insidious killer.

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Wed, 2017-07-05 05:11
sdfkjgh
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http://magic.wizards.com/en/articles/archive/braincat-2008-03-04

Thanks Inverness

Braincutter Phyrexian Black ManaPhyrexian Black ManaBlack mana symbol
Creature--Horror Uncommon
When Braincutter enters the battlefield, target player reveals his or her hand. You choose a nonland card from it. That player discards that card. You lose 2 life.
2/2

Braincutter Phyrexian Black ManaBlack mana symbol
Creature--Horror Uncommon
When Braincutter enters the battlefield, target player reveals his or her hand. You choose a nonland card from it. That player discards that card. You lose 2 life.
1/1

I can easily imagine this scenario being applied here:

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Mon, 2017-07-03 20:22
Aarhg
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I went with a green card, trying to show the color's innate dislike of the artificial in a more aggressive manner.

Clawmother Uani 3 mana symbolGreen mana symbolGreen mana symbolGreen mana symbol
Legendary Creature - Cat Shaman Mythic Rare
Clawmother Uani can't be countered.
At the beginning of each player’s end step, that player sacrifices an artifact. If he or she can’t, create a 2/2 green Cat Warrior creature token with “Creatures with power less than this creature’s power can’t block it.”
“We shall tear their beloved civilization to pieces and show them the way of the wild.”

Mon, 2017-07-03 21:04
Daij_Djan
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It's been five weeks since I last entered a common - time to change that!

I HATE PHOTOBUCKET

A flavorful combination of abilities that in the end mostly play out like a simple Ogre Sentry - except when they don't Winking smiley

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Mon, 2017-07-03 21:21
Neottolemo
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@Daij: The flying hate makes that seem a bit Green mana symbol to me.

Mon, 2017-07-03 21:23
Daij_Djan
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But it's not really flying hate imho - and doing stuff only to non-flying creatures is a typically red approach. Or is this just me?

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Mon, 2017-07-03 21:29
jacqui-pup
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Shouldn't thwomps be artifact creatures? They are stone

@sdfkjgh: This looks like something someone would submit to WhyMTGCardsmith. Can this cost something other than Phyrexian Black ManaBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol???

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Mon, 2017-07-03 21:33
Neottolemo
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Sorry Daij, I read that as 'with flying'. ...Why does it have flying and defender but can't block creatures with flying? Doesn't that basically equal being a defender and not having flying?

Thu, 2017-07-06 03:14
spazlaz

old

I really like the chosen one mechanic here

Tue, 2017-07-04 02:51
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alrighty then, an angry demon out to get artificiers!!
feedback welcome

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Tue, 2017-07-04 02:56
jacqui-pup
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@spazlaz: Three words, baby: fail to find.

@Aargh: Missed this earlier. Pretty cool. Weird that the tokens can't be blocked but not the queen herself?

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Tue, 2017-07-04 03:06
sdfkjgh
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@jacqui: The whole point is it's a Thoughtseize onna stick that asks the question, "How much life are you willing to pay for me?" If you want a Gray Ogre with upside, well, you got it. If you want a super-hatebear, you got that too, but it's gonna be a bit painful. And if you want a Thoughtseize with a 2/2 attached, then you'll be taking 6, my friend.

I just lucked out in finding some art that kinda calls back to Mindslicer.

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Tue, 2017-07-04 17:30
Inverness
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Feedback time! Haven't done one of these in a while, sorry guys.

sdfkjgh:

I think this card could be fair if it costed 2 mana symbolPhyrexian Black ManaPhyrexian Black Mana. As it is now, this is absolutely overpowered in a deck based around Death's Shadow. On turn 1, assuming an average draw of 1 of these, two fetches/shocklands, a thoughtseize, a street wraith, and a death's shadow, you can lose 15 life by the time turn 2 comes around. That's enough to make Death's Shadow an 8/8 on turn two, and you already have a 2/2 from this guy.

Like I said, I think this guy needs to have 2 mana symbol in the cost. It cleans up the design and keeps this from being a disgusting turn 1 play in a death's shadow deck.

aargh:

Seems good! Villainous green at its finest, I think.

Daij:

As others have said, I think this is more complexity than the flavor is worth, especially for a common.

spazlaz:

Someone else mentioned this, but you can fail to find a card in your search. You should make it "target opponent searches his or her library...", so that it works as intended. Also, the second ability should be worded "Activate this ability only if an opponent controls the chosen one."

EDIT: I believe I misunderstood what the second ability was meant to do. If you meant for the ability to be able to activate all the time, then when the chosen one is in play you can't activate it, I would word it as: "You may not activate this ability if an opponent controls the chosen one."

touhou:

I think you can have first strike be written without the capital F. Other than that, seems fine. You may want to make his attack trigger a "you may" ability, since right now you'd have to destroy your own artifact or enchantment if you had one when he attacked. Which, I suppose, could be more flavorful if you wanted to spin it that way.

Tue, 2017-07-04 14:55
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Don't I get one? A sad 'frowny'

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Tue, 2017-07-04 15:21
thehuw
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What's a villain without a treacherous dirtbag of an advisor?

Scheming Sycophant Black mana symbol
Creature - Human Advisor Rare
Menace
Black mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol, Sacrifice a black legendary creature: Draw three cards and put three +1/+1 counters on Scheming Sycophant.
"I am yours to command, my lord, for as long as you live."

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Tue, 2017-07-04 17:40
Inverness
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fluffy:

I'm sorry! I didn't see that sandwiched in there between the big card post and the challenge. I wasn't trying to ignore you or anything.

As for the card, I think it's very straightforward. It could be very good in a forced-draw deck, maybe a grixis Fevered Visions kind of deck. I like it! Has potential for build-around, but is also just good on its own.

EDIT: I just had a fun idea that I figured I'd suggest. You could add a clause at the end of the ability: "Then, if that player is an opponent, you gain 1 life." So it has the flavor of stealing the life from your opponents for you to use. It does mean that you'd be getting a serious advantage out of the card, since you effectively don't lose life from it, but I figured it could be interesting for flavor and for multiplayer, which seemed to be your target.

thehuw:

Very clever! I love the flavor here. One of the best entries so far.

Tue, 2017-07-04 17:34
sdfkjgh
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@Inverness: A fair point, but with 2 mana symbolPhyrexian Black ManaPhyrexian Black Mana, you lose the option of a straight up cost analogue to Thoughtseize. Also, Death's Shadow is just one archetype, and it's just one archetype at this moment in time. True, it's possibly the most dominant archetype right now, but there are answers, like Condemn. But I'll consider it.

@huw: I gotta admit, your entry is prolly gonna win. I remember when Korlash, Heir to Blackblade was spoiled, a friend of mine told me he wanted to build a deck around it that heavily abused Raise Dead. Your card looks like it could slot right in that deck easily.

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Tue, 2017-07-04 17:35
Inverness
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sdfkjgh:

Yeah, I know how you feel. You want the card to be compared to Thoughtseize, and it doesn't work as well if the mana cost isn't similar. While I don't necessarily like mixing Phyrexian and normal mana, it might be doable if you lower the creature's stats to 1/1 and drop one of the black phyrexian symbols (for a total cost of Phyrexian Black ManaBlack mana symbol, with a 1/1 body and the same effect).

Tue, 2017-07-04 17:51
Inverness
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Alright, here's my entry for this one:

Tue, 2017-07-04 17:59
Asthanius
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@inverness: This currently doesn't work the way you want it to. Right now, if you had 9 poison counters and cast a spell, you wouldn't meet the requirements of the second half, and would just lose the game. It doesn't even work if you'd get multiple poison counters, as it'll check, see you have 9 counters, then you gain 2, and immediately go to 11 and lose. You want it to say "If you have 10 or more poison counters and would lose the game, you win the game instead."

Wed, 2017-07-05 05:08
sdfkjgh
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@Inverness: Went with your suggestion in original post. You've mentioned not liking mixing phyrexian mana and regular mana, but would you admit that Dismember should've been Phyrexian Black ManaPhyrexian Black ManaBlack mana symbol instead?

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Wed, 2017-07-05 08:00
Neottolemo
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Dismember shouldn't have had phyrexian mana in its cost at all...

Wed, 2017-07-05 09:19
thehuw
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No card should have Phyrexian mana in its cost. It's a terrible mechanic and I hope both design and development are ashamed of it - development for making a mechanic entirely based around letting mono-green decks cast black removal spells, and design for apparently turning in something even worse that needed replacing.

Quite aside from its badness as a mechanic, though, I can't think of a single thing in Magic that's had a worse impact on custom design as a whole. I don't know whether it's down to the fact it looks cool, or because its nature as a mana symbol rather than a keyword means people don't consider it a real mechanic, but it's everywhere, and it sucks. People use it as <redacted> seasoning; 90% of the designs that use it don't need it.

With this design in particular, it only makes the Phyrexian component work by adding a normal colored symbol. Yep, the only thing that makes this infectious garbage fire of a mechanic reasonable is combining it with the thing it's supposed to replace.

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Wed, 2017-07-05 09:33
Angelic_Bovines
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This is a concept I came up with a while back: a tribe of Villains that interact with each other, the dastardly counterpoints to the Allies. Think of a heist - a gang of criminals, each with their unique skills that contribute to some wicked end.

Wed, 2017-07-05 15:48
CornFielder
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Okay, taking a first stab at my twisted lady from the Strike block I'm working on. This is my first time making a planeswalker card, so it may need some massive loyalty tweaking... But here's Dashik!

Dashik, Kosamiri Overseer3 mana symbolWhite mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Planeswalker - Dashik
Starting Loyalty 4
+1: Each player creates two 1/1 white and black Advisor creature tokens with defender.
-3: Target player loses X life and you gain X life, where X is the number of advisor creatures you control.
-8: You get an emblem with "Players can't cast non-Dashik planeswalker spells." Then, destroy all other planeswalkers.

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Wed, 2017-07-05 16:02
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Where's the villainy here?

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Wed, 2017-07-05 16:42
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Goldhill Ajucator 3 mana symbolWhite mana symbolWhite mana symbol
Creature-Human Soldier Rare
When ~ enters the battlefield, choose a creature type. Destroy all creatures of the chosen type you don't control.
On the orders of King Zelenas, the elves of Doran were split up. The strong were taken as slaves. The weak were all but massacred.
2/4

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Wed, 2017-07-05 18:20
bazzboda

Reduce to Null 1 mana symbolBlue mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Enchantment - Aura Curse Rare
Enchant player
Whenever enchanted player plays a spell, they lose 1 life and exile the top 3 cards of their library.

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Wed, 2017-07-05 18:00
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Subjugation of Will 1 mana symbolWhite mana symbolBlue mana symbol
Enchantment - Aura Rare
Enchant creature
Enchanted creature cannot attack or block. Its active abilities can't be activated and its triggered abilities don't trigger. (A triggered ability uses the words "when," "whenever," or "at.")

Blue/red mana symbol

Wed, 2017-07-05 22:07
Daij_Djan
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@jacqui-pup: Good catch, thanks.

@Neottolemo/Inverness: Seems like it's really hard to get my card as basically being Ogre Sentry.. Might replace my entry later on.

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Thu, 2017-07-06 02:29
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So when I think evil, I think endgame black unit so I tried my best to create a card that would inspire fear in the player playing against it or something like that.

Thu, 2017-07-06 03:27
spazlaz

Fixed, thanks

Thu, 2017-07-06 03:18
Asthanius
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@Spazlaz: That's way too powerful. "My evil, diabolical plan is to abuse this ability by attacking and blocking whenever I deem necessary, and also by casting spells and playing lands whenever I feel it affects the board in a way that's positive for me."

Thu, 2017-07-06 04:08
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"Mark my words. History will remember me as everything you were not, Nacht."

Lyriel, Oppressive Regent 1 mana symbolWhite mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Planeswalker - Lyriel Mythic Rare
+1 Loyalty: Target creature gets -1/-1 until end of turn. If it's tapped, it instead gets -2/-2 until end of turn.
-3 Loyalty: Tap up to X target creatures.
-7 Loyalty: You get an emblem with "Whenever a creature an opponent controls becomes tapped, put a -1/-1 counter on that creature."
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Thu, 2017-07-06 05:18
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Ragnorra, Mother of Monsters 3 mana symbolBlack mana symbolRed mana symbol

Legendary Creature - Horror Rare

At the beginning of each player’s upkeep, that player creates a 1/1 black and red Horror creature token.

At the beginning of each opponent’s end step, that player loses 1 life for each Horror he or she controls.

4/4

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Thu, 2017-07-06 05:58
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Text
Enmyti the Bitter 4 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Legendary Creature — Bird Horror Mythic Rare

When an opponent loses the game, each other opponent loses the game.

2/1


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Thu, 2017-07-06 06:57
Kagerowrs

Phyrexian Denominator Black mana symbolBlack mana symbolRed mana symbolRed mana symbol
Creature - Horror Rare
Trample
Whenever Phyrexian Denominator is dealt damage, each player discards that many cards.
5/5

Thu, 2017-07-06 10:01
Neottolemo
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Delicious render

Thu, 2017-07-06 14:27
Nhoj2307

River Poisoner 2 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Creature - Human Advisor
Rare

When ~ enters the battlefield, target a land you control. It is an Island in addition to it's other types

At the beginning of each player's upkeep, if they control an Island, put a -1/-1 counter on each creature they control.

5 mana symbolBlack mana symbolBlack mana symbol Tap symbol: Remove all -1/-1 counters from creatures you control. Gain life equal to the number of counters removed this way.

Whilst sieging, always keep the antidote close by and costly

2/5

Fri, 2017-07-07 04:52
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Henchmen 2 mana symbolBlack mana symbol
Creature - Human Rogue Uncommon
Whenever ~ deals combat damage to a player, you may put a -1/-1 counter on target creature.
"Heh heh, we got it, boss, we got it!"
2/2

Not sure if Common or Uncommon, I'd say Uncommon for "complexity".

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Thu, 2017-07-06 14:57
Heads vs Tails
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Bolas's Preparation Black mana symbol
Sorcery Rare
Add Blue mana symbolBlack mana symbolRed mana symbol to your mana pool. You lose 3 life.
Bolas's plans have spanned centuries, utilizing magic that has long since been forgotten.

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Thu, 2017-07-06 17:25
Pixi-Rex
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Entry

Thu, 2017-07-06 18:52
SilverSoul.SB
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for those not familiar

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PfYnvDL0Qcw

Changes:
Silver Border > Black border
Added flavour text

Thu, 2017-07-06 17:39
thehuw
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@SilverSoul.SB: I don't know if this really qualifies as an Un-card despite the silly flavor, since it doesn't break any of the design rules of black-border Magic. In black-border, though, I think this could win as early as turn two in mono-red with the right setup:

T1: land, Chrome Mox imprinting a red card, red one-drop creature, WAN1
T2: Tibalt

(A slower (and Modern-legal) variant could run Bomat Courier in place of the Chrome Mox.)

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Thu, 2017-07-06 17:47
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@thehuw it's more for the reference than the effect, this has been done before in unsets with Uktabi Kong and the upcoming vanilla mythic in unstable, both black border by rules but silver by idea.

Thu, 2017-07-06 18:24
Daij_Djan
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The vanilla mythic will have reminder text, so I'm not sure how it'll look in the end. MaRo stressed quite a few times how every silver bordered card should be / have been so according their effects alone..

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Thu, 2017-07-06 18:41
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@thehuw: WAN1 is a sorcery, not an enchantment.

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Thu, 2017-07-06 19:08
thehuw
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Whoops.

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Fri, 2017-07-07 04:40
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Old Entry

It's rather villainous to destroy the plans of others and I wanted something kind of evil in white.

Edit: Wasn't very fond of my first entry after looking at it again.

New one is kind of a multiplayer specific card

New Entry

Fri, 2017-07-07 00:52
Ziolang
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The contest is vague as to whether it has to be a creature card or not, so I hope this counts. Also, I don't usually do pop-culture reference cards, but I couldn't pass up the chance to do Smeagol/Gollum.


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